LC Mareanie [QC:1/1] [GP:0/1]

[Pengairxan]

Mareanie @ Eviolite
Ability: Regenerator
Level: 5
Tera Type: Dragon
EVs: 116 HP / 100 Def / 252 SpA / 20 SpD
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Sludge Bomb
- Ice Beam
- Mud Shot
- Recover

Mareanie offensively outwalls the competition! Making use of its incredible bulk and Regenerator to lean more into its special attack turns it into a great offensive threat itself, allowing it to reliably 2HKO foes such as Vullaby with Ice Beam and OHKO Grookey with Sludge Bomb, while still defensively handling threats like Salandit and Mienfoo. Sludge Bomb is Mareanie's main offensive tool, checking threats such as Grookey and Shellder. Ice Beam nails Ground- and Flying-types like Toedscool and Vullaby and 2HKOs Foongus after Stealth Rock chip. Finally, Mud Shot catches checks such as opposing Mareanie, Chinchou, Tinkatink, and Stunky, while lowering Speed and enabling Mareanie to outspeed foes such as Glimmet after a Mud Shot and remove them safely. Tera Dragon enables Mareanie to comfortably handle threats such as Elekid and Chinchou. Toedscool and Alolan Sandshrew provide support to Mareanie by clearing entry hazards with Rapid Spin, making up for Mareanie's decreased bulk while appreciating its ability to handle threats such as Mienfoo. Toedscool can further support Mareanie by taking on Electric- and Water-types it cannot, such as Elekid, Mudbray, and Alolan Diglett. Meanwhile, Alolan Sandshrew can handle problematic Flying-types such as Vullaby and Wingull for Mareanie.

 

[Pengairxan]

BENCHRIDER This is ready for QC.

 

[xonks]

amqc, implement what you want

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Mareanie @ Eviolite
Ability: Regenerator
Level: 5
Tera Type: Dragon / Ghost check w the qc team for this
EVs: 116 HP / 100 Def / 252 SpA / 20 SpD
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Sludge Bomb
- Ice Beam
- Mud Shot
- Recover

Mareanie offensively outwalls the competition! Making use of Mareanie's incredible bulk to lean more into its special attack turns it into a great offensive threat itself, now being able to reliably 2HKO foes such as Vullaby and Foongus with Ice Beam and OHKO Grookey with Sludge Bomb (RC) after Stealth Rock grook isn't too relevant rn, i would just say main damaging move + can fish poison, like what you have in the next sentence while still enabling it to defensively handle threats like Salandit Shellder and Mienfoo. i think you should add smth about regen + recover checking foo, not sure if salandit is the best mention as it is pretty niche + tblast ground/psy cooks it Sludge Bomb is Mareanie's main offensive tool, (AC) checking threats such as Mienfoo, (AC) Grookey, (AC) and Shellder. can probably add smth about mare's bulk letting it repeatedly fish for poisons Ice Beam nails Grass-, (AC) Ground-, (AC) and Flying-types like Foongus, (AC) Toedscool, (AC) Mudbray, (AC) and Vullaby. Finally, Mud Shot catches would be would-be checks such as opposing Mareanie, (AC) Elekid, (AC) and Chinchou could add more, like the poisons (stunk/glim) + steels (snowshrew/tink) along with reducing speed, (AC) enabling Mareanie to comfortably outspeed foes such as Glimmet and Alolan Sandshrew 2hko after rocks after a Mud Shot and remove them without much worry i'm a bit iffy on this wording since opposing glim will often click mud shot, and snowshrew can come in on sludge but should be fine. Tera Dragon enables Mareanie to comfortably handle would be would-be checks such as Elekid and Chinchou. ghost is to escape goth traps + spinblock Mareanie greatly enjoys Toedscool as a teammate as it can handle opposing Electric- and Ground-types such as Elekid, (AC) Mudbray, (AC) and Alolan Diglett. i would add toed struggling w foo and spin support, also prob want a hrlowithe blitz mention Elekid can provide solid support and check opposing Water-types for Mareanie like Wingull and Dewpider. not sure if this is the best as wingull is pretty niche, and mare lives cane and kos with sludge

 

[sunny]

xonks fyi we do not allow AMQCs for spotlights; I am not gonna delete the above though

 

[rahul_3301]

qc 1/1

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Mareanie @ Eviolite
Ability: Regenerator
Level: 5
Tera Type: Dragon
EVs: 116 HP / 100 Def / 252 SpA / 20 SpD
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Sludge Bomb
- Ice Beam
- Mud Shot
- Recover

Mareanie offensively outwalls the competition! Making use of Mareanie's its incredible bulk and Regenerator to lean more into its special attack turns it into a great offensive threat itself, now being able allowing it to reliably 2HKO foes such as Vullaby with Ice Beam and OHKO Grookey with Sludge Bomb, while still enabling it to defensively handle handling threats like Salandit and Mienfoo. Sludge Bomb is Mareanie's main offensive tool, (AC) checking threats such as Grookey and Shellder. Ice Beam nails Ground- and Flying-types like Toedscool and Vullaby. add a line about ice beam being able to 2hko foongus after rocks damage Finally, Mud Shot catches would be would-be checks such as opposing Mareanie and Chinchou mention stunky and tinkatink too, you can reword the "would-be checks" part as oh it hits all these mons and also helps to outspeed glimmet and opposing mareanie after one hit, (AC) while lowering Speed and along with reducing speed enabling Mareanie to comfortably outspeed foes such as Glimmet after a Mud Shot and remove them without much worry safely. Tera Dragon enables Mareanie to comfortably handle would be checks threats such as Elekid and Chinchou. Mareanie greatly enjoys Toedscool as a teammate, (AC) as it can handle opposing Electric- and Ground-types such as Elekid and Alolan Diglett add mudbray too. Elekid can provide solid support and check opposing Water-types for Mareanie, (AC) like Wingull and Dewpider. dewpider is not used much, i would say change elekid into alolan sandshrew, smth along the lines of how mare can check foo which helps shrew and shrew can clear entry hazards which are bad for mare because. less bulk. adding all this should still be less than 1000 characters but i can help edit if not.

 

[Pengairxan]

qc 1/1

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Mareanie @ Eviolite
Ability: Regenerator
Level: 5
Tera Type: Dragon
EVs: 116 HP / 100 Def / 252 SpA / 20 SpD
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Sludge Bomb
- Ice Beam
- Mud Shot
- Recover

Mareanie offensively outwalls the competition! Making use of Mareanie's its incredible bulk and Regenerator to lean more into its special attack turns it into a great offensive threat itself, now being able allowing it to reliably 2HKO foes such as Vullaby with Ice Beam and OHKO Grookey with Sludge Bomb, while still enabling it to defensively handle handling threats like Salandit and Mienfoo. Sludge Bomb is Mareanie's main offensive tool, (AC) checking threats such as Grookey and Shellder. Ice Beam nails Ground- and Flying-types like Toedscool and Vullaby. add a line about ice beam being able to 2hko foongus after rocks damage Finally, Mud Shot catches would be would-be checks such as opposing Mareanie and Chinchou mention stunky and tinkatink too, you can reword the "would-be checks" part as oh it hits all these mons and also helps to outspeed glimmet and opposing mareanie after one hit, (AC) while lowering Speed and along with reducing speed enabling Mareanie to comfortably outspeed foes such as Glimmet after a Mud Shot and remove them without much worry safely. Tera Dragon enables Mareanie to comfortably handle would be checks threats such as Elekid and Chinchou. Mareanie greatly enjoys Toedscool as a teammate, (AC) as it can handle opposing Electric- and Ground-types such as Elekid and Alolan Diglett add mudbray too. Elekid can provide solid support and check opposing Water-types for Mareanie, (AC) like Wingull and Dewpider. dewpider is not used much, i would say change elekid into alolan sandshrew, smth along the lines of how mare can check foo which helps shrew and shrew can clear entry hazards which are bad for mare because. less bulk. adding all this should still be less than 1000 characters but i can help edit if not.

Wouldn't it make more sense to cover Alolan Sandshrew and Toedscruel spinning in a sentence first then cover what they check invidually.
So would something like: "Toedscool and Alolan Sandshrew provide support to Mareanie by being able to clear away entry hazards with Rapid Spin, making up for Mareanie's decreased bulk while apprecating it handling threats such as Mienfoo." Then cover what each check in the next sentences.
Also I'm fairly unfamiliar with Alolan Sandshrew so I would like to make sure what I've got for it is right.

 

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