LC Koffing

Koffing @ Eviolite
Ability: Neutralizing Gas
Level: 5
EVs: 36 HP / 76 Def / 196 SpA / 156 Spe
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Sludge Bomb
- Fire Blast
- Thunderbolt
- Pain Split

The mascot of Smogon is a force to be reckoned with in LC, checking popular attackers such as Mienfoo and Grookey. With Neutralizing Gas, Koffing is able to negate some of LC's most powerful abilities, like Regenerator from Mienfoo, Mareanie, and Foongus and Arena Trap from Diglett and Trapinch. While Koffing has excellent Defense and a great ability, it is often picked for its offensive qualities as well. Sludge Bomb is a powerful STAB that scares out Mienfoo and Grookey, while Fire Blast lets it hit Ferroseed, Pawniard, and Foongus hard. Thunderbolt lets it hit crucial targets like Mareanie, Frillish, and Natu. Pain Split provides Koffing with recovery it otherwise lacks, letting it stay healthy throughout a game. Good teammates for Koffing include Water- and Grass-types such as Staryu and Grookey, as they help by taking out Ground-types like Mudbray and trappers Diglett and Trapinch. Pawniard is another good teammate, as it can help deal with the Psychic-types Koffing is weak to.
 
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looks good after the edits we talked about. one last thing is that I would like to reorder your sentences to match the move-order from the set. i think they flow better this way too, given fire blast hits sludge bomb immunities.
Sludge Bomb is a powerful STAB that knocks out scares out Mienfoo and Grookey, and the chance to poison can change a game [this isn't important enough to include]. Thunderbolt lets it hit crucial targets like Mareanie, Frillish and Natu [moving], while Fire Blast lets it hit Ferroseed, Pawniard and Foongus hard. Thunderbolt lets it hit crucial targets like Mareanie, Frillish and Natu. Pain Split provides Koffing with recovery it otherwise lacks, letting it stay healthy throughout a game. while also dropping foes into KO range. [i just don't think this is true enough to be included]
Sludge Bomb is a powerful STAB that scares out Mienfoo and Grookey, while Fire Blast lets it hit Ferroseed, Pawniard and Foongus hard. Thunderbolt lets it hit crucial targets like Mareanie, Frillish and Natu. Pain Split provides Koffing with recovery it otherwise lacks, letting it stay healthy throughout a game.
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Koffing @ Eviolite
Ability: Neutralizing Gas
Level: 5
EVs: 36 HP / 76 Def / 196 SpA / 156 Spe
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Sludge Bomb
- Fire Blast
- Thunderbolt
- Pain Split

The mascot of Smogon is a force to be reckoned with in LC, checking popular attackers such as Mienfoo and Grookey. With Neutralizing Gas, Koffing is able to negate some of LC's most powerful abilities, like Regenerator from Mienfoo, Mareanie, and Foongus and Arena Trap from Diglett and Trapinch. While Koffing has excellent Defense and a great ability, it is often picked for its offensive qualities as well. Sludge Bomb is a powerful STAB that scares out Mienfoo and Grookey, while Fire Blast lets it hit Ferroseed, Pawniard, (AC) and Foongus hard. Thunderbolt lets it hit crucial targets like Mareanie, Frillish, (AC) and Natu. Pain Split provides Koffing with recovery it otherwise lacks, letting it stay healthy throughout a game. (remove extra period) Good teammates for Koffing include Water-types or Grass-Types Water- and Grass-types such as Staryu or and Grookey, that as they help by taking out Ground-types like Mudbray and trappers Diglett and Trapinch. (comma -> period) Pawniard is another good teammate, as it as well as Pawniard which can help deal with the Psychic-types Koffing is weak to.
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implementing this so translations has plenty of time to work on this before it goes out
 
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