just a team -_-

[tetsumonomicchi]

hey im new to this kind of stuff so heres a teasm i just made up:

Roserade
Item:Damp Rock
Attacks:Sleep Powder
Grass Knot
Weather Ball
Rain Dance

Infernape
Item:Expert Belt
Attacks:Flare Blitz
Close Combat
Uturn
Thunderpunch

Scizor
Item:Leftovers
Attacks: X-Scissor
Iron Head
Brick Break
Agility

Lucario
Item:Expert Belt
Attacks: Aura Sphere
Dark Pulse
Dragon Pulse
Psychic

Staraptor
Item: Focus Band
Attacks: Brave Bird
Uturn
Close Combat
Endeavor

Weavile
Item:Focus Sash
Attacks: Night Slash
Ice Punch
Swords Dance
Brick Break


Pleez give me tips on how to improve this if i can
IM OPEN TO SUGGESTIONS

 

[Taylor]

You could start by reading the rules: http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=19179

Specifically rule three, a rule that you must read and abide by. Here is the rule quoted in the following box:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Now, please repost this RMT thread once it has been corrected.