XY LC Imma newbie! This is my team!

[Youngster Julia]

Okay, so I quickly put together this LC team. Like my other teams, it is unique in some ways.

LikeABoss (Oddish) (M) @ Black Sludge
Ability: Chlorophyll
Level: 5
EVs: 176 Def / 72 SpA / 176 SpD / 84 Spe
Timid Nature
- Toxic
- Moonlight
- Leech Seed
- Giga Drain

So this oddish (I'll call him LAB) was what I built my team around. I wanted a pokemon that could be annoying in more than one way. LAB can just whittle down your health while gaining more. I'm sure there are improvements, though.

May (Munchlax) (F) @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Gluttony
Level: 5
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 232 Atk / 88 Def / 188 SpD
Adamant Nature
- Belly Drum
- Curse
- Zen Headbutt
- Facade

This is basically my sweeper pokemon. I feel like it's a cycle. If I lead with her, I belly drum then eat my berry. Ghosts think they can mess me up, but having zen headbutt is more helpful than you think. Curse is if I'm pretty low on health and need a boost.

Robin (Fletchling) (F)
Ability: Gale Wings
Level: 5
EVs: 4 HP / 224 Atk / 24 Def / 24 SpD / 232 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Acrobatics
- Aerial Ace
- Roost
- Swords Dance

Surprisingly, my fletchling isn't as helpful as I'd hoped. People sweep with her all the time and mine is just.. meh. I gave her a pretty simple set, with 2 STAB moves (gale wings!!) and roost, She should be alive for a while. Swords dance is just to make her MORE annoying. :D

Nipper (Natu) (F) @ Eviolite
Ability: Magic Bounce
Level: 5
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 220 SpA / 116 SpD / 172 Spe
Modest Nature
- Telekinesis
- Psychic
- Dazzling Gleam
- Confuse Ray

Natu is the OPPOSITE of fletchling. She's MORE useful than I thought! I use confuse ray (which, in some cases, disrupts a sucker punch) And use psychic or dazzling gleam, depending on the target. Telekinesis is for super-fast opponents.

Digish (Diglett) (M) @ Eviolite
Ability: Arena Trap
Level: 5
EVs: 144 Atk / 36 Def / 76 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Earthquake
- Magnitude
- Toxic
- Protect

I think on this set, Magnitude should go. But I can't decide for WHAT? Toxic is great help, and because diglett's so speedy, I almost always get it in before he faints. Protect is just a filler, but not a bad one at that.

Shinxus (Shinx) (F) @ Life Orb
Ability: Intimidate
Level: 5
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 192 Atk / 40 Def / 116 SpD / 160 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Thunder Fang
- Quick Attack
- Fire Fang
- Ice Fang

Oh, and shinxus. Shinxus is a filler pokemon, and i almost ALWAYS get one. A filler. Not a shinx. I figure life orb- with a bunch of random moves, can't hurt, but can't help. I was making my brain hurt trying to figure out a filler, figures shinx can't do much. All well. Help me get rid of her! (even though I LOVE SHINX....)


All wells! This team is much more described than my last one.... Help, plz! I'm a newbie!

 

[Jirachee]

2) Describe your Pokémon

Each Pokémon on your team should have a small paragraph describing these 3 things: 1) A reason why you chose that Pokémon, 2) the Pokémon's role on the team, and 3) A short description of its set. Don't forget to mention any usefulness your Pokémon has to your team. Here are example of what to do, and what not to do:

Good

Jirachi @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Serene Grace
Nature: Jolly
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
- Iron Head
- Ice Punch
- U-turn
- Healing Wish

I decided to use Jirachi because I needed a Steel type and a Revenge Killer for my team. [1] Because it's my only Fairy resist, I need it to switch into stuff like Gardevoir. It also handles fast threats that my team would otherwise have issues with. [2] I needed Ice Punch because DD Dragonite is such a threat to my team. Healing Wish also works well with Landorus, and I needed the Scarf so Jirachi could revenge kill. [3]

Bad

Jirachi @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Serene Grace
Nature: Jolly
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
- Iron Head
- Ice Punch
- U-turn
- Healing Wish

Jirachi is my favourite Pokemon.[1] It can sweep a lot of unprepared teams.[2] Iron Head for STAB, Ice Punch for coverage, U-turn for scouting, Healing Wish for support.[3]

We recommend at least three (3) lines of description for each Pokemon. Having three lines is not absolutely mandatory anymore, but it's a good guideline to gauge if you have written enough.

3) Limit the number of RMTs you post

You may only post 1 RMT every 2 weeks. If your thread gets locked because of that rule, send a PM to a moderator two weeks after to get it unlocked.

Note: this counts for all subforums. You may not post both an OU team and an UU team at the same time, for example.

pls read the rules http://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/forum-guidelines-required-reading-updated-2014-10-22.3520346/