Liepard (Swag) [QC 3/3] [GP 2/2]

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Sandz mentioned he wanted someone to write up swagger liepard seperately, so here it is :).

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[SET]
name: Swag
move 1: Substitute
move 2: Swagger
move 3: Foul Play
move 4: Encore / Thunder Wave
item: Leftovers
ability: Prankster
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 HP / 68 SpD / 184 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Swagger Liepard has gained quite the reputation among the competitive community, earning the title of one of the most annoying Pokemon in the game, and looking at the set, it's not hard to see why. Between Swagger's confusion, Prankster, Substitute, and the unique effect of Foul Play, Swagger Liepard can turn an entire game around with just a bit of luck. Thanks to Prankster, Liepard's Swagger can induce confusion before the opponent can even move, giving them a 50% chance of damaging themselves instead of Liepard. It also boosts the opponent's Attack stat significantly, which not only makes the opponent do that much more to themselves if they are hit in confusion, but also boosts the damage output of Foul Play, which uses the opponent's current Attack stat to calculate damage. Substitute gives Liepard a way to block status conditions that the opponent might use to try and cripple Liepard, while giving it a nifty cushion against opposing attacking moves as well, functioning as a fail-safe in case the confused Pokemon manages to hit Liepard. Encore allows Liepard to cripple Pokemon trying to set up entry hazards or boosts on Liepard, locking them into the same move for a set amount of turns; this is especially useful in giving Liepard opportunities to set up another Substitute. It also creates setup opportunities for Liepard's teammates. Alternatively, Thunder Wave can be used to form the parafusion combination with Swagger, making it even harder for the opponent to hit Liepard and crippling faster and/or setup opponents such as Accelgor, Sceptile, and Lilligant. Lastly, despite the luck-based nature of Swagger Liepard, the set actually has quite a bit of utility outside of haxing opponents to oblivion. A fast Foul Play does a boatload to Pokemon with high Attack stats, such as Druddigon, Medicham, Choiced Entei locked into a move besides ExtremeSpeed, and Gallade.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>The given EV spread allows Liepard to outspeed everything up to maximum Speed Sigilyph and use Foul Play before the opponent can move, while the rest of the EVs are placed into Liepard's HP and Special Defense to help it take weak hits. Because Liepard is manually boosting the opponent's Attack stat with Swagger, it'll often end up dying to physical Attacks, so investing in Special Defense is more worthwhile. Liepard's only offensive move, Foul Play, relies on the opponent's Attack stat to do damage, so the lack of Attack EVs doesn't hurt its damage output. Alternatively, Liepard can run max Speed to outpace everything up to maximum Speed Scyther, but Scyther isn't incredibly common in RU so the extra Speed usually isn't needed.</p>

<p>Liepard forces a lot of switches between Swagger, Thunder Wave, Encore, and Foul Play, so entry hazards work exceptionally well with Liepard, punishing the opponent for their repeated switching. In particular, Qwilfish makes a good teammate for Liepard, as it is able to switch in on and set up Spikes and Toxic Spikes on many of the Pokemon the Liepard struggles with, most notably Entei, who can use ExtremeSpeed to hit Liepard before it can pull off a Swagger. Qwilfish also absorbs Toxic Spikes for Liepard, preventing opponents from putting it on a timer, and it can use Intimidate to soften the hit from a boosted threat in case they get past Liepard's confusion.</p>

<p>Steelix is often an issue for Swagger Liepard, being completely immune to Thunder Wave and having enough physical bulk to take Liepard's Foul Play with ease even at +6 Attack; therefore, Pokemon that can switch in on and beat Steelix are excellent teammates for Liepard. Moltres does a great job of taking out Steelix, being completely immune to Earthquake, resisting Gyro Ball, and KOing Steelix in return with a powerful Flamethrower. Bulky Water-types such as Slowking and Alomomola make great checks to Steelix as well, taking its attacks with ease and retaliating with their STAB attacks. Alomomola even has the bonus of being able to pass its gigantic Wishes to Liepard, ensuring it can survive for as long as possible. Lastly, Liepard can't stand the presence of Cinccino, who only fears Thunder Wave from Liepard and can break its Substitutes with Tail Slap. Bulky Steel-types, such as Steelix, Ferroseed, Klinklang, and Escavalier, do a great job of handling Cinccino; Ferroseed even heavily punishes the chinchilla for using Tail Slap with Iron Barbs. Ghost-types such as Spiritomb, Misdreavus, and Rotom are good checks to Cinccino as well, being completely immune to Tail Slap and burning Cinccino in return.</p>

[SET COMMENTS]

  • Liepard's best set, even if it's luck reliant
  • Can turn an entire game around if you get lucky
  • Swagger confuses the opponent, giving them a 50% chance to hit themselves, leaving you unharmed, and also boosts the opponent's Attack stat significantly, boosting Foul Play's damage output
  • Prankster Substitute cushions Liepard from Swagger boosted attacks and also gives it a temporary status immunity when set up, Liepard can fish for confusion by repeatedly using Substitute too
  • Thunder Wave works with swagger to create the parafusion combo, making it even harder for the opponent to actually hit Liepard, also lets it cripple faster opponents such as +1 Lilligant
  • Encore messes up any Pokemon trying to set up hazards or boosts on Liepard for whatever reason, works well with Substitute
  • This set has utility outside of haxing the opponent too! a fastFoul Play is great for picking off things like CB Druddigon and Gallade, Encore is great for stopping set up Pokemon, and Prankster Thunder Wave lets Liepard spread paralysis pretty easily.

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

  • Speed Evs let Liepard outpace and Foul Play everything up to Sigilyph, the fastest common, unboosted Pokemon in the tier that Liepard can hope to outspeed. The rest of the evs are placed into Liepard's Hp and special defense to help it take some weaker hits, and investing anywhere else is pointless because Liepard relies on Foul Play for offense regardless.
  • More Speed can be run to outpace and Foul Play Scyther
  • Liepard forces a lot of switches between its combination of Swagger and Thunder Wave, so entry hazards work especially well with Liepard.
  • Smeargle, Qwilfish, Crustle, Omastar, Ferroseed, Druddigon, Golurk, and Roselia are good hazard setters to pair with Liepard
  • Liepard also appreciates a Pokemon that can get past opposing Steelix, as its immune to Thunder Wave, and doesn't take that much damage from confusion or Foul Play.
  • Moltres is great at taking out Steelix, resisting Gyro Ball, being immune to Earthquake, and OHKOing Steelix in Return. Bulky Water-types such as Slowking and Alomomola help out against Steelix too, Alomomola can even heal Liepard with wish
  • A way to beat Cinccino is also important for Liepard, as it can outpace Liepard and break its substitute
  • Steel-types such as Steelix, Ferroseed, Escavalier, and Klinklang can wall Cinccino, Ferroseed even has iron barbs to punish it for using Tail Slap. Bulky Ghost-types such as Spiritomb, Misdreavus, and Rotom do a good job against Cinccino too.
  • otherwise, swagger Liepard is pretty self sufficient
 
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Molk said:
[SET]
name: Swag (If that set name is allowed, then you can ignore this message, but it stuck out to me, thinking it might be Swagger instead. If not, just ignore this ^^;)
move 1: Substitute
move 2: Swagger
move 3: Foul Play
move 4: Encore / Thunder Wave
item: Leftovers
ability: Prankster
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 HP / 68 SpD / 184 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Swagger Liepard has gained quite the reputation among the competitive community, earning the title of one of the most annoying Pokemon in the game, and looking at the set, its not hard to see why. Between a combination of Swagger's confusion, Prankster, Substitute, and the unique effect of Foul Play, Swagger Liepard can turn an entire game around with just a bit of luck. Thanks to Prankster, Liepard's Swagger lets Liepardcan induce confusion before the opponent can even move, giving them a 50% chance of damaging themselves instead of Liepard, i. It also boosts the opponent's aAttack stat significantly, which not only makes the opponent do that much more to themselves if they hit themselves in their confusion, but also boosts the damage output of Foul Play, which uses the opponent's current Attack stat to calculate damage. Substitute gives Liepard a way to block status conditions that the opponent might use to try and cripple Liepard, and while gives Lieparding it a nifty Ccushion against opposing attacking moves as well, functioning as a failsafe just in case the confused Pokemon actually managets to hit Liepard. Encore allows Liepard to cripple Pokemon trying to set up entry hazards or boosts on Liepard, locking them into using the same move over and over again for a set amount of turns,; this is especially useful in giving Liepard opportunities to set up another Substitute. It also creates setup opportunities for Liepard's teammates. Alternatively, Thunder Wave can be used to form the parafusion combo alinationg with Swagger, making it even harder for the opponent to hit Liepard and crippling faster and/or setup opponents such as Accelgor and, (AC) Sceptile, (AC) as wend Lilligant. Lastly, despite the luck based nature of Swagger Liepard, the set actually has quite a bit of utility outside of haxing opponents to oblivion! A fast Foul Play is quite useful for taking out Pokemon with Hhigh Attack stats such as Druddigon, Medicham, Entei locked into Flare Blitz, and Gallade. Likewise, Encore is useful for creating set up opportunities for Liepard's te, (AC) such as Druddigon, Medichammates, locking the opponentEntei locked into undesirable moves, and Thunder Wave allows Liepard to cripple fastFlare Blitz, and/or boosted Pokemon such Gas Lilligant, preventing them from sweeping Liepard's team.</p>(I know this looks messy, but all I did was remove the last sentence talking about Encore and Thunder Wave, as they pretty much repeated the things you said previously about them. I added the parts that are worth noting in their respective sections.)


[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>The given EV spread allows Liepard to outspeed and Foul Play everything up to maximum Speed Sigilyph without a problem while the rest of the EVs are placed into Liepard's HP and Special Defense to help it take some weaker hits better,. Liepard's only offensive move:, (AC) Foul Play, (AC) relies on the opponent's Attack stat to do damage regardless, so the lack of Attack EVs doesn't hurt its damage output at all. Alternatively, Liepard can run max Speed to outpace everything up to Mmaximum Speed Scyther, but Scyther isn't incredibly common in RU, so the extra Speed usually isn't needed.</p>(When it comes to listing certain speeds, maybe give a base number? This is subjective, but when you say "everything up to ------", I don't think the audience would get a precise number of what they can outspeed, so adding "up to base --- Speed" maybe would be helpful.)

<p>Because Liepard forces a lot of switches Bbetween Swagger, Thunder Wave, Encore, and Foul Play, entry hazards work exceptionally well with Liepard, punishing the opponent for their repeated switching. In particular, Qwilfish makes a good teammate for Liepard, beingas it is able to switch in on and set up Spikes and Toxic Spikes on many of the Pokemon the Liepard struggles with, most notably Entei, who can use ExtremeSpeed to hit Liepard before it can pull off a Swagger. Qwilfish also absorbs Toxic Spikes for Liepard, preventing them from putting it on a timer, and it can use Intimidate to soften the hit from a boosted threat just in case they get past Liepard's confusion. Other options to set entry hazards for Liepard include Smeargle, Crustle, Omastar, Steelix, Ferroseed, Druddigon, Golurk, and Roselia.</p>(Maybe shorten the list? I'm sure they are all helpful, but maybe pick the ones that truly help in Liepard's case. Subjective thing, though.)

<p>Steelix is often an issue for Swagger Liepard, being completely immune to Thunder Wave and having enough physical bulk to take Liepard's Foul Play with ease even at +6, therefore, Pokemon that can switch in on and beat Steelix are excellent teammates for Liepard. Moltres does a great job of taking out Steelix, being completely immune to Earthquake, resisting Gyro Ball, and KOing Steelix in return with a powerful Flamethrower. Bulky Water-types, (AC) such as Slowking and Alomomola, (AC) make great checks to Steelix as well, taking its attacks with ease and retaliating with repeated Scalds andconsistent Waterfall-type attacks. Alomomola even has the bonus of being able to pass its gigantic Wishes to Liepard!, ensuring it can survive for as long as possible. Lastly, Liepard can't stand the presence of Cinccino, who only fears Thunder Wave from Liepard and can break its Substitutes with Tail Slap, KOing it, b. Bulky Steel-types, (AC) such as Steelix, Ferroseed, Klinklang, and Escavalier, (AC) do a great job of handling Cinccino, with; Ferroseed even heavily punishing the chinchilla for using Tail Slap with Iron Barbs. Ghost-types such as Spiritomb, Misdreavus, and Rotom are good checks to Cinccino as well, being completely immune to Tail Slap and burning Cinccino in return.</p>
Not much really, just a few grammatical issues and some wording; good job! :)
 
a couple of Governess's changes are subjective imo, they're not wrong but neither is the original writing, so just go with whichever you wish Molk :)
- Prankster Swagger lets Liepard induce confusion
- Substitute (...) and gives Liepard a nifty cushion against
- & the added commas in the last paragraph


also the last sentence should read either

Bulky Steel-types (...) handling Cinccino, with Ferroseed even heavily punishing the chinchilla for using Tail Slap with Iron Barbs.

or

Bulky Steel-types (...) handling Cinccino; Ferroseed even heavily punishes the chinchilla for using Tail Slap with Iron Barbs.

(i prefer (1))

[gp]1/2[/gp] well done :)
 
old new why

[SET]
name: Swag
move 1: Substitute
move 2: Swagger
move 3: Foul Play
move 4: Encore / Thunder Wave
item: Leftovers
ability: Prankster
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 HP / 68 SpD / 184 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Swagger Liepard has gained quite the reputation among the competitive community, earning the title of one of the most annoying Pokemon in the game, and looking at the set, its not hard to see why. Between a combination of Swagger's confusion, Prankster, Substitute, and the unique effect of Foul Play, Swagger Liepard can turn an entire game around with just a bit of luck. Thanks to Prankster, Liepard's Swagger can induce confusion before the opponent can even move, giving them a 50% chance of damaging themselves instead of Liepard. It also boosts the opponent's Attack stat significantly, which not only makes the opponent do that much more to themselves if they hit themselves in their confusion, but also boosts the damage output of Foul Play, which uses the opponent's current Attack stat to calculate damage. Substitute gives Liepard a way to block status conditions that the opponent might use to try and cripple Liepard, while giving it a nifty cushion against opposing attacking moves as well, functioning as a failsafe fail-safe in case the confused Pokemon manages to hit Liepard. Encore allows Liepard to cripple Pokemon trying to set up entry hazards or boosts on Liepard, locking them into using the same move for a set amount of turns ; this is especially useful in giving Liepard opportunities to set up another Substitute. It also creates set up opportunities for Liepard's teammates. Alternatively, Thunder Wave can be used to form the parafusion combination with Swagger, making it even harder for the opponent to hit Liepard and crippling faster and/or set up opponents such as Accelgor, Sceptile, and Lilligant as well. Lastly, despite the luck based luck-based nature of Swagger Liepard, the set actually has quite a bit of utility outside of haxing opponents to oblivion! A fast Foul Play is quite useful for taking out does a boatload to ("quite useful" is quite redundant with "quite a bit of utility", thus i changed this and changed "taking out" to more emphasize that this isn't an OHKO on everyone) Pokemon with high Attack stats, such as Druddigon, Medicham, Choiced Entei locked into Flare Blitz a move besides ExtremeSpeed, and Gallade.</p>


[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>The given EV spread allows Liepard to outspeed and Foul Play everything up to (you might change this, as it's unclear whether it outspeeds max Speed Sigilyph from your phrasing, but all the changes I can think of are really awkward, so this is probably fine) maximum Speed Sigilyph without a problem (you just outspeed or underspeed a Pokemon -- no reason to use "without a problem") and use Foul Play before the opponent can move, while the rest of the EVs are placed into Liepard's HP and Special Defense to help it take weaker weak hits better. (consider explaining your choice of Special Defense rather than Defense with another sentence, as the reader might be baffled by the choice) Liepard's only offensive move, Foul Play, relies on the opponent's Attack stat to do damage regardless, so the lack of Attack EVs doesn't hurt its damage output. Alternatively, Liepard can run ma max Speed to outpace everything up to maximum Speed Scyther, but Scyther isn't incredibly common in RU, so the extra Speed usually isn't needed.</p>

<p>Because Liepard forces a lot of switches between Swagger, Thunder Wave, Encore, and Foul Play, so entry hazards work exceptionally well with Liepard, punishing the opponent for their repeated switching. (feel free to keep your sentence if you prefer it) In particular, Qwilfish makes a good teammate for Liepard, as it is able to switch in on and set up Spikes and Toxic Spikes on many of the Pokemon the Liepard struggles with, most notably Entei, who can use ExtremeSpeed to hit Liepard before it can pull off a Swagger. Qwilfish also absorbs Toxic Spikes for Liepard, preventing them opponents from putting it on a timer, and it can use Intimidate to soften the hit from a boosted threat in case they get past Liepard's confusion. Other options to set entry hazards for Liepard include Smeargle, Omastar, Steelix, Ferroseed, Golurk, and Roselia. (Is this last sentence really needed? You're basically listing a bunch of good hazard users with no reason that they are good partners. You already said that hazards work well with Liepard, and Qwilfish clearly isn't an exclusively good partner for it. I would remove this.)</p>

<p>Steelix is often an issue for Swagger Liepard, being completely immune to Thunder Wave and having enough physical bulk to take Liepard's Foul Play with ease even at +6 Attack, therefore, Pokemon that can switch in on and beat Steelix are excellent teammates for Liepard. Moltres does a great job of taking out Steelix, being completely immune to Earthquake, resisting Gyro Ball, and KOing Steelix in return with a powerful Flamethrower. Bulky Water-types, such as Slowking and Alomomola, make great checks to Steelix as well, taking its attacks with ease and retaliating with consistent (don't understand your word choice at all here) Water-type attacks. Alomomola even has the bonus of being able to pass its gigantic Wishes to Liepard, ensuring it can survive for as long as possible. Lastly, Liepard can't stand the presence of Cinccino, who only fears Thunder Wave from Liepard and can break its Substitutes with Tail Slap, KOing it. Bulky Steel-types, such as Steelix, Ferroseed, Klinklang, and Escavalier, do a great job of handling Cinccino ; Ferroseed even heavily punishing punishes the chinchilla for using Tail Slap with Iron Barbs. Ghost-types such as Spiritomb, Misdreavus, and Rotom are good checks to Cinccino as well, being completely immune to Tail Slap and burning Cinccino in return.</p>

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implemented relaunched's GP check! :), thanks!

this is now done and ready to be uploaded once Sandshrewz finishes the rest of the Liepard analysis.
 
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