Hippopotas (Gen 4, LC Analysis)*

I finished my Hippopotas analysis, but a huge problem just had to come up. I noticed a mistake that I needed to correct, but instead of backspace deleting the word, the entire page went back. I didn't save it either... Anyway, I'm posting what I have rewritten (again...) so far, even though it's not much. Sorry for the delay.

Thanks.
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[ OVERVIEW]

<p>Hippopotas is the only Pokemon in Little Cup who can set up a permanent sandstorm. It usually finds its place on defensively-oriented teams, aiding its team with sandstorm support which adds more residual damage to the opponent.</p>

<p>Unfortunately, Hippopotas is not as effective as its big brother Hippowdon is in OU. Hippowdon can easily switch into various physical threats and constantly phaze them and successfully heal its HP via Slack Off. However, in a metagame filled with offense, Hippopotas struggles to wall effectively. Furthermore, low Speed and Special Defense stats really hinder its ability to stay in for long periods of time. Even with these shortcomings, Hippopotas is still a very dependable Pokemon. It can consistently set up both sandstorm and Stealth Rock, a claim no other Little Cup Pokemon can make.</p>

[SET]
name: Lead
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Earthquake
move 3: Crunch / Rock Slide
move 4: Slack Off / Roar
item: Oran Berry / Leftovers
nature: Impish
evs: 212 HP / 36 Atk / 212 Def / 36 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Hippopotas plays a very important role in the Little Cup metagame; it is the only Pokemon that can set up a permanent sandstorm. This makes it a very effective Pokemon in the lead position, setting up Stealth Rock without much trouble and having a chance to disable the opponent's Focus Sash due to the sandstorm. With its great physical bulk it also makes a great switch-in to many physically-based threats that can be troublesome, such as Meowth, Aron, and Larvitar.</p>

<p>Stealth Rock is a helpful move for both Hippopotas and its team, as many Pokemon that are immune or resistant to Hippopotas's Earthquake, such as Paras and Mantyke, take upwards of 25% damage from it. Earthquake offers Hippopotas a reliable STAB attack to use, dealing decent damage. Crunch and Rock Slide are two options that provide excellent coverage in conjunction with Earthquake. Crunch helps Hippopotas combat Gastly and Duskull, two common switch-ins, while Rock Slide deals heavy damage to Flying-types, such as Mantyke and Taillow. Deciding the final move is quite difficult. Slack Off allows Hippopotas to recover a lot of its health to keep on switching in and tanking; however, in a metagame filled with Pokemon OHKOing and 2HKOing other Pokemon, it may be hard to pull off. Another issue is that lot of Pokemon can set up against Hippopotas with impunity. Gligar can easily pull off Swords Dance and sweep with insanely strong Earthquakes, Dratini can set up Dragon Dance reasonably well and destroy Hippopotas with Waterfall, while Krabby can set up both Agility and Swords Dance and sweep with boosted Crabhammers. This is where Roar comes into play, stopping Pokemon from setting up against it. It really depends on what your team needs most: a reliable physical tank or phazer.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>The EV spread is straightforward. 212 HP and Defense EVs are all Hippopotas needs to max out its HP and Defense, reaching stats of 26 and 18, respectively. The remaining EVs are split into Attack and Special Defense to add one point to each. The item choice is up to personal preference. Oran Berry is the recommended item, leaving Hippopotas with healthy HP after using Stealth Rock, assuming it took heavy damage. Since Hippopotas has a reasonably high HP stat, it could make use of Leftovers, restoring bits of its HP every turn. If you do choose to use Leftovers, using Slack Off instead of Roar is recommended so Hippopotas restores more of its HP once it uses Slack Off.</p>

<p>Defensive teams will generally appreciate Hippopotas's presence, as the sandstorm it provides increases the residual damage the opponent takes. Hippopotas is also a vital member on stall teams, even though stall is very hard to master in Little Cup. Munchlax and Omanyte are common members on defensive and stall teams, the former taking special attacks with ease (something Hippopotas does not like), while the latter receiving a 1.5x Special Defense boost due to the sandstorm and setting up several layers of Spikes and Toxic Spikes. Besides defensive teams, Hippopotas is also used on sandstorm teams. Pokemon with the Sand Veil ability or Rock typing will always benefit from the sandstorm. Gligar and Cacnea, for example, will have increased evasion, helping them set up easier to sweep. As for Pokemon that are or part Rock-type, Lileep and Larvitar are good examples that appreciate the Special Defense boost, helping them set up as well. Aside from using Pokemon that benefit from the sandstorm, weather changers can instantly cripple your sandstorm team. Snover is arguably the greatest threat to Hippopotas and its teammates, so it needs to be taken care of in order for Hippopotas to keep the sandstorm up. Houndour is a great Pokemon to dispose of Snover, as it resists both of Snover's STAB moves and can OHKO it with Fire Blast or trap it with Pursuit, which would put Snover at low enough health to be taken care of by Stealth Rock. Munchlax can also harm Snover greatly with Return, and it also boasts excellent Special Defense and HP to take the special attacks Hippopotas cannot.</p>

[Team Options]

<p>Hippopotas is mainly used because of its ability to set up a permanent sandstorm, so its team should generally consist of sandstorm-abusing Pokemon. These type of Pokemon can be broken down into two categories: defensive and offensive.</p>

<p>Any Pokemon that is or part Rock-type will always appreciate the 1.5x Special Defense boost that a sandstorm provides them with. Since most Rock-types are weaker on the special side, the sandstorm helps accommodate that weakness to make it of lesser concern. Lileep is a prime example of a Pokemon that appreciates the bonus Special Defense, helping it set up Swords Dance, Curse, or Stockpile against special attackers that have unSTABed super effective attacks fairly well. Omanyte is another great Pokemon to look into, making it take special hits, even super effective ones (bar Grass attacks due to Omanyte's 4x weakness), much better. This also helps it set up several layers of Spikes and Toxic Spikes. Basically, any Rock-type will enjoy a sandstorm, so it's up to you to decide who fits your team the best.</p>

<p>Offensively, Pokemon that have the Sand Veil ability are recommended. This gives them a 20% evasion increase, helping them set up more reliably. Cacnea and Gligar are excellent examples of this, as the enhanced evasion allows them to potentially set up Substitute or Swords Dance without taking any damage in the process. Other Pokemon with the ability Sand Veil include Diglett, Sandshrew, and Gible.</p>

<p>Snover needs to be taken into account when using Hippopotas, as it instantly sets up an everlasting hailstorm upon switching in. Houndour is one of the few Pokemon that can almost always take out Snover. It is able to easily OHKO Snover with Fire Blast, or it can stop Snover from feeling safely by using Pursuit, which would end Snover up with low enough health to fall under Stealth Rock's presence. Munchlax is also a decent alternative, as its high Special Defense and HP helps it take Blizzard and Energy Ball like a champ. It can then bring down Snover with Return or weaken it with Pursuit should it flee. Also, due to Munchlax's superb Special Defense, it could take on various special attackers that threaten Hippopotas, such as Chinchou, Mantyke, and Bulbasaur.</p>

[Optional Changes]

<p>Hippopotas does not have the greatest of movepools, but it has a few moves that can be useful in some situations.</p>

<p>A Stockpile set can be used to some decent success, boosting Hippopotas's poor Special Defense to higher levels. With the abundant use of Ice- and Water-type moves, however, it may be difficult to pull it off. Curse can also be used, except that it has the same problems that Stockpile has, and it doesn't add any Special Defense boosts. Lastly, a Choice Band set with Earthquake, Crunch, Superpower, and Rock Slide might be useful, though Gligar would be better relegated to this task, due to its higher Attack and Speed.</p>

[Counters]

<p>Hippopotas's horrible Special Defense makes it vulnerable to powerful special attacks, so using strong special attackers is a good way to bring it down. Houndour and Gastly are good examples of powerful special attackers that can easily bring death upon Hippopotas with their respective STAB moves. Also, any Pokemon with super effective special attacks will instantly OHKO Hippopotas, such as Porygon's Ice Beam, Bulbasaur's Leaf Storm, and Mantyke's Hydro Pump.</p>

<p>Since Hippopotas is quite weak offensively and almost any Pokemon can find it very easy to set up against it without taking much damage. Gligar, who is immune to Earthquake and takes pathetic damage from other moves Hippopotas uses, can easily set up Substitute, Swords Dance, or Rock Polish and threaten to sweep Hippopotas's entire team with death-inducing Earthquakes. Krabby can easily pull off several Swords Dance or Agility boosts because of its high Defense stat, allowing it to fire off powerful Crabhammers to the opponent. The only thing that needs to be watched out for is if Hippopotas carries Roar.</p>

<p>Any weather changer can threaten Hippopotas with their super effective attacks and also remove the raging sandstorm. Snover, who sets up hail, Exeggcute, who sets up sun, and Mantyke, who sets up rain, can all OHKO Hippopotas with their super effective STAB attacks.</p>
 
<p>Hippopotas is mainly used because of its ability to set up a permanent sandstorm, so its team should generally consist of various sandstorm-abusing Pokemon. These type of Pokemon can be broken down into two categories: offensive and defense.</p>

<p>Any Pokemon that is or part Rock-type will always appreciate the 1.5x Special Defense boost that a sandstorm provides them with. Since most Rock-types are weaker on the special side, the sandstorm helps accommodate that weakness to make it of lesser concern. Lileep is a prime example of a Pokemon that appreciates the bonus Special Defense, helping it set up Swords Dance, Curse, or Stockpile against special attackers that have unSTABed super effective attacks fairly well. Omanyte is another great Pokemon to look into, making it take special hits, even super effective ones (bar Grass attacks due to Omanyte's 4x weakness), much better. This also helps it set up several layers of Spikes and Toxic Spikes. Basically, any Rock-type will enjoy a sandstorm, so it's up to you to decide who fits your team the best.</p>

<p>Offensively, Pokemon that have the Sand Veil ability are recommended when Hippopotas is used. This gives them a 20% evasion increase, helping them set up more reliably. Cacnea and Gligar are excellent examples of this, as the enhanced evasion allows them to potentially set up Substitute or Swords Dance without taking any damage in the process. Other Sand Veilers include Diglett, Sandshrew, and Gible.</p>

[Other Options]

<p>Hippopotas doesn't have the greatest of movepools, but it has a few moves that can be useful in some situations.</p>

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I won't be fixing grammatical errors, sorry, but I will find typos.

I only found two typos, so nice work!
 
[SET]
name: Lead
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Earthquake
move 3: Crunch / Rock Slide
move 4: Slack Off / Roar
item: Oran Berry / Leftovers
nature: Impish
evs: 212 HP / 36 Atk / 212 Def / 36 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Hippopotas is the only Pokemon in the Little Cup metagame capable of setting up a permanent sandstorm. It is also a reliable user of Stealth Rock, and quite adept at disabling the Focus Sash of the opposing lead. These points make it a very valuable Pokemon in the lead position. Also, with its great physical bulk, it makes a great switch-in to many physically-based threats that can be troublesome, such as Meowth, Aron, and Larvitar.</p>

<p>Stealth Rock is the most important move on this set, aiding Hippopotas and its team greatly. Also, many Pokemon that are immune or resistant to Hippopotas' Earthquake, like Paras and Mantyke, take a lot of damage from Stealth Rock. Earthquake offers Hippopotas a reliable STAB attack to use, dealing a great amount of damage to numerous Pokemon. Crunch and Rock Slide are two options that provide excellent coverage in conjunction with Earthquake. Crunch helps Hippopotas combat Gastly and Misdreavus, two common switch-ins, while Rock Slide damages Flying-types, such as Mantyke and Taillow, super effectively. In the final moveslot, Slack Off is a great move for Hippopotas to use, however, in a metagame filled with Pokemon OHKOing and 2HKOing other Pokemon, it may be hard to pull off. There are a lot of Pokemon that can set up against Hippopotas with impunity. Gligar can easily pull off Swords Dance and sweep with insanely strong Earthquakes, Dratini can set up Dragon Dance reasonabley well and destroy Hippopotas with Waterfall, and Krabby can set up both Agility and Swords Dance and sweep with boosted Crabhammers. Therefore, Roar also deserves some consideration, as it can prevent your opponent from threatening with a sweep. It really depends on what your team needs: a reliable physical wall or phazer.</p>

<p>The EV spread is straightforward. 212 HP and Defense EVs are all Hippopotas needs to max out its HP and Defense, reaching stats of 26 and 18, respectively. The remaining EVs are split into Attack and Special Defense to add one point to each. Your choice of item depends on personal preference. Oran Berry is usually recommended, as it ensures Hippopotas will still be healthy on the second turn of battle. Since Hippopotas has a reasonably high HP stat, it could also make use of Leftovers, restoring bits of its HP every turn. If you do choose to use Leftovers, using Slack Off instead of Roar is recommended so Hippopotas restores more of its HP once it uses Slack Off.</p>

<p>Defensive teams will generally appreciate Hippopotas' presence, as the sandstorm it provides increases the residual damage the opponent takes. Hippopotas is also a vital member on stall teams, even though stall is very hard to master in Little Cup. Munchlax and Omanyte are common members on defensive and stall teams, the former takes special attacks (something Hippopotas does not like) with ease, while the latter receives a 1.5x Special Defense boost from sandstorm, and can set up several layers of Spikes and Toxic Spikes.</p>

<p>Hippopotas' value is not exclusive to defensive teams. Pokemon with the Sand Veil ability or Rock typing will always benefit from the sandstorm. Gligar and Cacnea, for example, will have increased evasion, making their sweep more secure. Lileep and Larvitar are good examples of Pokemon that appreciate the Special Defense boost: taking less damage means a more succesful sweep attempt. Because of these benefits, Hippotas can also be quite useful on sandstorm-oriented teams.</p>

[Team Options]

<p>Permanent sandstorm can be a double-edged sword, so your team should generally consist of Pokemon that can take full advantage of the weather. Such Pokemon can be seperated into two categories: offensive and defensive.</p>

<p>Offensively, Pokemon that have the Sand Veil ability are recommended when Hippopotas is used. This gives them a 20% evasion increase, helping them set up more reliably. Cacnea and Gligar are excellent examples of this, as the enhanced evasion allows them to potentially set up Substitute or Swords Dance without taking any damage in the process. Other Sand Veilers include Diglett, Sandshrew, and Gible.</p>

<p>Since most Rock-types are weaker on the special side, sandstorm can help to minimize that weakness. Lileep is a prime example, able to set up Swords Dance, Curse, or Stockpile against special attackers that have unSTABed super effective attacks fairly well. Omanyte is another great Pokemon to look into, with boosted Special Defense, it will be much more adept at setting up Spikes and Toxic Spikes. Just about any Rock-type Pokemon will appreciate the 1.5x Special Defense boost that a sandstorm provides, so choose the Pokemon whom best fit your team.</p>

[Other Options]

<p>Hippopotas does not have the greatest of movepools, but it has a few moves that can be useful in some situations. A Stockpile set can be used to some decent success, boosting Hippopotas' poor Special Defense to higher levels. However, the abundance of Ice- and Water-Type moves make it difficult to pull off. Curse suffers from similar issues, and it doesn't add any Special Defense boosts. Lastly, a Choice Band set with Earthquake, Crunch, Superpower, and Rock Slide might be useful, however will subpar Speed and Special Defense, you will likely have trouble using this set succesfully.</p>

[EVs]

<p>Hippopotas really only has one viable EV spread, that being 212 HP / 36 Atk / 212 Def / 36 SpD; it's fairly straightforward. With 212 HP and Defense EVs, Hippopotas reaches maxed out stats of 26 and 18, respectively. The remaining EVs are added to Attack and Special Defense to gain an extra point.</p>

[Opinion]

<p>Hippopotas fills a very important niche in the Little Cup metagame, as it is the only Pokemon who can set up a permanent sandstorm. It usually finds its place on defensive-oriented teams, aiding its team with sandstorm support, and increasing the amount of residual damage your opponent receives.</p>

<p>As a wall, Hippopotas is not as reliable as its big brother Hippowdon is in OU. In a metagame filled with offense, Hippopotas struggles to wall effectively. Furthermore, low Speed and Special Defense really hinder its ability to stay in for long periods of time. However, Hippopotas is still a very dependable Pokemon. It can consistently set up both sandstorm and Stealth Rock, a claim no other Pokemon in the Little Cup metagame can make.</p>

The reference to Hippowdon is very poorly supported, I would just remove it altogether, but if you insist, you need to elaborate.

[Counters]

<p>Hippopotas' horrible Special Defense makes it vulnerable to powerful special attacks, so using strong special attackers is a good way to bring it down. Houndour and Gastly can easily bring death upon Hippopotas with their respective STAB moves. Also, most super effective special attacks will easily defeat Hippopotas, so Porygon, Bulbasaur and Mantyke are also good counters.</p>

<p>Gligar, who is immune to Earthquake and takes pathetic damage from other moves of Hippopotas, can easily set up Substitute, Swords Dance, or Rock Polish in the face of Hippopotas and threaten to sweep. Against variants with Roar, Gligar can simply chip away with Earthquake. Krabby is in a similar position, although it is vulnerable to Earthquake, it can either set up with Swords Dance, or wear away at the hippopotamus with powerful STAB Crabhammers. Many other Pokemon can threaten Hippopotas in similar ways, setting up against those without Roar, and constantly attacking against those without a recovery move.</p>

<p>In addition to threatening with super effective attacks, Snover, Exeggcute, and Mantyke all receive special mention for their aptitude for changing the weather. Sandstorm teams rarely have any other way to initiate the weather, and they will often be devastated if the weather is not in their favor.</p>
 
Thanks Suicune for the proofread.

I also updated Hippopotas to reflect the [ADDITIONAL COMMENTS] section. I basically elaborated on the first paragraph.
 
Changes in Blue.
Comments in Red.
Crunch hurts Ghost- and Psychic-types very hard, Omitted the Gastly and Abra mention while Rock Slide damages Flying-types that are immune to Earthquake. Omitted the Mantyke and Taillow mention

With the abundant use of Ice- and Water-type moves, however, it may be difficult to pull off. Curse is an option, but is inferior to Stockpile due to a lack of Special Defense boosts. Lastly, a Choice Band set with Earthquake, Crunch, Superpower, and Rock Slide might be useful, though Gligar would be better relegated to this task.

It usually finds its place on defensive-oriented teams, aiding its team with sandstorm support, adding more residual damage onto the opponent.

Unfortunately
, Hippopotas is not as good as its big brother Hippowdon is in OU. Even with these hindrances, Hippopotas still excels at setting up Stealth Rock and a permanent sandstorm, and that's all it needs to do to get the job done.

Gligar, who is immune to Earthquake and takes pathetic damage from other moves, Omitted Hippopotas mention can easily set up Substitute, Swords Dance, or Rock Polish and threaten to sweep Hippopotas' entire team with death-inducing Earthquakes.

Any weather changer can threaten Hippopotas with their super effective attacks and also remove the raging sandstorm.
Most of the changes I'd like to implement are more about being succinct than anything to do with grammar or spelling. That being said, I did include some personal preferences with regards to conciseness in the analysis.

Hope I helped.
 
Things to add are bold.
Things to get rid of are in "bold quotes and are bolded."
Comments are in (bold parentheses.)
I finished my Hippopotas analysis, but a huge problem just had to come up. I noticed a mistake that I needed to correct, but instead of backspace deleting the word, the entire page went back. I didn't save it either... Anyway, I'm posting what I have rewritten (again...) so far, even though it's not much. Sorry for the delay.

Thanks.
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http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/hippopotas

Status: INCOMPLETE! (needs proofreading)
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[Overview]

<p>Hippopotas holds a very important niche in the Little Cup metagame, as it's the only Pokemon who can set up a permanent sandstorm. It usually finds its place on defensive-oriented teams, aiding its team with sandstorm support which also adds more residual damage to the opponent.</p>

<p>As a wall, Hippopotas is not as effective as its big brother Hippowdon is in OU. Hippowdon can easily switch into various physical threats and constantly phaze them and successfully heal its HP via Slack Off. However, in a metagame filled with offense, Hippopotas struggles to wall effectively. Furthermore, low Speed and Special Defense really hinder its ability to stay in for long periods of time. "Although," Even with these shortcomings, Hippopotas is still a very dependable Pokemon. It can consistently set up both sandstorm and Stealth Rock, a claim no other Pokemon in the Little Cup metagame can make.</p>

[SET]
name: Lead
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Earthquake
move 3: Crunch / Rock Slide
move 4: Slack Off / Roar
item: Oran Berry / Leftovers
nature: Impish
evs: 212 HP / 36 Atk / 212 Def / 36 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Hippopotas plays a very important role in the Little Cup metagame; it's the only Pokemon that can set up a permanent sandstorm. It makes a very prominent Pokemon in the lead position, setting up Stealth Rock without much trouble and having a chance to disable the opponent's Focus Sash due to the sandstorm. Also, with its great physical bulk, it makes a great switch-in to many physically-based threats that can be troublesome, such as Meowth, Aron, and Larvitar. Earthquake is Hippopotas' main attack of choice, hitting decently hard, while the move to use alongside it is either Crunch or Rock Slide. Crunch hurts Ghost- and Psychic-types, such as Gastly and Abra, very hard, while Rock Slide damages Flying-types that are immune to Earthquake, such as Mantyke and Taillow. Slack Off allows Hippopotas to heal off any damage it has taken, but Roar can be used to phaze opponents that are attempting to set up on Hippopotas.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>Stealth Rock is the most important move on this set, aiding Hippopotas and its team greatly. Also, many Pokemon that are immune or resistant to Hippopotas' Earthquake, like Paras and Mantyke, take a lot of damage from Stealth Rock. Earthquake offers Hippopotas a reliable STAB attack to use, dealing a great amount of damage to numerous Pokemon. Crunch and Rock Slide are two options that provide excellent coverage in conjunction with Earthquake. Crunch helps Hippopotas combat Gastly and Misdreavus, two common switch-ins, very well, while Rock Slide damages Flying-types, such as Mantyke and Taillow, super effectively. Deciding the final move is quite difficult. Slack Off is a great move for Hippopotas to use, allowing it to recover a lot of its health to keep on switching in and walling several physical sweepers; however, in a metagame filled with Pokemon OHKOing and 2HKOing other Pokemon, it may be hard to pull off. There are a lot of Pokemon that can set up against Hippopotas with impunity. Gligar can easily pull off Swords Dance and sweep with insanely strong Earthquakes, Dratini can set up Dragon Dance reasonabl"e"y well and destroy Hippopotas with Waterfall, and Krabby can set up both Agility and Swords Dance and sweep with boosted Crabhammers. This is when Roar comes into play, stopping Pokemon from setting up against it. It really depends on what your team needs; a reliable physical wall or phazer.</p>

<p>The EV spread is straightforward. 212 HP and Defense EVs are all Hippopotas needs to max out its HP and Defense, reaching stats of 26 and 18, respectively. The remaining EVs are split into Attack and Special Defense to add one point to each. The item choice is up to personal preference. Oran Berry is the recommended item, leaving Hippopotas with healthy HP after using Stealth Rock, assuming it took heavy damage. Since Hippopotas has a reasonably high HP stat, it could make use of Leftovers, restoring bits of its HP every turn. If you do choose to use Leftovers, using Slack Off instead of Roar is recommended, so Hippopotas restores more of its HP once it uses Slack Off.</p>

<p>Defensive teams will generally appreciate Hippopotas' presence, as the sandstorm it provides increases the residual damage the opponent takes. Hippopotas is also a vital member on stall teams, even though stall is very hard to master in Little Cup. Munchlax and Omanyte are common members on defensive and stall teams, the former taking special attacks with ease (something Hippopotas does not like), while the latter receiving a 1.5x Special Defense boost due to the sandstorm and setting up several layers of Spikes and Toxic Spikes. Besides defensive teams, Hippopotas is also used on sandstorm-oriented teams. Pokemon with the Sand Veil ability or Rock typing will always benefit from the sandstorm. Gligar and Cacnea, for example, will have increased evasion, helping them set up easier to sweep. As for Pokemon that are or part Rock-type, Lileep and Larvitar are good examples that appreciate the Special Defense boost, helping them set up as well.</p>

[Team Options]

<p>Hippopotas is mainly used because of its ability to set up a permanent sandstorm, so its team should generally consist of various sandstorm-abusing Pokemon. These type of Pokemon can be broken down into two categories: defensive and offensive.</p>

<p>Any Pokemon that is or part Rock-type will always appreciate the 1.5x Special Defense boost that a sandstorm provides them with. Since most Rock-types are weaker on the special side, the sandstorm helps accommodate that weakness to make it of lesser concern. Lileep is a prime example of a Pokemon that appreciates the bonus Special Defense, helping it set up Swords Dance, Curse, or Stockpile against special attackers that have unSTABed super effective attacks fairly well. Omanyte is another great Pokemon to look into, making it take special hits, even super effective ones (bar Grass attacks due to Omanyte's 4x weakness), much better. This also helps it set up several layers of Spikes and Toxic Spikes. Basically, any Rock-type will enjoy a sandstorm, so it's up to you to decide who fits your team the best.</p>

<p>Offensively, Pokemon that have the Sand Veil ability are recommended when Hippopotas is used. This gives them a 20% evasion increase, helping them set up more reliably. Cacnea and Gligar are excellent examples of this, as the enhanced evasion allows them to potentially set up Substitute or Swords Dance without taking any damage in the process. Other Sand Veilers include Diglett, Sandshrew, and Gible.</p>

[Optional Changes]

<p>Hippopotas doesn't have the greatest of movepools, but it has a few moves that can be useful in some situations.</p>

<p>A Stockpile set, like Hippowdon's, can be used to some decent success, boosting Hippopotas' poor Special Defense to higher levels. Although, with the abundant use of Ice- and Water-type moves, it may be difficult to pull it off. Curse can also be used, except that it has the same problems that Stockpile has, and it doesn't add any Special Defense boosts. Lastly, a Choice Band set with Earthquake, Crunch, Superpower, and Rock Slide might be useful, though Hippopotas' pathetic Speed and Special Defense won't make it as successful, not to mention that it's horribly outclassed by Gligar.</p>

[Counters]

<p>Hippopotas' horrible Special Defense makes it vulnerable to powerful special attacks, so using strong special attackers is a good way to bring it down. Houndour and Gastly are good examples of powerful special attackers that can easily bring death upon Hippopotas with their respective STAB moves. Also, any Pokemon with super effective special attacks will instantly OHKO Hippopotas, such as Porygon's Ice Beam, Bulbasaur's Leaf Storm, and Mantyke's Hydro Pump.</p>

<p>Since Hippopotas is quite weak offensively, almost any Pokemon can find it very easy to set up against it without taking much damage. Gligar, who is immune to Earthquake and takes pathetic damage from other moves of Hippopotas, can easily set up Substitute, Swords Dance, or Rock Polish and threaten to sweep Hippopotas' entire team with death-inducing Earthquakes. Krabby can easily pull off several Swords Dance or Agility boosts because of its high Defense stat, allowing it to fire off powerful Crabhammers to the opponent. The only thing that needs to be watched out for is if Hippopotas carries Roar.</p>

<p>Any weather changer can threaten Hippopotas with their super effective attacks and also remove the brewing sandstorm. Snover, who sets up hail, Exeggcute, who sets up sun, and Mantyke, who sets up rain, can all OHKO Hippopotas with their super effective STAB attacks.</p>

This has barely any errors in it. Great job.
 
-lack of hail/snover mentions in the team options section on the main set and the team option sections as well. i feel like this is the biggest threat to hippopotas, and it needs have a mention to how you eliminate snover.

-you need to mention partners outside of sandstorm as well. since a number of sandstorm teams share the same weakness, its going to suck. munchlax, mantyke, and paras stick in my head first when i think of possible partners. covers a lot of special threats nicely.
 
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