Little Fish (Tastsugiri) [QC 0/2]

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Commander Support
Tatsugiri-Stretchy (Tatsugiri-Droopy) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Commander
Level: 50
Tera Type: Stellar
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Modest/Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Draco Meteor
- Muddy Water
- Helping Hand
- Protect
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Tatsugiri is able to aid Dondozo thanks to its Commander while providing support to other allies with Helping Hand. A Helping Hand can allow a Calyrex-S to KO all Calyrex-I with two Astral Barrages through a Fairy or Water Tera. Muddy Water provides a spread move to help deal with multiple opponents. The Focus sash allows it to live one attack guaranteed, allowing it to either clean up a battle in a one versus one scenario or act as a switch in to minimize damage on your Dondozo. The Stellar tera type is there to help it deal more damage to clean up battles. With Modest Nature and Stellar Tera, you a very positive damage roll to KO bulky Mystic Water Urshifu and bulky Calyrex-S with Draco Meteor. With Timid Nature, you outspeed most Mystic Water Urshifus and most bulky Ogerpon Forms. If this pokemon gets knocked out early by a double up, suddenly you can not use Dondozo to its fullest potential because you can no longer use the ability Commander. In addition, a Weezing can shut off Commander with its Neutralizing Gas. A few good partners are Dondozo as Commander gives it +2 in every stat except evasion and accuracy, as well as Calyrex Shadow Rider as Helping Hand can help it easily Knock Out many pokemon with Astral Barrage. Tatsugiri-S boosts Dondozo’s defense through Order Upto wall Calyrex-I and Zamazentas while a Tatsugiri-D allows Dondozo to deal a lot of damage. Additionally, Muddy Water can also help out against Incineroar, which are commonly used to check Calyrex-S. Also, a pokemon such as Ogerpon-H or Indeedee-F can prevent potential double ups with Follow Me. The Weezing-Dondozo team works because Weezing shuts down many ability-reliant teams such as Miraidon and Koraidon teams while Calyrex-S can rip holes through opposing teams for Dondozo and Tatsugiri to clean up.

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Tatsugiri-Stretchy (Tatsugiri-Droopy) (Add a set name) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Commander
Level: 50
Tera Type: Stellar
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Modest Nature (you can probably also add in Timid here)
IVs: 0 Atk
- Draco Meteor
- Muddy Water
- Helping Hand
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
This pokemon is just here to allow Dondozo to do its thing with its commander ability. (this doesn't feel like enough tbh. Probably word it differently, something like "Tatsugiri is able to aid Dondozo thanks to its Commander while providing support to other allies with Helping Hand" or something along those lines) (Explain Muddy Water here, not as obvious when Hydro Pump exists) With helping hand, it Tatsugiri can also play a supportive role to help a partner such as a Calyrex Shadow Rider Calyrex-S deal even more damage. The Focus sash allows it to live one attack guaranteed, allowing it to either clean up a battle in a one versus one scenario or live a turn before bringing in your Dondozo to start sweeping. The Stellar tera type is there to help it deal more damage to clean up battles. (are there any notable KOs that Tatsugiri picks up with Stellar?)

If this pokemon gets knocked out early by a double up, suddenly you can not use Dondozo to its fullest potential because you can no longer use the ability Commander. (up to you but weezing-g can be mentioned since it completely shuts down commander) A few good partners are Dondozo as commander gives it +2 in every stat except evasion and accuracy, as well as Calyrex Shadow Rider as helping hand can help it easily Knock Out many pokemon with Astral Barrage. Additionally, Muddy Water can also help out against Incineroar, which are commonly used to check Calyrex. (Can you mention partners that help Tatsugiri with double ups?)

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I will take another look at this before granting a QC stamp. I completed my check over Pengu's check, let me know once you have implemented both of these checks and change the flair of this thread to Quality Control.

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Tatsugiri-Stretchy (Tatsugiri-Droopy) (Add a set name) "Commander Support" works for a set name if you're unsure @ Focus Sash
Ability: Commander
Level: 50
Tera Type: Stellar
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Modest Nature (you can probably also add in Timid here)
IVs: 0 Atk
- Draco Meteor
- Muddy Water
- Helping Hand
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
This pokemon is just here to allow Dondozo to do its thing with its commander ability. (this doesn't feel like enough tbh. Probably word it differently, something like "Tatsugiri is able to aid Dondozo thanks to its Commander while providing support to other allies with Helping Hand" or something along those lines) You should mention specifically why the Droopy forme of Tatsugiri is used and whenever you mention Tatsugiri format it as "Tatsugiri-D" (Explain Muddy Water here, not as obvious when Hydro Pump exists) With helping hand Helping Hand, it Tatsugiri can also play a supportive role to help a partner such as a Calyrex Shadow Rider Calyrex-S deal even more damage. Mention any notable OHKOs Helping Hand helps Calyrex-S to achieve The Focus sash Sash allows it to live one attack guaranteed, allowing it to either clean up a battle in a one versus one scenario or live a turn before bringing in your Dondozo to start sweeping Rephrase this to something like sending Tatsugiri-D onto the field before Dondozo to reduce the damage Dondozo takes when it enters. Mention the differences between Modest and Timid Tatsugiri-D, what KOs does Modest achieve and what does Timid outspeed instead? The Stellar tera type is there to help it deal more damage to clean up battles. (are there any notable KOs that Tatsugiri picks up with Stellar?)

If this pokemon gets knocked out early by a double up, suddenly you can not use Dondozo to its fullest potential because you can no longer use the ability Commander. (up to you but weezing-g can be mentioned since it completely shuts down commander) A few good partners are Dondozo as commander gives it +2 in every stat except evasion and accuracy, as well as Calyrex Shadow Rider as helping hand can help it easily Knock Out many pokemon with Astral Barrage. Additionally, Muddy Water can also help out against Incineroar, which are commonly used to check Calyrex. (Can you mention partners that help Tatsugiri with double ups?) Rather than simply mentioning partners, check and threats in this paragraph, you should explain the synergy Dondozo and Tatsugiri-D have with the Calyrex-S and Galarian Weezing team

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