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[Mr. X]

the following is my first rmt here, im italian so forgive me if i made grammar mistake



happy (Hippowdon) (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Sand Stream
EVs: 252 HP/16 Atk/152 Def/88 SDef
Impish nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Stealth Rock
- Slack Off
- Roar
my lead he put SR and counter any fisical hits

red steel (Scizor) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Technician
EVs: 32 HP/252 Atk/224 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Swords Dance
- Brick Break
- Bullet Punch
- Roost
standard SD

msdos (Zapdos) @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP/80 Def/176 Spd
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Heat Wave
- Thunderbolt
- Roost
- Hidden Power [Ice]
176 spd to outspeed lucario he likes cm boost from celebi

Sgt (Empoleon) (M) @ Petaya Berry
Ability: Torrent
EVs: 28 HP/12 Def/216 Spd/252 SAtk
Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Agility
- Ice Beam
- Surf
- Substitute
special sweeper he like the CM boost

magma (Heatran) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 252 Spd/252 SAtk/6 SDef
Hasty nature (+Spd, -Def)
- Earth Power
- Fire Blast
- Hidden Power [Electric]
- Explosion
LO tran after few cm its really scared unfortunately is quie slow

bibi (Celebi) @ Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 HP/80 Def/176 Spd
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Calm Mind
- Baton Pass
- Grass Knot
- Recover
he boost my sweeper and sometimes my wall hippo

 

[TAY]

You need to take a look at the RMT Rules, specifically:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

If you fix this up then PM me and I will unlock the thread.