Hello to all. It's my 2nd RMT on Smogon.
Can I have (poistive) criticism,please?
The team at the glance
Construction :
I wanted to play an Heavy Offense team because I love them. For this team, I would play Breloom SD in Late Game Sweeper, he is a monster however he isn't fast but he has Mach Punch who is a very interristing priority move and he can stall with Poison Heal.
Gliscor and Celebi are big poblems, Landorus with the Expert Belt lures the Choice Scarf with Earthquake and can OHKO them with U-Turn and Hidden Power Ice respectively and he is too useful again Sand Storm with his doubled Attack.
It's a good combo but I had to facilitate Breloom's sweep, after I have had an idea, Infernape Choice Bander who takes care of Skarmory with flare blitz, Skarmory Physicaly defensive is OHKO with Stealth Rock, he has U-turn too for scouting, he has Close Combat for Blissey so he can pass the core Blissey/Skarmory so Stall team aren't a problem.
Good begening who can do something to all teams but I must to have Stealth Rock and why not Spikes, it's difficult after the ban of Deoxys-S but I chose Deoxys-D because he has Spikes, Stealth Rock, Magick Coatand Thunder Wave for the support.
Psychic type and Ghost Type blocked so a trapper is a good idea for a counter of them, Tyrananitar is great but there is the Sand Storm with him so I took Scizor who can rk a lot of Pokemon
For the last, I would a really powerful Pokemon with an excellent Special Attack, I chose Latios because of its impressive Special Attack.
Moves and the team :
Deoxys-Def (Deoxys-D) @ Red Card
Trait: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP / 192 Def / 48 SDef / 16 Spd
Calm Nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Stealth Rock
- Spikes
- Magic Coat
- Thunder Wave
Why Read Card, It's strange? Simply for counter Tyranitar, Scizor and another Pokemon who can come an Deoxys or set up, It's useful too with those who set up, there are phazing, for example, with Scizor SD, I put Hentry Hasards and he use Sword Dance after when i'll have all Hentry Hasards when he'll have used 3 Sword Dance, he would to kill me because I'm the fast I can put the last Hentry Hasard after he kill me but he must to switch with the Red Card . Thanks to Red Card. It's really useful with Stealth Rock and 1 or 2 Spikes. Have an HO without Hentry Hasard isn't an HO and it's a really big error.
The best lead of the Sandard for HO, he is probably the best Spiker/Stealth. Stealth Rock and Spikes are logics, Mirror Coat can seem a bad choice on Deoxys-D but I can send back a lot of think with this attack, I can send back Toxic to Jellicent, Hentry Hasards of Foretress and a lot of other thinks. Thunder Wave is very useful for place my team, Terrakium can take Thunder Wave and after I can ohko him with Breloom and if he would to switch, I can use Sword Dance or Spore.
I'm not really sure for the repartition, it's for resistant being Physic and Special and Max HP for stall. The rest is in Speed for outspeeding Pokemon. The nature Calm for boost Special Defense.
Deoxys can take Fighting moves in the middle of the Match and use Thunder Wave if he can take two moves, it's really useful with Terrakion.
BLAZE (Infernape) (M) @ Choice Band
Trait: Blaze
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Close Combat
- Flare Blitz
- U-turn
- Earthquake
He is a really good and powerful sweeper with his great speed. He is horrible for the Adverse Team, he hasn't a real counter, he is an excellent Wall Breaker. He's too a counter for Sun and Sand Storm, he has his Flare Blitz boostes with the Sun and super effective again Grass sweeper and he can pass Heatran with Close Combat. For SS, he can OHKO Tyranitar and do correct damage to Gliscor, can pass Ferrothorn and to a lot of damage to Landorus. There is an other question, why Earthquake? It's simply for Tentacruel, he is OHKO by it, in Rain Stall, Ferrothorn think I use Close Combat so he switch on Tentacruel but he takes an Earthquake and is OHKO. I put Earthequake because Tentacruel is a problem.
He is in my team for do damage, pass Stallers and scouting, he is really useful. Big Stallers such as Skarmory and Gliscor are OHKO/2HKO by its moves so he is really terrific beause he outspeedes Stallers. Fire Blitz and Close Combat are for stabs who are powerful, Choice Scarfer Rotom-W is 2HKO by Flare Blitz and OHKO with Close Combat. U-turn is for scouting and it's useful for Lati@s and Starmie because if they switch on, thy take a super effective moves and I can switch on Scizor for finish them. I already do an explication of why I use Earthquake.
Repartition are basicals, 252 EV in Attack and Speed for do a lot of damage. I juste chose Adamat Nature for OHKO Skarmory with Stealth Rock and do a lot of damage.
When Infernape is below the 30%, he is really powerful and can do a last kill.
Zor (Scizor) (M) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Technician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Spd / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature (+Spe, -SAtk)
- Bullet Punch
- U-turn
- Pursuit
- Superpower
He is my trapper, he is really useful too for Revenge kill, do damage and souting. He can revenge kill Scarf Landorus, Venusar with the Sun, Dragonite on +1, Haxorus on +1, Latios and a lot of another Pokemon. All these Pkemon are OHKO or 2HKO by the double stab. U-turn is really useful for make profitable of Hentry Hasards, it's a powerful move because of the great attack of Scizor and the stab.
Pursuit is the center of the set because I play Scizor for trapp Psychic and Ghost Type who are outspeed because of the Choice Scarf, there is no exception because Psychic and Ghost Type with the Choice Scarf are rare. For the last move, Superpower for Heatran, Magnezone and other Steel type who are OHKO by it.
He is really useful because of its resistant to Dragon type.
Latios (M) @ Expert Belt
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 8 HP / 248 SAtk / 252 Spd
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Draco Meteor
- Surf
- Hidden Power Fire
- Psyshock
My only one Special Attacker who do a lot of damage, he is a deceived sweeper because of its gigantest Special Attack and its really great Speed. I needed a Pokemon with titanic Special Attack so who can I take? He is the best Special Sweeper in the Standard with the possibly exception of Volcarona. Expert Belt is for lure, Scizor is OHKO by Draco Meteor + Surf/Hidden Power Fire.
A classic set with the item is changed, Draco Meteor for a stab who can OHKO nearly all who havn't got a resistant(except Dragonite with Multiscale), it's a really powerful stab but who asks for the anticipation. Surf is for Pokemon who' ve got a resistant to Draco Meteor, for simple example, Heatran, Hidden Power Fire is for Steel Type such as Scizor who can trapp Latios and Psyshock is for Physical staller as pinks balls, Blissey/Chansey who would come on Latios.
The repartition is simple with all in Special Attack and Speed for be a powerfu sweeper. Nature Timid for be fast.
Latios and another Dragon has a real succes so Steel type are now common for count them.
Landorus (M) @ Expert Belt
Trait: Sand Force
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SAtk / 252 Spd
Naive Nature (+Spd, -SDef)
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- U-turn
- Hidden Power Ice
An other lure for kill Celebi and Gliscor, there are OHKO by U-turn and Hidden Power Ice respectively, I use Earthquake, they come on Landorus and take super effective move. He is useful too again Sand Storm, because of its attack doubled, he can OHKO Tyranitar.
Earthquake is for the stab with Stone Edge for the Earthquake who touch nearly all, U-turn for lure Celebi and scouting too and Hidden Power Ice for lure Gliscor.
The repartition is for do the lure of the Choice Scarfer, it's easy because of Landorus great speed.
Breloom (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Technician
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Swords Dance
- Mach Punch
- Spore
- Bullet Seed
My finisher, my Late Game Sweeper who is realy useful with priority moves and he can make sleep a lot of Pokemon and use Sword Dance for boost. Pokemon are forcing to switch and with Hentry Hasards, it's funny. He has one of the best type on the game. He has a double priority stab with Mach Punch as Scizor with Bullet Punch but Fighting move is better than steel move.
Sword Dance for boost, after boost, he is a monster with in more an attack with priority wih a double stab. Mach Punch for the stab and revenge kill, Spore for put to sleep and have an easy boost and Bullet Seed for for the second stab, it's look not poweful but all knops have a power of 60,25 so it's a better option than seed bomb.
The repartition is classical for a sweeper, max attack and max speed.
He is a really good Wall Breaker on the middle of the match with spore and his great attack and the new mechanism of the sleep.
The presentation of my team is finish, thanks to have read it.
Can I have (poistive) criticism,please?
The team at the glance
Construction :
I wanted to play an Heavy Offense team because I love them. For this team, I would play Breloom SD in Late Game Sweeper, he is a monster however he isn't fast but he has Mach Punch who is a very interristing priority move and he can stall with Poison Heal.
Gliscor and Celebi are big poblems, Landorus with the Expert Belt lures the Choice Scarf with Earthquake and can OHKO them with U-Turn and Hidden Power Ice respectively and he is too useful again Sand Storm with his doubled Attack.
It's a good combo but I had to facilitate Breloom's sweep, after I have had an idea, Infernape Choice Bander who takes care of Skarmory with flare blitz, Skarmory Physicaly defensive is OHKO with Stealth Rock, he has U-turn too for scouting, he has Close Combat for Blissey so he can pass the core Blissey/Skarmory so Stall team aren't a problem.
Good begening who can do something to all teams but I must to have Stealth Rock and why not Spikes, it's difficult after the ban of Deoxys-S but I chose Deoxys-D because he has Spikes, Stealth Rock, Magick Coatand Thunder Wave for the support.
Psychic type and Ghost Type blocked so a trapper is a good idea for a counter of them, Tyrananitar is great but there is the Sand Storm with him so I took Scizor who can rk a lot of Pokemon
For the last, I would a really powerful Pokemon with an excellent Special Attack, I chose Latios because of its impressive Special Attack.
Moves and the team :
Deoxys-Def (Deoxys-D) @ Red Card
Trait: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP / 192 Def / 48 SDef / 16 Spd
Calm Nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Stealth Rock
- Spikes
- Magic Coat
- Thunder Wave
Why Read Card, It's strange? Simply for counter Tyranitar, Scizor and another Pokemon who can come an Deoxys or set up, It's useful too with those who set up, there are phazing, for example, with Scizor SD, I put Hentry Hasards and he use Sword Dance after when i'll have all Hentry Hasards when he'll have used 3 Sword Dance, he would to kill me because I'm the fast I can put the last Hentry Hasard after he kill me but he must to switch with the Red Card . Thanks to Red Card. It's really useful with Stealth Rock and 1 or 2 Spikes. Have an HO without Hentry Hasard isn't an HO and it's a really big error.
The best lead of the Sandard for HO, he is probably the best Spiker/Stealth. Stealth Rock and Spikes are logics, Mirror Coat can seem a bad choice on Deoxys-D but I can send back a lot of think with this attack, I can send back Toxic to Jellicent, Hentry Hasards of Foretress and a lot of other thinks. Thunder Wave is very useful for place my team, Terrakium can take Thunder Wave and after I can ohko him with Breloom and if he would to switch, I can use Sword Dance or Spore.
I'm not really sure for the repartition, it's for resistant being Physic and Special and Max HP for stall. The rest is in Speed for outspeeding Pokemon. The nature Calm for boost Special Defense.
Deoxys can take Fighting moves in the middle of the Match and use Thunder Wave if he can take two moves, it's really useful with Terrakion.
BLAZE (Infernape) (M) @ Choice Band
Trait: Blaze
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Close Combat
- Flare Blitz
- U-turn
- Earthquake
He is a really good and powerful sweeper with his great speed. He is horrible for the Adverse Team, he hasn't a real counter, he is an excellent Wall Breaker. He's too a counter for Sun and Sand Storm, he has his Flare Blitz boostes with the Sun and super effective again Grass sweeper and he can pass Heatran with Close Combat. For SS, he can OHKO Tyranitar and do correct damage to Gliscor, can pass Ferrothorn and to a lot of damage to Landorus. There is an other question, why Earthquake? It's simply for Tentacruel, he is OHKO by it, in Rain Stall, Ferrothorn think I use Close Combat so he switch on Tentacruel but he takes an Earthquake and is OHKO. I put Earthequake because Tentacruel is a problem.
He is in my team for do damage, pass Stallers and scouting, he is really useful. Big Stallers such as Skarmory and Gliscor are OHKO/2HKO by its moves so he is really terrific beause he outspeedes Stallers. Fire Blitz and Close Combat are for stabs who are powerful, Choice Scarfer Rotom-W is 2HKO by Flare Blitz and OHKO with Close Combat. U-turn is for scouting and it's useful for Lati@s and Starmie because if they switch on, thy take a super effective moves and I can switch on Scizor for finish them. I already do an explication of why I use Earthquake.
Repartition are basicals, 252 EV in Attack and Speed for do a lot of damage. I juste chose Adamat Nature for OHKO Skarmory with Stealth Rock and do a lot of damage.
When Infernape is below the 30%, he is really powerful and can do a last kill.
Zor (Scizor) (M) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Technician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Spd / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature (+Spe, -SAtk)
- Bullet Punch
- U-turn
- Pursuit
- Superpower
He is my trapper, he is really useful too for Revenge kill, do damage and souting. He can revenge kill Scarf Landorus, Venusar with the Sun, Dragonite on +1, Haxorus on +1, Latios and a lot of another Pokemon. All these Pkemon are OHKO or 2HKO by the double stab. U-turn is really useful for make profitable of Hentry Hasards, it's a powerful move because of the great attack of Scizor and the stab.
Pursuit is the center of the set because I play Scizor for trapp Psychic and Ghost Type who are outspeed because of the Choice Scarf, there is no exception because Psychic and Ghost Type with the Choice Scarf are rare. For the last move, Superpower for Heatran, Magnezone and other Steel type who are OHKO by it.
He is really useful because of its resistant to Dragon type.
Latios (M) @ Expert Belt
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 8 HP / 248 SAtk / 252 Spd
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Draco Meteor
- Surf
- Hidden Power Fire
- Psyshock
My only one Special Attacker who do a lot of damage, he is a deceived sweeper because of its gigantest Special Attack and its really great Speed. I needed a Pokemon with titanic Special Attack so who can I take? He is the best Special Sweeper in the Standard with the possibly exception of Volcarona. Expert Belt is for lure, Scizor is OHKO by Draco Meteor + Surf/Hidden Power Fire.
A classic set with the item is changed, Draco Meteor for a stab who can OHKO nearly all who havn't got a resistant(except Dragonite with Multiscale), it's a really powerful stab but who asks for the anticipation. Surf is for Pokemon who' ve got a resistant to Draco Meteor, for simple example, Heatran, Hidden Power Fire is for Steel Type such as Scizor who can trapp Latios and Psyshock is for Physical staller as pinks balls, Blissey/Chansey who would come on Latios.
The repartition is simple with all in Special Attack and Speed for be a powerfu sweeper. Nature Timid for be fast.
Latios and another Dragon has a real succes so Steel type are now common for count them.
Landorus (M) @ Expert Belt
Trait: Sand Force
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SAtk / 252 Spd
Naive Nature (+Spd, -SDef)
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- U-turn
- Hidden Power Ice
An other lure for kill Celebi and Gliscor, there are OHKO by U-turn and Hidden Power Ice respectively, I use Earthquake, they come on Landorus and take super effective move. He is useful too again Sand Storm, because of its attack doubled, he can OHKO Tyranitar.
Earthquake is for the stab with Stone Edge for the Earthquake who touch nearly all, U-turn for lure Celebi and scouting too and Hidden Power Ice for lure Gliscor.
The repartition is for do the lure of the Choice Scarfer, it's easy because of Landorus great speed.
Breloom (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Technician
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Swords Dance
- Mach Punch
- Spore
- Bullet Seed
My finisher, my Late Game Sweeper who is realy useful with priority moves and he can make sleep a lot of Pokemon and use Sword Dance for boost. Pokemon are forcing to switch and with Hentry Hasards, it's funny. He has one of the best type on the game. He has a double priority stab with Mach Punch as Scizor with Bullet Punch but Fighting move is better than steel move.
Sword Dance for boost, after boost, he is a monster with in more an attack with priority wih a double stab. Mach Punch for the stab and revenge kill, Spore for put to sleep and have an easy boost and Bullet Seed for for the second stab, it's look not poweful but all knops have a power of 60,25 so it's a better option than seed bomb.
The repartition is classical for a sweeper, max attack and max speed.
He is a really good Wall Breaker on the middle of the match with spore and his great attack and the new mechanism of the sleep.
The presentation of my team is finish, thanks to have read it.
