XY UU My 1st attempt on making a Team

[Calvin Chen]

Hi, This is my 1st attempt on making a team, I am sorry if this RMT structure is not up to standard...

Aggron @ Aggronite

Ability: Heavy Metal
EVs: 252 HP / 252 SpD
Impish Nature
- Power-Up Punch
- Earthquake
- Heavy Slam
- Stealth Rock

The main powerhouse of the team, Mega Aggron is a tank and a beast, I decided it to be my main pokemon. its job is to set up rocks then boost its attack high enough for EQ and Heavy Slam to finish the job

Scrafty @ Assault Vest

Ability: Moxie
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 SpD
Adamant Nature
- High Jump Kick
- Drain Punch
- Poison Jab
- Payback

Scrafty job in the team is to deal as much damage as possible and gain as much hp back as possible. I thought of maxing its attack to the fullest using adament and moxie, while giving the assault vest to boost its natural high sp def

Slurpuff @ Sitrus Berry

Ability: Unburden
EVs: 252 HP / 4 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Aromatherapy
- Cotton Guard
- Protect
- Dazzling Gleam

The cleric/staller of the team, Slurpuff is used to tank everything using cotton guard and protect, while aromatherapy is used to heal all status conditions of the team. Dazzling Gleam is there just for Taunters, (Im thinking of putting toxic into one of the slots, but im not sure what to switch out)

Goodra @ Assault Vest
Ability: Gooey
EVs: 236 HP / 252 SpA / 16 SpD / 4 Spe
Modest Nature
- Dragon Pulse
- Flamethrower
- Thunderbolt
- Sludge Wave

The sp def tank of the team, Goodra is used to tank as much sp att as possible while providing coverage for my team

Delphox

Ability: Magician
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Heat Wave
- Grass Knot
- Psyshock
- Shadow Ball

Delphox role in my team is to provide more sp att coverage, while mainly stealing an opponent item, breaking it down

Porygon2 @ Eviolite

Ability: Analytic
EVs: 220 HP / 220 SpA / 68 SpD
Sassy Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Toxic
- Recover
- Tri Attack
- Charge Beam

Porygon2 role is to toxic stall out the opponent as much as possible, while boosting its attacks and try for a random status condition.

Weaknesses

ResTalk Torkoal - This guy is able to completely wall out my team while putting me to sleep. STAB used is Lava Plume

Fake Out HJK Mienshao -

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[r0ady]

Hey friend welcome to team building :)

Anyway I'm not really sure what you're going for with your slurpuff, its a wall with max speed? Lol
Anyway I believe that a defensive floreges outclasses it, and it should be changed to it. Floreges also gets much higher bulk and although no access to cotton guard cotton guard isn't really helping your slurpuff with out a form of recovery, not to mention helping your mienshao problem. Here's the set I would suggest:

Floreges Leftovers
Bold nature
Ability doesn't matter
252 defense 252 HP 4 special attack
-wish
-aromatherapy
-protect
-moonblast

Hope I helped :)

 

[Calvin Chen]

Hey friend welcome to team building :)

Anyway I'm not really sure what you're going for with your slurpuff, its a wall with max speed? Lol
Anyway I believe that a defensive floreges outclasses it, and it should be changed to it. Floreges also gets much higher bulk and although no access to cotton guard cotton guard isn't really helping your slurpuff with out a form of recovery, not to mention helping your mienshao problem. Here's the set I would suggest:

Floreges Leftovers
Bold nature
Ability doesn't matter
252 defense 252 HP 4 special attack
-wish
-aromatherapy
-protect
-moonblast

Hope I helped :)

Thx for the suggestion, (that part was the showdown simulator "suggested EV spread"... ) I'll customize it and do some battles

 

[DMT]

Hey, welcome to UU teambuilding :]

Couple suggestions. On top of what Calvin said above (you can also go with Aromatisse for bigger wishes), I'd suggest swapping out power up punch for roar on Mega-Aggron. Having a phasing move is always a good idea, so you don't get setup on by things like resttalk Torkoal.

Next, I'd suggest changing Scrafty up a little bit. While the extra special bulk that AV gives you is nice, your team doesn't really have a 'win condition'. If you give it a little more speed, Dragon Dance Scrafty could act as your main sweeper, after Mega-Aggron weakens it's counters (such as crobat or florges). If you swap out either Drain Punch or High Jump Kick, as well as Payback for the more powerful Knock off, you should have an easier time cleaning up weakened teams.

Last suggestion would be scarf Delphox. I didn't see an item for Delphox in the RMT, so if you've not decided, scarf is a good way to go. You'll outspeed Mienshao, as well as he able to cripple things like Torkoal/Suicune/Umbreon.

Those are my suggestions, let me know what you think. :]

 

[IronBullet]

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