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[SET]
name: Triage Sweeper
move 1: Belly Drum
move 2: Drain Punch
move 3: Bullet Punch
move 4: Headlong Rush / Knock Off
item: Sitrus Berry
ability: Triage
nature: Adamant
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 124 Def / 128 SpD

Hariyama is a dangerous Triage sweeper with Belly Drum and Drain Punch. Bullet Punch provides coverage and priority for foes like Gardevoir and Florges while Headlong Rush hits Dazzling Chien-Pao and Ceruledge as well as Toxapex; alternatively, Knock Off can be used over Headlong Rush to hit Earth Eater Skeledirge and Fluffy Slowking. 4 HP EVs guarantee Sitrus Berry is triggered after Belly Drum, and 124 Defense and 128 Special Defense EVs maximize the remaining bulk and Drain Punch recovery. As Hariyama requires enough HP to set up, teammates that can set dual screens and have pivoting moves are helpful to have, making Prankster Corviknight and Slowking good partners. Hadron Engine Gardevoir can be paired with Hariyama to clean up after Hariyama has dealt with troublesome Steel-types that may get in Gardevoir's way, like Iron Treads. As Unaware Scream Tail is Hariyama's best counter, Magic Guard Lucario is a great partner that also appreciates Hariyama removing Roaring Moon and Corviknight. Prankster Toxapex is another reliable check to Hariyama, making Sandy Shocks a strong partner for Hariyama.

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[SET]
name: Triage
move 1: Belly Drum
move 2: Drain Punch
move 3: Bullet Punch
move 4: Headlong Rush / Knock Off
item: Sitrus Berry
ability: Triage
nature: Adamant
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 124 Def / 128 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Hariyama acts as a decent Triage user, (Remove Comma) with Belly Drum and Triage-boosted Drain Punches being its claim to fame. Bullet Punch allows it to OHKO Hatterene, Gengar and Zoroark-Hisui after a Belly Drum and Headlong Rush hits Dazzling Chien-Pao Roaring Moon and Ceruledge, alternatively Knock Off can be used over Headlong Rush to hit Earth Eater Skeledirge and Fluffy Slowking Iron Leaves (Uninvested Leaves loses to Drain Punch after Stealth Rock). 252 Atk evs and an Adamant nature ensures that a boosted Drain Punch can OHKO Iron Moth and Volcarona, (add comma) while the 4 HP, 124 Def and 128 SpD maximises the most of the remaining evs to give as much bulk as possible (For stuff such as...). As Hariyama requires enough HP to setup, teammates that can set screens and have slow pivoting moves are helpful to have, making Prankster Corviknight and Slowking Gardevoir good partners. Alternatively, Gardevoir with Hadron Engine can be paired with Hariyama to clean up after Hariyama has dealt with troublesome Steel-Types that may get in Gardevoir's way. Unaware Scream Tail is Hariyama's best check, Magic Guard Lucario helps to take of it while also appreciating the removal of a Roaring Moon or Corviknight Hariyama may have caused. I'd also mention Prankster Toxapex as a check as it can easily take a drain punch and haze away the belly drum.

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Tranquility said:
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[SET]
name: Triage
move 1: Belly Drum
move 2: Drain Punch
move 3: Bullet Punch
move 4: Headlong Rush / Knock Off
item: Sitrus Berry
ability: Triage
nature: Adamant
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 124 Def / 128 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Hariyama acts as a decent Triage user, (Remove Comma) with Belly Drum and Triage-boosted Drain Punches being its claim to fame. Bullet Punch allows it to OHKO Hatterene, Gengar and Zoroark-Hisui after a Belly Drum and Headlong Rush hits Dazzling Chien-Pao Roaring Moon and Ceruledge, alternatively Knock Off can be used over Headlong Rush to hit Earth Eater Skeledirge and Fluffy Slowking Iron Leaves (Uninvested Leaves loses to Drain Punch after Stealth Rock). 252 Atk evs and an Adamant nature ensures that a boosted Drain Punch can OHKO Iron Moth and Volcarona, (add comma) while the 4 HP, 124 Def and 128 SpD maximises the most of the remaining evs to give as much bulk as possible (For stuff such as...). As Hariyama requires enough HP to setup, teammates that can set screens and have slow pivoting moves are helpful to have, making Prankster Corviknight and Slowking Gardevoir good partners. Alternatively, Gardevoir with Hadron Engine can be paired with Hariyama to clean up after Hariyama has dealt with troublesome Steel-Types that may get in Gardevoir's way. Unaware Scream Tail is Hariyama's best check, Magic Guard Lucario helps to take of it while also appreciating the removal of a Roaring Moon or Corviknight Hariyama may have caused. I'd also mention Prankster Toxapex as a check as it can easily take a drain punch and haze away the belly drum.

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[SET]
name: Triage Sweeper
move 1: Belly Drum
move 2: Drain Punch
move 3: Bullet Punch
move 4: Headlong Rush / Knock Off
item: Sitrus Berry
ability: Triage
nature: Adamant
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 124 Def / 128 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Hariyama acts as a decent Triage user with Belly Drum and Triage-boosted +3 priority Drain Punches. Bullet Punch allows it to OHKO Hatterene, Gengar and Zoroark-Hisui Hisuian Zoroark after a Belly Drum and id personally add a comma before "and" and change it to "while" Headlong Rush hits Dazzling Chien-Pao and Ceruledge,. (Remove Comma, Add Period) aAlternatively Knock Off can be used over Headlong Rush to hit Earth Eater Skeledirge and Fluffy Slowking. 252 Atk evs Attack EVs and an Adamant nature ensures that a boosted Drain Punch can OHKO Iron Moth and Volcarona, while the 4 HP, 124 Def and 128 SpD maximises the most of the remaining evs EVs to give as much bulk as possible to setup safely or live a hit from the likes of the aforementioned Ceruledge and Skeledirge 4 HP EVs guarantee Sitrus Berry is triggered after Belly Drum, and 124 Defense and 128 Special Defense EVs maximize the remaining bulk you dont need to list mons here. As Hariyama requires enough HP to setup set up, teammates that can set screens and have slow pivoting moves are helpful to have, making Prankster Corviknight and Slowking good partners. Gardevoir with Hadron Engine Gardevoir can be paired with Hariyama to clean up after Hariyama has dealt with troublesome Steel-Types that may get in Gardevoir's way give examples. As Unaware Scream Tail is Hariyama's best check counter, Magic Guard Lucario helps to take of it acts a strong counter while also appreciating the removal of a Roaring Moon or Corviknight Hariyama may have caused. Prankster Toxapex is also another reliable check to Hariyama, making Sandy Shocks another is "another" needed here over "a"? reliable strong try not to repeat desciptive words in the same sentence, and im unsure if shocks could be considered "reliable" here anyway partner for Hariyama.

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Clas said:
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[SET]
name: Triage Sweeper
move 1: Belly Drum
move 2: Drain Punch
move 3: Bullet Punch
move 4: Headlong Rush / Knock Off
item: Sitrus Berry
ability: Triage
nature: Adamant
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 124 Def / 128 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Hariyama acts as a decent Triage user with Belly Drum and Triage-boosted +3 priority Drain Punches. Bullet Punch allows it to OHKO Hatterene, Gengar and Zoroark-Hisui Hisuian Zoroark after a Belly Drum and id personally add a comma before "and" and change it to "while" Headlong Rush hits Dazzling Chien-Pao and Ceruledge,. (Remove Comma, Add Period) aAlternatively Knock Off can be used over Headlong Rush to hit Earth Eater Skeledirge and Fluffy Slowking. 252 Atk evs Attack EVs and an Adamant nature ensures that a boosted Drain Punch can OHKO Iron Moth and Volcarona, while the 4 HP, 124 Def and 128 SpD maximises the most of the remaining evs EVs to give as much bulk as possible to setup safely or live a hit from the likes of the aforementioned Ceruledge and Skeledirge 4 HP EVs guarantee Sitrus Berry is triggered after Belly Drum, and 124 Defense and 128 Special Defense EVs maximize the remaining bulk you dont need to list mons here. As Hariyama requires enough HP to setup set up, teammates that can set screens and have slow pivoting moves are helpful to have, making Prankster Corviknight and Slowking good partners. Gardevoir with Hadron Engine Gardevoir can be paired with Hariyama to clean up after Hariyama has dealt with troublesome Steel-Types that may get in Gardevoir's way give examples. As Unaware Scream Tail is Hariyama's best check counter, Magic Guard Lucario helps to take of it acts a strong counter while also appreciating the removal of a Roaring Moon or Corviknight Hariyama may have caused. Prankster Toxapex is also another reliable check to Hariyama, making Sandy Shocks another is "another" needed here over "a"? reliable strong try not to repeat desciptive words in the same sentence, and im unsure if shocks could be considered "reliable" here anyway partner for Hariyama.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Natcrozma, 580765]] you can just use links now
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
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ill edit it when I get home, to clarify i can just paste the link of my name in the written by part?
 
Clas said:
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[SET]
name: Triage Sweeper
move 1: Belly Drum
move 2: Drain Punch
move 3: Bullet Punch
move 4: Headlong Rush / Knock Off
item: Sitrus Berry
ability: Triage
nature: Adamant
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 124 Def / 128 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Hariyama acts as a decent Triage user with Belly Drum and Triage-boosted +3 priority Drain Punches. Bullet Punch allows it to OHKO Hatterene, Gengar and Zoroark-Hisui Hisuian Zoroark after a Belly Drum and id personally add a comma before "and" and change it to "while" Headlong Rush hits Dazzling Chien-Pao and Ceruledge,. (Remove Comma, Add Period) aAlternatively Knock Off can be used over Headlong Rush to hit Earth Eater Skeledirge and Fluffy Slowking. 252 Atk evs Attack EVs and an Adamant nature ensures that a boosted Drain Punch can OHKO Iron Moth and Volcarona, while the 4 HP, 124 Def and 128 SpD maximises the most of the remaining evs EVs to give as much bulk as possible to setup safely or live a hit from the likes of the aforementioned Ceruledge and Skeledirge 4 HP EVs guarantee Sitrus Berry is triggered after Belly Drum, and 124 Defense and 128 Special Defense EVs maximize the remaining bulk you dont need to list mons here. As Hariyama requires enough HP to setup set up, teammates that can set screens and have slow pivoting moves are helpful to have, making Prankster Corviknight and Slowking good partners. Gardevoir with Hadron Engine Gardevoir can be paired with Hariyama to clean up after Hariyama has dealt with troublesome Steel-Types that may get in Gardevoir's way give examples. As Unaware Scream Tail is Hariyama's best check counter, Magic Guard Lucario helps to take of it acts a strong counter while also appreciating the removal of a Roaring Moon or Corviknight Hariyama may have caused. Prankster Toxapex is also another reliable check to Hariyama, making Sandy Shocks another is "another" needed here over "a"? reliable strong try not to repeat desciptive words in the same sentence, and im unsure if shocks could be considered "reliable" here anyway partner for Hariyama.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Natcrozma, 580765]] you can just use links now
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
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[SET]
name: Triage Sweeper
move 1: Belly Drum
move 2: Drain Punch
move 3: Bullet Punch
move 4: Headlong Rush / Knock Off
item: Sitrus Berry
ability: Triage
nature: Adamant
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 124 Def / 128 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Hariyama acts as a decent Triage user with Belly Drum and +3 priority Drain Punches is a dangerous Triage Sweeper with Belly Drum and Drain Punch. Bullet Punch allows it to OHKO Hatterene, Gengar and Hisuian Zoroark after a Belly Drum, provides coverage and priority for foes like Gardevoir and Florges while Headlong Rush hits Dazzling Chien-Pao and Ceruledge as well as Toxapex, alternatively Knock Off can be used over Headlong Rush to hit Earth Eater Skeledirge and Fluffy Slowking. 252 Attack EVs and an Adamant nature ensures that a boosted Drain Punch can OHKO Iron Moth and Volcarona, 4 HP EVs guarantee Sitrus Berry is triggered after Belly Drum, and 124 Defense and 128 Special Defense EVs maximize the remaining bulk and Drain Punch recovery. As Hariyama requires enough HP to setup set up, teammates that can set screens and have pivoting moves are helpful to have, making Prankster Corviknight and Slowking good partners. Hadron Engine Gardevoir can be paired with Hariyama to clean up after Hariyama has dealt with troublesome Steel-Types that may get in Gardevoir's way, like Iron Treads. As Unaware Scream Tail is Hariyama's best counter, Magic Guard Lucario acts as a strong counter while also appreciating the removal of a Roaring Moon or Corviknight Hariyama may have caused. Prankster Toxapex is also another reliable check to Hariyama, making Sandy Shocks a strong partner for Hariyama.

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QC 2/2! Stamping Tranq's check, this can go to GP after implemented.

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UT said:
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[SET]
name: Triage Sweeper
move 1: Belly Drum
move 2: Drain Punch
move 3: Bullet Punch
move 4: Headlong Rush / Knock Off
item: Sitrus Berry
ability: Triage
nature: Adamant
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 124 Def / 128 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Hariyama acts as a decent Triage user with Belly Drum and +3 priority Drain Punches is a dangerous Triage Sweeper with Belly Drum and Drain Punch. Bullet Punch allows it to OHKO Hatterene, Gengar and Hisuian Zoroark after a Belly Drum, provides coverage and priority for foes like Gardevoir and Florges while Headlong Rush hits Dazzling Chien-Pao and Ceruledge as well as Toxapex, alternatively Knock Off can be used over Headlong Rush to hit Earth Eater Skeledirge and Fluffy Slowking. 252 Attack EVs and an Adamant nature ensures that a boosted Drain Punch can OHKO Iron Moth and Volcarona, 4 HP EVs guarantee Sitrus Berry is triggered after Belly Drum, and 124 Defense and 128 Special Defense EVs maximize the remaining bulk and Drain Punch recovery. As Hariyama requires enough HP to setup set up, teammates that can set screens and have pivoting moves are helpful to have, making Prankster Corviknight and Slowking good partners. Hadron Engine Gardevoir can be paired with Hariyama to clean up after Hariyama has dealt with troublesome Steel-Types that may get in Gardevoir's way, like Iron Treads. As Unaware Scream Tail is Hariyama's best counter, Magic Guard Lucario acts as a strong counter while also appreciating the removal of a Roaring Moon or Corviknight Hariyama may have caused. Prankster Toxapex is also another reliable check to Hariyama, making Sandy Shocks a strong partner for Hariyama.

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QC 2/2! Stamping Tranq's check, this can go to GP after implemented.

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implemented, ty!
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[SET]
name: Triage Sweeper
move 1: Belly Drum
move 2: Drain Punch
move 3: Bullet Punch
move 4: Headlong Rush / Knock Off
item: Sitrus Berry
ability: Triage
nature: Adamant
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 124 Def / 128 SpD

Hariyama is a dangerous Triage sweeper with Belly Drum and Drain Punch. Bullet Punch provides coverage and priority for foes like Gardevoir and Florges while Headlong Rush hits Dazzling Chien-Pao and Ceruledge as well as Toxapex, alternatively Toxapex; alternatively, Knock Off can be used over Headlong Rush to hit Earth Eater Skeledirge and Fluffy Slowking. 4 HP EVs guarantee Sitrus Berry is triggered after Belly Drum, and 124 Defense and 128 Special Defense EVs maximize the remaining bulk and Drain Punch recovery. As Hariyama requires enough HP to setup set up, teammates that can set dual screens and have pivoting moves are helpful to have, making Prankster Corviknight and Slowking good partners. Hadron Engine Gardevoir can be paired with Hariyama to clean up after Hariyama has dealt with troublesome Steel-types that may get in Gardevoir's way, like Iron Treads. As Unaware Scream Tail is Hariyama's best counter, Magic Guard Lucario acts as a strong counter while also appreciating the removal of a Roaring Moon or Corviknight Hariyama may have caused is a great partner that also appreciates Hariyama removing Roaring Moon and Corviknight. Prankster Toxapex is also another reliable check to Hariyama, making Sandy Shocks a strong partner for Hariyama.

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https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ut.523866/
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UT said:
add remove conjecture
[SET]
name: Triage Sweeper
move 1: Belly Drum
move 2: Drain Punch
move 3: Bullet Punch
move 4: Headlong Rush / Knock Off
item: Sitrus Berry
ability: Triage
nature: Adamant
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 124 Def / 128 SpD

Hariyama is a dangerous Triage sweeper with Belly Drum and Drain Punch. Bullet Punch provides coverage and priority for foes like Gardevoir and Florges while Headlong Rush hits Dazzling Chien-Pao and Ceruledge as well as Toxapex, alternatively Toxapex; alternatively, Knock Off can be used over Headlong Rush to hit Earth Eater Skeledirge and Fluffy Slowking. 4 HP EVs guarantee Sitrus Berry is triggered after Belly Drum, and 124 Defense and 128 Special Defense EVs maximize the remaining bulk and Drain Punch recovery. As Hariyama requires enough HP to setup set up, teammates that can set dual screens and have pivoting moves are helpful to have, making Prankster Corviknight and Slowking good partners. Hadron Engine Gardevoir can be paired with Hariyama to clean up after Hariyama has dealt with troublesome Steel-types that may get in Gardevoir's way, like Iron Treads. As Unaware Scream Tail is Hariyama's best counter, Magic Guard Lucario acts as a strong counter while also appreciating the removal of a Roaring Moon or Corviknight Hariyama may have caused is a great partner that also appreciates Hariyama removing Roaring Moon and Corviknight. Prankster Toxapex is also another reliable check to Hariyama, making Sandy Shocks a strong partner for Hariyama.

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Written by:
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Quality checked by:
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https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ut.523866/
Grammar checked by:
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