Quality Control Higher usage than you(Speed Booster Great Tusk)

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[SET]
Speed Booster (Great Tusk) @ Booster Energy
Ability: Protosynthesis
EVs: 204 HP / 4 Atk / 48 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Headlong Rush
- Close Combat
- Bulk Up
- Megahorn / Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]
* By using the Speed boost, Great Tusk is able to outspeed Pokemon such as Meowscarada, Dragapult, Chien-Pao and Spectrier which normally outspeed it.
* Headlong Rush is a Ground-type STAB move which deals with Pokemon like Raging Bolt, Metagross, and Iron Hands
* Close Combat is for Dark-Type Pokemon such as Non-Chople Berry Urshifu-S, Chien-Pao, Meowscarada and Darkrai.
* Bulk Up is a set up move that allows Great Tusk to win against Pokemon such as Metagross and Ursaluna while also improving the chances to win against Pokemon like Corvknight, Pecharunt and Landorus-T.
* Megahorn is used specifically for Hoopa-U and can also be used to OHKO Ogerpon-W after a bulk up. Alternatively Knock Off can also be used to deal with Spectrier as well as other Pokemon such as Air Ballon Pecharunt and Dragapult.
* The Ev spread activates Speed Booster while gaining the maximum possible attack, while bulking an Overheat from Modest Heatran.
* While this set outspeeds most threats in the tier, it struggles against Fairy- and Water-Type Pokemon like Primarina, Sylveon, Manaphy and Walking Wake. Therefore, partners like Hisuian Goodra, Sneasler and Metagross can compliment Great Tusk.

[SET CREDITS]

Set(s) by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/blanched.519863/
Written By:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/zackpalace.568493/
 
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put this in qc before the end of the month or i'm reassigning
 
Will take another look before 1/2
[SET]
Speed Booster (Great Tusk) @ Booster Energy
Ability: Protosynthesis
EVs: 204 HP / 4 Atk / 48 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Headlong Rush
- Close Combat
- Bulk Up
- Megahorn / Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]
* By using the Speed boost, Great Tusk is able to outspeed Pokemon such as Meowscarada, Dragapult, Chien-Pao and Spectrier which normally outspeed itother sets of Great Tusk. The Speed boost also allows Great Tusk to set up first against many Pokemons such as Ogerpon-W and Annihilape. (Both can just encore you. Remove the line unless theres better examples)
* Headlong Rush is a Ground-type STAB move which deals with Pokemon like Raging Bolt, Metagross, and Iron Hands and Hisuian Goodra. (You're not consistent into custap goodrah)
* Close Combat is for Dark-Type Pokemon such as Non-Chople Berry Urshifu-S, Chien-Pao, Roaring Moon, Meowscarada and Darkrai. (Speed booster moon will click substitute)
* Bulk Up is a set up move that allows Great Tusk to win everytime against Pokemon such as Metagross, (remove comma) and Ursaluna and Annihilape, while also improving the chances to win against Pokemon like Corvknight, Pecharunt and Landorus-T.
* Megahorn is specifically for Hoopa-U and can also be used to get good muts against Pokemon like Ogerpon-W and Serperior. (4 Atk Great Tusk Megahorn vs. 248 HP / 0 Def Serperior: 228-270 (64.5 - 76.4%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Leftovers recovery. This entire point needs a rewrite.)
* Knock Off deals with Pokemon such as Choice Band Dragapult, Choice Specs Raging Bolt (252+ SpA Raging Bolt Draco Meteor vs. 204 HP / 48 SpD Great Tusk: 372-438 (88.1 - 103.7%) -- 25% chance to OHKO) and Choice Specs Iron Crown by removing their's items. Knock Off is also good against Pokemon like Spectrier and Air Ballon Pecharunt and allows better mus. (Rewrite whole point. Spectrier is the main matchup it gains with this. Combine this with the Megahorn point, as it is a slash)
* The Speed Evs is to active Speed Booster and The Attack Evs is the maximum attack you can have to active the Speed Booster instead of Attack Booster, the rest of the Evs are put in Hp and Special Defense to survives a Modest Overheat from Heatran.
* The Ev spread activates Speed Booster while gaining the maximum possible attack, while bulking an Overheat from Modest Heatran.
* While Great Tusk outspeed most of the mon, While this set outspeeds most threats in the tier, it struggles against Fairy- and Water-Type Pokemon like Primarina, Sylveon, Manaphy and Walking Wake which Great Tusk cant OHKO, . (Add Period) tTherefore, (Add Comma) having Pokemon partners like Goodra-Hisuian Hisuian Goodra, Sneasler and Metagross as Secondary can compliment Great Tusk.

[SET CREDITS]

Set(s) by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/blanched.519863/
Written By:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/zackpalace.568493/
 
Mentality said:
Will take another look before 1/2
[SET]
Speed Booster (Great Tusk) @ Booster Energy
Ability: Protosynthesis
EVs: 204 HP / 4 Atk / 48 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Headlong Rush
- Close Combat
- Bulk Up
- Megahorn / Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]
* By using the Speed boost, Great Tusk is able to outspeed Pokemon such as Meowscarada, Dragapult, Chien-Pao and Spectrier which normally outspeed itother sets of Great Tusk. The Speed boost also allows Great Tusk to set up first against many Pokemons such as Ogerpon-W and Annihilape. (Both can just encore you. Remove the line unless theres better examples)
* Headlong Rush is a Ground-type STAB move which deals with Pokemon like Raging Bolt, Metagross, and Iron Hands and Hisuian Goodra. (You're not consistent into custap goodrah)
* Close Combat is for Dark-Type Pokemon such as Non-Chople Berry Urshifu-S, Chien-Pao, Roaring Moon, Meowscarada and Darkrai. (Speed booster moon will click substitute)
* Bulk Up is a set up move that allows Great Tusk to win everytime against Pokemon such as Metagross, (remove comma) and Ursaluna and Annihilape, while also improving the chances to win against Pokemon like Corvknight, Pecharunt and Landorus-T.
* Megahorn is specifically for Hoopa-U and can also be used to get good muts against Pokemon like Ogerpon-W and Serperior. (4 Atk Great Tusk Megahorn vs. 248 HP / 0 Def Serperior: 228-270 (64.5 - 76.4%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Leftovers recovery. This entire point needs a rewrite.)
* Knock Off deals with Pokemon such as Choice Band Dragapult, Choice Specs Raging Bolt (252+ SpA Raging Bolt Draco Meteor vs. 204 HP / 48 SpD Great Tusk: 372-438 (88.1 - 103.7%) -- 25% chance to OHKO) and Choice Specs Iron Crown by removing their's items. Knock Off is also good against Pokemon like Spectrier and Air Ballon Pecharunt and allows better mus. (Rewrite whole point. Spectrier is the main matchup it gains with this. Combine this with the Megahorn point, as it is a slash)
* The Speed Evs is to active Speed Booster and The Attack Evs is the maximum attack you can have to active the Speed Booster instead of Attack Booster, the rest of the Evs are put in Hp and Special Defense to survives a Modest Overheat from Heatran.
* The Ev spread activates Speed Booster while gaining the maximum possible attack, while bulking an Overheat from Modest Heatran.
* While Great Tusk outspeed most of the mon, While this set outspeeds most threats in the tier, it struggles against Fairy- and Water-Type Pokemon like Primarina, Sylveon, Manaphy and Walking Wake which Great Tusk cant OHKO, . (Add Period) tTherefore, (Add Comma) having Pokemon partners like Goodra-Hisuian Hisuian Goodra, Sneasler and Metagross as Secondary can compliment Great Tusk.

[SET CREDITS]

Set(s) by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/blanched.519863/
Written By:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/zackpalace.568493/
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[SET]
Speed Booster (Great Tusk) @ Booster Energy
Ability: Protosynthesis
EVs: 204 HP / 4 Atk / 48 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Headlong Rush
- Close Combat
- Bulk Up
- Megahorn / Knock Off might swap the order on these
but more seriously I want to discuss adding:
- ice spinner for landorus formes and guaranteed chomp
- taunt for corv / better balloon pecha odds (and probably more stall mons)

[SET COMMENTS]
* By using the Speed boost from Booster Energy, Great Tusk is able to outspeed Pokemon such as Meowscarada, Dragapult, Chien-Pao and Spectrier, (added comma) which normally outspeed it.
* Headlong Rush is a Ground-type STAB move which deals with Pokemon like Raging Bolt, Metagross, (remove comma) and Iron Hands
0 Atk Great Tusk Headlong Rush vs. 96 HP / 0 Def Raging Bolt: 354-416 (85.3 - 100.2%) -- 6.3% chance to OHKO
228+ SpA Protosynthesis Raging Bolt Draco Meteor vs. 204 HP / 48 SpD Great Tusk: 475-559 (112.5 - 132.4%) -- guaranteed OHKO
* Close Combat is for Dark-type Pokemon such as non-Chople Berry see the comments on knock off Urshifu-S, Chien-Pao, Meowscarada, (added comma) and Darkrai.
* Bulk Up is a set up move that allows Great Tusk to win against Pokemon such as Metagross and Ursaluna. while also improving the chances to win against Pokemon like Corviknight, Pecharunt and Landorus-T see my comments below on the knock off point / beside the initial set, possibly also something that isn't purely won by typing should go here as an example
* Megahorn is used specifically this sounds off because you mention a different target after for Hoopa-U and can also be used to OHKO Ogerpon-W after a bulk up Bulk Up. Alternatively, (added comma) Knock Off can also be used to deal with Spectrier as well as other Pokemon such as Air Balloon Pecharunt and offensive Dragapult. (wisp WP pult wins)
I don't believe the move used to break balloon for pecha matters much, matchup is spamming bulk up, breaking balloon with whatever you have, and praying for good rolls and no poison.
4 Atk Great Tusk Headlong Rush vs. 248 HP / 228+ Def Pecharunt: 170-204 (44.8 - 53.8%) -- 35.2% chance to 2HKO
https://replay.pokemonshowdown.com/gen91v1-2430601980-p8nsusg7a34ijscvy29wtkxi3tqfhhbpw
https://replay.pokemonshowdown.com/gen91v1-2430613463-srm2qi43hfx5heh5eetwu3offmvgr7wpw
oh also I think knock helps vs chople mons like shifu-s / hisuian goodra
* The EV spread activates Speed Booster while gaining the maximum possible attack, while bulking an Overheat from Modest Heatran.
* While this set outspeeds most threats in the tier, it struggles against Fairy- and Water-Type Pokemon like Primarina, Sylveon, Manaphy and Walking Wake. Therefore, partners like Hisuian Goodra, Sneasler and Metagross can compliment Great Tusk.
honestly, I'd say its bigger problem than the type chart is its terrible spdef and low initial power, making this set lose to spa booster raging bolt / some iron crown / volcanion / skeledirge / sometimes pecha as a ground type.
a good partner should probably be able to cover for these shortcomings too: a couple of potential partners you mentioned here do some of this already, I'd just like a little bit more on that

[SET CREDITS]

Set(s) by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/blanched.519863/
Written By:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/zackpalace.568493/

Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/mentality.670315/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/itchy.518399/

Grammar checked by:
[insert user link]
- will want to see this again before sending to GP
- idk if you have been taught this but the copyedit button allows for easy check implementation
- my DMs are happily open to talk through changes, feel free to ask in the analyses discord channel as well
 
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