"LETS GET PHYSICAL"

AceTrainerAndy

AceTrainerAndy

Ok I kinda like this team. I tested it out and it worked pretty well now I want "Experts" to rate it. Some of the movesets are from smogon but i changed Ev spread and movests up a bit.

Swampert@leftovers
Ability: Torrent
Evs: 252 HP 126 def 126 sp def 4 att
Nature Relaxed

Waterfall
stealth rocks
earthquake
roar/ protect

Yea.. a basic standard lead swampert designed to put up rocks and maybe ko or be used as fader later in the game. In the test match he did his job set up rocks and got a KO. Im debating protect or roar.. protect for exploding leads like azelf and metagross
roar for rock damage. You be the judge. He also can resist many types and force switch outs. If swampert gets burned hes fuc*ed mine didnt though.

Dragonite@lifeorb
Ability:Inner focus
Evs: 252 Hp 252 att 4 def
Nature: Adamant

Thunder wave
Roost
Dragon dance
Dragon clawl


yea i made up this set basicly she t-waves to cripple the opponent and ddances up for the nice clean sweep only steel types resist dragon and i bielieve theres only 5 steel types in the OU metagame, but with 2 dragon dace life orb and stab it will still 2hko. Dragonite is pretty slow thats the only downfall but with a few dragon dances it will outspeed most things without a choice scarf. And when you get low on health roost up or if your expecting an ice beam.

Gyardos@Leftovers
Ability: Intimidate
Evs: 252 att 252 spe 4 def
Nature: Adamant

Stone Edge
Earthquake
Dragon Dance
Waterfall

Gyardos is a beast because it takes hits like a champion
you could get 2 or 3 ddances up befor he is close to dieing then sweep with waterfall. He did pretty well he took hits like a champion in the battle.The only problem is that he dosent have a reliable revovery movr like roost...

Electivire@ Life orb=win
Ability: motor drive
Evs:252 att 252 Spe 4 def
Nature: jolly

T-punch
F-punch
I-punch
Earthquake

I love this electivire for two reasons the elemental punches amd motor drive... if gyardos is out and im expecting a t-bolt im switchin to electivire for a clean sweep because electivire can 2hko almost anything in OU today. Electivire is also a beast because of its max speed it will out run and hit any unsuspecting scizor with fire punch any day. Electivire is a win

Gengar@ spell tag
Ability: Levitate
Evs 252 spe 252 sp att
Nature: timid

Shadowball
Substitute
t-bolt
Focus blast

Gengar is my only special sweper so i must use him wisley idk how to spell. Anyways Sub gengars pwn all. I did not get to use him so i do not know how good he is. So not much to say

Machamp@fist plate
Ability: No guard
Evs:252 hp 252 att
Nature adamant of course

Rock slide
Payback
dynamic punch
bullet punch

Yea i got this set from smogon =). My fav part is the pay back a gengar thinks theyre gonna switch out and resist dynamic ounch next turn they got a payback just waiting to punch them in the face. My other favorite part is dynamick punch and confusion hax may force a switch causing rocks to do damage. I also like the priority move bullet punch for revenge kills

Closing words To all raters: Please look for any common OU or BL that could easily beat my team. Look for type weaknesess I no in my heart that this team will struggle against sandstorm teams so im thinking abut switching swampert for Rhyperior.
 
Replace that swampert with my metagross:

Metagross @ Lum Berry
252 Spe/252 Atk/4 Def
Jolly
Clear Body
-Bullet Punch
-Earthquake
-Explosion
-Stealth Rock

Why? Because it will do what swampert does, which is set up Rocks and get a kill, but with the advantages of speed, tanking ability, great typing, and priority. Bullet punch 2hko's Aerodactyl, for example, which could destroy your LeadPert. It will then explode or SR, depending on the speed of the following 'mon.
 
I hate to be blunt, but this team is a bunch of sweepers with little synergy. I don't really know quite what to say, as I can't think of any way to help you out without going through this team with a wrecking ball, to the point where I might as well have made you new a team. Anyway here are a few moveset and item nitpicks.
Use cross chop instead of fire punch on e-vire as it has redundant coverage, and the only thing its hitting is bronzong, which is a rare sight nowadays.
Drop t-wave on dragonite and put on earthquake dragonite should be sweeping not supporting.
ON gengar and machamp you are better of using life orbs, as they boost all attacks.
Use stone edge instead of rock slide on machamp as with no-guard it won't be missing anyway and the base power is much higher.
 
I'm pretty sure this team has seen exactly one battle. I agree with Aqueos about how many changes this team needs. The move changes he suggested are good, I'll leave those alone. However, this team currently has no answers to Ice-, Ghost-, or Dragon-type attacks. Switching to a Metagross lead certainly helps with this, but Gengar will still rock your shit if it gets in. I'd offer more but I just don't know what would fix it.
Also, the "experts" will know what to do when they rate your team.
 
The grammar and spelling mistakes you've made is beyond ridiculous. Try to explain (in depth) how the set for each Pokemon works as well as describe the synergy/how it compliments it's teammates.
Anyhow onto the rating. Your team lacks synergy whatsoever so I'll try to break the rating into little chunks.

1) Give Swampert Protect over roar and give it Ice beam over waterfall. Waterfall only hits a minority of Pokemon that Earthquake can't and Ice Beam hits many threats to your team for super effective.

2)Why spell tag on Gengar? Give it Life orb and this set:

Gengar@Life orb

- Shadow ball
- Focus Blast
- Pain Split
- Substitute

This way you can abuse the extra 0.3 damage from Life orb and recover of residual damage via Pain Split. A great way to deal with Blissey. You missed out 4 evs invest them in Sp.defence.

3)Machamp has NO GUARD. Why give it a move like rock slide? You cannot get a flinch on over 80% of the OU metagame and Stone Edge is more powerful and is Guaranteed to hit. You also get the chance of inflicting a critical hit on the Opponent with Stone Edge.


4) Electivire rarely sweeps nowadays due to it's predictable movepool and huge number of counters. Rotom forms, Swampert and Donphan walk over your Electivire. If I were you I'd change it right away to a Rotom or this:

Blissey@Leftovers

-Aromatherapy
-Softboiled
-Seismic toss
-Flamethrower/T-wave
252hp/200def/58sp.def
Bold

5)Your team gets annihalted by Stall based teams almost 100% of the time. To fix I'd recommend changing your Dragonite set:

Dragonite@Life Orb
- Fire Blast
- ExtremeSpeed
- Draco meteor
- Roost
252Speed/150Sp.Att/108Att Naive

Now Dragonite can act as a revenge killer coming on major threats such as LO Starmie who walks all over your team when it has low health and finishing it off with priority.


6) Swampert Blissey Dragonite Gyarados Gengar Machamp looks much solid of a team then your previous, the synergy is great and you cover most threats although the team still isn't perfect, it's quite basic but works.

Good Luck. I'd be happy to work with you to make a much better team but alot of major changes will need to be implemented, VM/PM me if you want to.
 
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