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[arcticgod3535]

Good morning to anyone who gets this thread I am snowcrystal I just signed up to this place and I really like it here I am known to have some issues with setting up a team properly but that doesn't mean I can't win all the time I will put up some of my team sets and I'll take Critiques feedback and Idea that can change my losing streak into a pwning streak so here my first team in black and white. a stealth rock team ^v^


Nidoqueen(Agatha)F@Lum berry

EVs:252Hp, 180Def, 162SpD
Nature:Careful
ability:Poison Point
Moveset

~Stealth rock
~Earth Power
~Ice beam
~Taunt

She may not be the fastest but she get the rocks in and never failed so far

Chandelure(Luna)F@ Leftovers

EVs: 252Hp, 252Def, 4SpA
Nature:Bold
ability: Flame body
Moveset

~Substitute
~Flamethrower
~Hex
~Calm Mind

She can wall some foes and she block Rapid spinners

Serperior(Zacchino)M@Light clay

16Hp, 252SpA, 240Spe
Nature:Timid
Ability:Overgrow
Moveset

~Light screen
~Reflect
~Glare
~Energy ball/Leaf storm

He protects all my ladies and assists the lead

Krookodile(Ruby)F@Chople Berry

EVs: 100Hp, 152Atk, 252Spe
Nature:Jolly
Ability:Intimidate
Moveset

~Bulk Up
~Earthquake
~Thunder Fang
~Stone Edge

Ruby my Epic sweeper she shows no Mercy

Zoroark(Pattie)F@Dark Gem

EVs: 4Atk, 252SpA, 252Spe
Nature:Naive
Ability: Illusion (Duh)
Moveset

~Hone Claw
~Focus Blast
~Flamethrower
~Sucker Punch

My Stealthy Striker she cleverly hides among my team setting up one the easy kill

Simipour(Robert)M@Water Gem

EVs: 252atk,4SpA, 252Spe
Nature:Rash
Ability:Gluttony
Moveset

~Hone Claw
~Focus Blast
~Hydro Pump
~Acrobatics


He is Pattie Cover Knowing her moves too also to fool people to think which one is which


So that's my team tell me what you think and maybe give me some tips I'd really like it ^v^ and thanks for your time

 

[wraiders11]

i see that youre new, you need to add much better descriptions or this post will be locked, you also need to include EVs. also try to include pictures. and PS, dont use kRookodile, or simipour in OU, especially Simipour, he is outclassed by everyone in OU

 

[arcticgod3535]

Okay I'll Fix it up so you get a better Idea of this

 

[haunter]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Take a look at the RMT archive to see what kind of descriptions we are looking for. PM me the fixed descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.