kinda new to smogon,could use an RMT

[Raging Mudkip]

Pizza Cooker (Rotom-h) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP/108 Def/42 SAtk/108 SDef
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Thunder Wave
- Trick
- Thunderbolt
- Shadow Ball
Kinda an uncommon lead,but it works,trick the scarf,then paralyze it so it's basically dead weight,or the switch in is paralyzed. then the 2 STAB moves,for obvious reasons

Ownage (Gyarados) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- Waterfall
Usual everyday DD gyra,I went jolly,and it's great,unexpected,and outspeeds way more.

Bill Mahr (Scizor) (M) @ Choice Band
Ability: Technician
EVs: 252 HP/252 Atk/6 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Bullet Punch
- U-turn
- Pursuit
- Superpower
Another typical everyday guy,do I really have to explain him?

Virgin (Gengar) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 Spd/252 SAtk
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Shadow Ball
- Thunderbolt
- Focus Blast
- Substitute
Subgar,I love this guy,swtch it to something like a gyra who fears Tbolt,sub,then sweep with powerful special moves,pretty straight forward strat.

Pure Epic (Vaporeon) (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Water Absorb
EVs: 188 HP/252 Def/70 Spd
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Surf
- Wish
- Protect
- Toxic
This guy is awesome,on a rare occasion,something happens,and he isn't that great,but toxic is always great,and then I can stall it out,while surfing for a little more damage.

The King (Kingdra) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Swift Swim
EVs: 252 Atk/6 Spd/252 SAtk
Naive nature (+Spd, -SDef)
- Rain Dance
- Hydro Pump
- Draco Meteor
- Waterfall
RD kingdra,this thing is really good,hydro pump OHKOs skarmory and many other things.

I have a feeling this team isn't that great,so please rate,help,and all that stuff.

THANKS!

 

[Legacy Raider]

This thread is being locked under rule 3:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

If you fix the descriptions properly, PM me the changes and I'll unlock your thread.