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Gyarados (M)@Leftovers
Adamant / Intimidate
216 HP / 16 Atk / 176 Def / 102 Spe
~ Waterfall
~ Taunt
~ Ice Fang
~ Dragon Dance
Bulky Gyarados is my lead, whom counters many physical threats. Gyara can switch in on Garchomp and Heracross, shrugging off Dragon Claws and Close Combats. After one DD, he can outspeed unScarfed Garchomp, KOing with Ice Fang. One of the best uses of Gyarados, in my opinion.

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Jirachi@Leftovers
Bold / Serene Grace
242 HP / 76 Def / 56 Sp. Atk / 136 Spe
~Wish
~U-Turn
~Thunderbolt
~Stealth Rock


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Electivire (M)@Expert Belt
Lonely / Motor Drive
76 Atk / 252 SpA / 182 Spe
~ Thunderbolt
~ Ice Punch
~ Cross Chop
~ Earthquake
Standard Physical MixVire. I chose Expert Belt > Life Orb because Electivire hits so many types for super effective damage, and Life Orb's recoil is not to appealing to me. A great combonation with Gyarados, I just do not show Electivire until the time is right.

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Claydol@Leftovers
Sassy / Levitate
252 HP / 136 Sp. Def / 122 SpA
~ Rapid Spin
~ Reflect
~ Ice Beam
~ Earthquake
Claydol provides Rapid Spin support, and shrugs off Special hits. Reflect ruins Pursuiters, and Ice Beam with Earthquake provides good coverage.

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Deoxys-S@Choice Specs
Modest / Pressure
252 Sp. Atk / ??? / ???
~ Psychic
~ Ice Beam
~ Focus Blast
~ Thunderbolt
I haven't seen this guy running around the metagame recently, with his new addition to the OU Tier. I have no idea about what I should have for the EV Spread, so help there is needed. Deoxys has a great Special movepool, so I though I would take advantage of that with this set.

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Mamoswine (F)@Choice Scarf
Adamant / Snow Cloak
252 Atk / 64 HP / 194 Spe
~ Earthquake
~ Ice Fang
~ Stone Edge
~ Blizzard
WHAT? CHOICE SCARF? Yup, that's right, CS Mamo will be a BIG surprise to the opponent, when they switch in a Dragon and their faces turn from a
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. Earthquake and Ice Fang for STAB, while Stone Edge hits Gyarados. Blizzard hits Physical Walls for more than Ice Fang would.


There you go...my team. The main things I am looking for are: A) Pokemon I am weak to. B) EV Spreads, etc. to maximize my Pokemons' potential.

I know my two walls are weak to Dark and Ghost, any suggestions to replace tham?
 
I would repace Uxie with this:

Jirachi@Lefties
Bold
240 Hp/76 Defense/56 Special Attack/136 Speed
Wish
U-Turn
Thunderbolt
Stealth Rock/Psychic

It does the same thing, and gives you much needed wish support, since none of your team can heal itself. You could also run Psychic over Stealth Rock for Heracross.
 
Great, thanks! I knew Wish support was needed, I just couldn't find a place to fit one in. The Earthquake weakness puts me down about countering Gyarados, but that's fine.
 
I understand that you are new here, but that's no excuse to not read the rules.

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by give an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.
 
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