Hi im not that new to the ou format but i want to get better and i want to know what i can do better to improve my team

Slinky8989

The pokepaste: Test team (pokepast.es)

Breaking down my team the first pokemon i have is scizor a powerfull sweeper that if you do not take care of it, it can kill your team very easily, here is the set i use with it

Scizor @ Life Orb
Ability: Technician
Tera Type: Electric
EVs: 76 HP / 252 Atk / 180 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Swords Dance
- Bullet Punch
- Close Combat
- Tera Blast

And going with the second pokemon we have enamorus a very good special attacker and very dangerous with very good speed and incredible sp attack and as well can do a lot of damage to the enemy team or your team if you dont kill it fast, here's the set i use

Enamorus (F) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Contrary
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Modest Nature
- Moonblast
- Earth Power
- Mystical Fire
- Healing Wish

Moving on to the second mon we have my favourite pokemons, Dragapult a dragon ghost type pokemon and a very good attacker that can be use defensively, but the set i use is a attack set and a very good one in my opinion if you know when to use it

Dragapult @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Infiltrator
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Dragon Dance
- Dragon Darts
- Sucker Punch
- Phantom Force

The fourth pokemon is a very weak and strong pokemon weak vs attacks and strong causing damage, im talking of iron moth a fire poison pokemon is a very good option of another special attacker that you can use in most of the teams and with fiery dance boost and energy booster boost can make this pokemon almost invincible

Iron Moth @ Booster Energy
Ability: Quark Drive
Shiny: Yes
Tera Type: Grass
EVs: 124 Def / 132 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Fiery Dance
- Energy Ball
- Dazzling Gleam
- Psychic

Moving on with the fifth pokemon, Great tusk a very good wall with very high damage and defense stats can make this pokemon a very good wall but it is poor on the sp defense so be carefull with which pokemon you put Great tusk to fight againt another good thing about Great tusk is rapid spin a very good hazard remover that you can use to eliminate spikes, stealth rocks, toxic spikes and sticky webs so is a very good pokemon

Great Tusk @ Leftovers
Ability: Protosynthesis
Tera Type: Water
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Impish Nature
- Earthquake
- Stealth Rock
- Knock Off
- Rapid Spin

And the last pokemon, Umbreon, a very rare pokemon to see in competitive but it is a good sp def wall and can be use to paralize the enemy pokemons and heal your pokemon so you can use it to defend you vs enamorus, iron moth or another sp sweeper

Umbreon @ Leftovers
Ability: Synchronize
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
- Wish
- Protect
- Foul Play
- Thunder Wave

And thats all i will love to see recomendations and im open to helps so thanks for read all of this and sorry for my english if its not the best im not a native english speaker <3 thanks again for read it
 
Hi quick rate:

I think Scizor should run Heavy Duty Boots because entry hazards could be problematic for this team since Tusk will not outspeed max speed Gholdengo on a switch-in Life Orb could work but in general you put too much reliance on wish passing.

I think Dragapult should have Tera Blast fighting (Tera Fighting) for Kingambit because it is extremely threatening to that set, and in general Kingambit looks a bit threatening to this team.

I think Iron Moth should go with Substitute > Dazzling Gleam for the Kingambit switches and not get beat forcefully by a Sucker Punch

For Great Tusk I think maybe consider going a higher speed maybe a 252 Att / 252 Speed / 4 Def to outspeed and do more damage to Gholdengo switchin in general.

I think overall Clefable does a better job then Umbreon as a wish passer so I would suggest going with Clefable over Umbreon since it provides Magic Guard as well as just a solid defensive Fairy with the option to Tera Water. You can switch it to a more SpDef variant if you like

:Clefable:
Clefable @ Leftovers
Ability: Magic Guard
Tera Type: Water
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Wish
- Protect
- Moonblast
- Thunder Wave

Good luck
 
awyp said:
Hi quick rate:

I think Scizor should run Heavy Duty Boots because entry hazards could be problematic for this team since Tusk will not outspeed max speed Gholdengo on a switch-in Life Orb could work but in general you put too much reliance on wish passing.

I think Dragapult should have Tera Blast fighting (Tera Fighting) for Kingambit because it is extremely threatening to that set, and in general Kingambit looks a bit threatening to this team.

I think Iron Moth should go with Substitute > Dazzling Gleam for the Kingambit switches and not get beat forcefully by a Sucker Punch

For Great Tusk I think maybe consider going a higher speed maybe a 252 Att / 252 Speed / 4 Def to outspeed and do more damage to Gholdengo switchin in general.

I think overall Clefable does a better job then Umbreon as a wish passer so I would suggest going with Clefable over Umbreon since it provides Magic Guard as well as just a solid defensive Fairy with the option to Tera Water. You can switch it to a more SpDef variant if you like

:Clefable:
Clefable @ Leftovers
Ability: Magic Guard
Tera Type: Water
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Wish
- Protect
- Moonblast
- Thunder Wave

Good luck
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Thank you so much im gonna try it
But which move i have to change on dragapult
 
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