I'm a noob help would be nice

[Big Tommy]

My team is based on competitive team battling video by Faladran:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qfgxkZ8HXmg

Zapdos @Choice Scarf
timid Nature
Ability-Pressure
EVs 252 Spe 252 SpAtk 4HP
-Thunderbolt
-Heat Wave
-Volt Switch
-Hidden Power Fighting
My anti-lead.

Donphan @leftovers
impish Nature
Ability-Sturdy
EVs 252 HP 252 Def 4 Atk
-Rapid Spin
-Earthquake
-Stealth Rock
-Ice Shard
Lead support and stealth rocker.

Rotom-H @leftovers
bold Nature
Ability-Levitate
252 HP 252 SpDef 4 Def
-Overheat
-Discharge
-Will-o-wisp
-Pain Split
Bulky Rotom-H, component to core.

Kingdra @ Chesto Berry*
Trait: Swift Swim*
EVs: 180 HP / 160 Atk / 4 SDef / 164 Spd*
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)*
- Dragon Dance*
- Waterfall*
- Outrage*
- Rest
ChestoRest Kingdra, second component to core, synergy with Escavalier.

Escavalier @ Choice Band*
Trait: Swarm*
EVs: 248 HP / 252 Atk / 8 SDef*
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)*
- Megahorn*
- Iron Head*
- Return*
- Pursuit
Third Component to core, synergy with Kingdra.

Heracross @Choice Scarf
Ability: Guts
Nature: Adamant
4 HP 252 Atk 252 Spe
-Megahorn
-Close Combat
-Stone Edge
-Night Slash
Revenge killer/ late game sweeper

Help would be nice if this team needs any corrections. Thank you ahead of time.

 

[haunter]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Take a look at the RMT archive to see what kind of descriptions we are looking for. PM me the fixed descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.