i´m new .... my first RMT

[Busk]

well.... i´m a new member of smogon...
:D
please rate my team
i think my team is not very competitive u__u
(i´m not using legendary pkmn... but i want to use legendary ones)
so you can help me!
this is my unique team... i use this team in all my match :D

Lead Aerodactyl (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 4 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Taunt
- Stealth Rock
- Rock Slide
- Earthquake
I like speed.... because of this i use aerodactyl.... this can put stealth rock faster than others.. i think is a good lead to start the match and with taunt prevent the non-attack from others... if aerodactyl survives, i use this pokemon to attack with the good STAB of rock slide :D

Ampharos (M) @ Light Clay
Ability: Static
EVs: 6 HP/252 Def/252 SDef
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Reflect
- Light Screen
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Discharge

Well..my favorite pokemon :D.... i have this pokemon as a wall, thanks to the bad speed i prefeer to use this pokemon with the two screen and with light clay put the screen with 8 turns, then i switch to a sweeper, mmm discharge is the STAB attack and i think is better than thunderbolt because discharge have the possibility to paralyze the other pkmn.. and HP can help me to deal with the Ground type pkmn if he survive after a EQ xDD

Vaporeon (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Water Absorb
EVs: 188 HP/252 Def/68 Spd
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Toxic
- Wish
- Protect
- Surf

Another stall pokemon... i use this pokemon to put toxic in the enemy and can be used as a healer pokemon thanks to wish to heal ampharos or machamp...

Machamp (M) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: No Guard
EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Dynamicpunch
- Thunderpunch
- Ice Punch
- Stone Edge

This machamp never give me problems... excepts for switching team u__u, thanks to the Choice Scarf can use Dynamicpunch and kick some asses xDDD ... my unique problems is the Ghost type pokemon .. i´ll try to change it ... ice punch can stop the dragons and gliscor... and thunderpunch is for gyarados

Bronzong @ Leftovers
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 6 HP/252 Def/252 SDef
Impish nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Hypnosis
- Gyro Ball
- Explosion

My defensive pokemon ... explosion and hypnosis can stop stronger pokemons and gyro ball is the STAB attack ... no more description to this pokemon.. u__u

Salamence (M) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Heat Wave
- Outrage
- Hydro Pump

This is my second sweeper... i use this salamence with choice scarf because i can attack faster than the dancer one.. i use this pokemon after a fainted pokemon and i can attack in the first turn with Outrage...
Fire Blast is for Skarmory and Hydro Pump is for Gliscor


--> My Team <--
mmmm i think my team is not very competitive u__u is the reason for i post this thread... i want to put a spinner or another defensive pokemon
my team i
i like switching teams :D
if you can help me plis u__u
ampharos is my favorite ... try not change it ... please jajaja

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sorry for my newbie post jajajaja
it´s my first time here
well i trying to learn more about pkmn in this page :D
thanks

 

[Bloo]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

You need to improve on your descriptions, some of them are too short and not up to par with rule #3. Have a look at some of the teams in the RMT archive to see what is expected. Explain why you chose a Pokemon, what it does, how does it contribute to the success of the team, etc. If you fix the descriptions properly, PM me the changes and I'll unlock your thread.