AAA Moth to her Flame (Desoland Iron Moth)

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[SET]
Desolate Land (Iron Moth) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Desolate Land
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Fiery Dance
- U-turn / Toxic
- Morning Sun
- Discharge / Dazzling Gleam / Sludge Wave

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Moth makes a great offensive pivot in the tier thanks to its high Special Attack, good Speed tier, and ability to utilize Desolate Land excellently with Fiery Dance and Morning Sun. U-turn lets Iron Moth pivot out from Pokemon that threaten it such as Azelf, Roaring Moon, and Dragonite. Toxic can cripple switch-ins such as Meloetta and Manaphy. Discharge threatens Pokemon like Barraskewda, Primordial Sea Manaphy, Well-Baked Body Corviknight, and Mandibuzz. Dazzling Gleam can 2HKO Dragon-types such as Walking Wake, Dragonite, and RegenVest Roaring Moon, and can OHKO Kommo-o and offensive Roaring Moon. Sludge Wave OHKOs Pokemon like Ogerpon-H and Barraskewda, as well as being able to 2HKO Zapdos and Scream Tail. Iron Moth struggles to break through RegenVest Pokemon such as Hisuian Goodra, Meloetta, and Manaphy, so it pairs well with other offensive Pokemon such as Ceruledge, Weavile, and Thundurus, while in return, Iron Moth is able to absorb Toxic Spikes which can be crucial for its teammates. Iron Moth is weak to Knock Off users like Manaphy, which can allow for it to get chipped down by entry hazards, so it appreciates hazard removal from Pokemon such as Great tusk and Corviknight. Iron Moth also appreciates entry hazards from the likes of Garchomp, Heatran, and Empoleon, which wears down the opposing team, letting Iron Moth guarantee an OHKO on Zamazenta-C as well as pick off weakened Manaphy and Hisuian Goodra. Pivots such as Azelf, Zapdos, and Corviknight can pair well with U-turn Iron Moth sets by forming a VoltTurn core, letting Iron Moth pivot in on Pokemon it checks.

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yokoisop said:
[SET]
Desoland Desolate Land (Iron Moth) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Desolate Land
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Fiery Dance
- U-turn / Toxic slashed on smogdex set
- Morning Sun
- Discharge / Dazzling Gleam / Sludge Wave

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Moth makes a great offensive pivot in the tier thanks to its high Special attack, good Speed tier, and being able to utilize Desolate Land well with Fiery Dance and Morning Sun. U-turn lets Iron Moth to Pivot out on Pokemon that threaten it such as Azelf and Dragonite. mention how toxic can cripple switch-ins Discharge threatens an OHKO on Barraskewda, while potentially crippling Primordial Sea Manaphy, Well-Baked-Body Corviknight, and Mandibuzz. Dazzling Gleam can help against 2HKOes "can help against" isn't very specific" Dragon-types such as Roaring Moon, Walking Wake, and Dragonite. Walking Wake, Dragonite, and RegenVest Roaring Moon, while OHKOing offensive Roaring Moon. Sludge Wave hits Pokemon like Ogerpon-H OHKOing it, mention how it also OHKOs barraskewda as well as being able to 2HKO Zapdos and Scream Tail. Iron Moth struggles to break Through RegenVest Pokemon such as Hisuian Goodra, Meloetta, and Manaphy so it can pair well with other offensive Pokemon such as Ceruledge, Weavile, and Thundurus. Due to Common Knock Off users such as Manaphy, Empoleon, and Azelf, Iron Moth can appreciate hazard removal just in case from Pokemon such as Corviknight, Great tusk, and Mandibuzz. realistically you shouldn't be letting it take a knock off from these pokemon Iron Moth also appreciates entry hazards from the likes of Garchomp, Heatran, and Empoleon, which can wear down the opposing team putting them in range for Iron Moth to OHKO. specific calcs? Pokemon such as Azelf, Zapdos, and Corviknight can pair well with Iron Moth running U-turn as well being able form a pivot spam VoltTurn core, letting Iron Moth pivot in on Pokemon it checks.

[SET CREDITS]
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Desoland (Iron Moth) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Desolate Land
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Fiery Dance
- U-turn
- Morning Sun / Toxic
- Discharge / Dazzling Gleam / Sludge Wave

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Moth makes a great offensive pivot in the tier thanks to its high Special attack, good Speed tier, and being able to utilize Desolate Land well with Fiery Dance and Morning Sun. U-turn lets Iron Moth to Pivot out on Pokemon that threaten it such as Azelf and Dragonite. Line about Toxic cripping switch-ins and wearing down potential answers goes here Discharge threatens Pokemon such as Barraskewda, Primordial Sea Manaphy, Well-Baked-Body Corviknight, and Mandibuzz. Dazzling Gleam can help against 2HKO Dragon-types such as Roaring Moon, Walking Wake, and Dragonite, and RegenVest Roaring Moon, while OHKOing Kommo-O and offensive Roaring Moon. Sludge Wave hits OHKOs Pokemon like Ogerpon-H and Barraskewda OHKOing it, as well as being able to 2HKO Zapdos and Scream Tail. Iron Moth struggles to break Through RegenVest Pokemon such as Hisuian Goodra, Meloetta, and Manaphy so it can pair well with other offensive Pokemon such as Ceruledge, Weavile, and Thundurus. mention that part of why iron moth pairs well with these threats is them explicitly beating regenvests Due to Common Knock Off users such as Manaphy, Empoleon, and Azelf, Iron Moth can appreciate hazard removal just in case from Pokemon such as Corviknight, Great tusk, and Mandibuzz. this is phrased kind of awkwardly, but also Iron Moth really shouldn't be taking a knock off unless it's in a bad spot. you can mention iron moths weakness to the common knock off, though Iron Moth also appreciates entry hazards from the likes of Garchomp, Heatran, and Empoleon, which can wear down the opposing team putting them in range for Iron Moth to OHKO. some relevant calcs here would be nice PokemonPivots such as Azelf, Zapdos, and Corviknight can pair well with U-Turn Iron Moth as well being able form ,forming a pivot spam VoltTurn core, letting Iron Moth pivot in on Pokemon it checks.

some grammar and phrasing issues here, but thats for GP to work out

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QC 1/2!
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excellent work this time, i'm having you credited as part of qc1. a few missed details like kommo-o but regardless, great job!
 
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[SET]
Desolate Land (Iron Moth) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Desolate Land
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Fiery Dance
- U-turn / Toxic
- Morning Sun
- Discharge / Dazzling Gleam / Sludge Wave

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Moth makes a great offensive pivot in the tier thanks to a high Special Attack Special attack, good Speed tier, and being able to utilize Desolate Land excellently with Fiery Dance and Morning Sun. U-turn lets Iron Moth Pivot out from Pokemon that threaten it such as Azelf, (add comma) Roaring Moon, and Dragonite. Toxic can criple switch-ins such as Meloetta and Manaphy. Discharge threatens Pokemon like Barraskewda, Primordial Sea Manaphy, Well-Baked-Body Corviknight, and Mandibuzz. Dazzling Gleam can 2HKO Dragon-types such as Walking Wake, Dragonite, and RegenVest Roaring Moon, while OHKOing Kommo-O and offensive Roaring Moon. Sludge Wave OHKOs Pokemon like Ogerpon-H and Barraskewda, as well as being able to 2HKO Zapdos and Scream Tail. Iron Moth struggles to breakthrough RegenVest Pokemon such as Hisuian Goodra, Meloetta, and Manaphy, so it pairs well with other offensive Pokemon such as Ceruledge, Weavile, and Thundurus (also mention that it absorbs toxic spikes, which is VERY Crucial to some offensive teams given how weak they can be to toxic debris). Iron Moth is weak to Knock Off users like Manaphy, which can allow for it to get chiped down by entry hazards, so it can appreciate hazard removal from Pokemon such as Great tusk and Corviknight. Iron Moth also appreciates entry hazards from the likes of Garchomp, Heatran, and Empoleon, which wears down the opposing team, letting Iron Moth gurantee guarantee an OHKO on Zamazenta-C and can also pick off weaken Hisuian Goodra / Manaphy. Pivots such as Azelf, Zapdos, and Corviknight can pair well with U-turn Iron Moth sets, forming a VoltTurn core, letting Iron Moth pivot in on Pokemon it checks.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yokoisop.617542/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/kinetic1000.552227/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/gimmickyasitgets.540420
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/tranquility.475288/
Grammar checked by:
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QC 2/2


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Tranquility said:
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[SET]
Desolate Land (Iron Moth) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Desolate Land
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Fiery Dance
- U-turn / Toxic
- Morning Sun
- Discharge / Dazzling Gleam / Sludge Wave

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Moth makes a great offensive pivot in the tier thanks to a high Special Attack Special attack, good Speed tier, and being able to utilize Desolate Land excellently with Fiery Dance and Morning Sun. U-turn lets Iron Moth Pivot out from Pokemon that threaten it such as Azelf, (add comma) Roaring Moon, and Dragonite. Toxic can criple switch-ins such as Meloetta and Manaphy. Discharge threatens Pokemon like Barraskewda, Primordial Sea Manaphy, Well-Baked-Body Corviknight, and Mandibuzz. Dazzling Gleam can 2HKO Dragon-types such as Walking Wake, Dragonite, and RegenVest Roaring Moon, while OHKOing Kommo-O and offensive Roaring Moon. Sludge Wave OHKOs Pokemon like Ogerpon-H and Barraskewda, as well as being able to 2HKO Zapdos and Scream Tail. Iron Moth struggles to breakthrough RegenVest Pokemon such as Hisuian Goodra, Meloetta, and Manaphy, so it pairs well with other offensive Pokemon such as Ceruledge, Weavile, and Thundurus (also mention that it absorbs toxic spikes, which is VERY Crucial to some offensive teams given how weak they can be to toxic debris). Iron Moth is weak to Knock Off users like Manaphy, which can allow for it to get chiped down by entry hazards, so it can appreciate hazard removal from Pokemon such as Great tusk and Corviknight. Iron Moth also appreciates entry hazards from the likes of Garchomp, Heatran, and Empoleon, which wears down the opposing team, letting Iron Moth gurantee guarantee an OHKO on Zamazenta-C and can also pick off weaken Hisuian Goodra / Manaphy. Pivots such as Azelf, Zapdos, and Corviknight can pair well with U-turn Iron Moth sets, forming a VoltTurn core, letting Iron Moth pivot in on Pokemon it checks.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yokoisop.617542/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/kinetic1000.552227/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/gimmickyasitgets.540420
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/tranquility.475288/
Grammar checked by:
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QC 2/2


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[SET]
Desolate Land (Iron Moth) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Desolate Land
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Fiery Dance
- U-turn / Toxic
- Morning Sun
- Discharge / Dazzling Gleam / Sludge Wave

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Moth makes a great offensive pivot in the tier thanks to a its high Special Attack, good Speed tier, and being able ability to utilize Desolate Land excellently with Fiery Dance and Morning Sun. U-turn lets Iron Moth pivot out from Pokemon that threaten it such as Azelf, Roaring Moon, and Dragonite. Toxic can criple cripple switch-ins such as Meloetta and Manaphy. Discharge threatens Pokemon like Barraskewda, Primordial Sea Manaphy, Well-Baked-Body (-hyphen) Corviknight, and Mandibuzz. Dazzling Gleam can 2HKO Dragon-types such as Walking Wake, Dragonite, and RegenVest Roaring Moon, while and can OHKOing Kommo-o and offensive Roaring Moon. Sludge Wave OHKOs OHKOes Pokemon like Ogerpon-H and Barraskewda, as well as being able to 2HKOes Zapdos and Scream Tail. Iron Moth struggles to break through (add space) RegenVest Pokemon such as Hisuian Goodra, Meloetta, and Manaphy, so it pairs well with other offensive Pokemon such as Ceruledge, Weavile, and Thundurus, while in return, Ceruledge Iron Moth (assume this is what you meant here) is able to absorb Toxic Spikes which can be crucial for its teammates. Iron Moth is weak to Knock Off users like Manaphy, which can allow for it to get chiped chipped down by entry hazards, so it can appreciate appreciates hazard removal from Pokemon such as Great Tusk and Corviknight. Iron Moth also appreciates entry hazards from the likes of Garchomp, Heatran, and Empoleon, which wears down the opposing team, letting Iron Moth guarantee an OHKO on Zamazenta-C, while also being able to as well as pick off weakened Manaphy and Hisuian Goodra. Pivots such as Azelf, Zapdos, and Corviknight can pair well with U-turn Iron Moth sets, (-comma) by forming a VoltTurn core, letting Iron Moth pivot in on Pokemon it checks.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yokoisop.617542/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/kinetic1000.552227/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/gimmickyasitgets.540420
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/tranquility.475288/
Grammar checked by:
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