Hopefuly simple team rating thread:

[So Zetta Slow]

..Yeah first post and i want to make a thread...anyway here it is:
SoulTomb (Spiritomb) (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 254 HP/140 Atk/116 SDef
Careful nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Sucker Punch
- Taunt
- Pain Split
- Will-o-wisp
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Warp speed (Deoxys-e) @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP/194 Def/36 Spd/28 SDef
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Cosmic Power
- Taunt
- Night Shade
- Recover
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Ginji (Blaziken) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 6 HP/252 Spd/252 SAtk
Mild nature (+SAtk, -Def)
- Agility
- Flamethrower
- Hidden Power [Grass]
- Sky Uppercut
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You Want This? (Tangrowth) (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Chlorophyll
EVs: 6 HP/252 Def/252 SAtk
Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Substitute
- Stun Spore
- Leech Seed
- Energy Ball
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Blimp (Drifblim) (M) @ Petaya Berry
Ability: Unburden
EVs: 12 HP/80 Def/202 Spd/216 SAtk
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Baton Pass
- Substitute
- Thunderbolt
- Hypnosis
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Swampert (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Torrent
EVs: 240 HP/216 Def/52 SAtk
Relaxed nature (+Def, -Spd)
- Earthquake
- Ice Beam
- Surf
- Stealth Rock
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And if you don't have constructive criticism then don't criticize plaese.

 

[Taylor]

Yeah, despite you being a new member, you must read the rules of a forum. There is no exeption. Please, read our RMT rules: http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=19179

More importantly, you must read the third rule that I will quote for you in this topic:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

You are more than welcome to re-post this topic when your thread is acceptable.