My First 5th Gen. OU Team

[salamence1]

Ok I hope I do this right its my first post on smogon and its a RMT...Alright I've been using this team on po and it's23-4 already ,but i want to improve that more.

First I have Jirachi

Jirachi@ChoiseScarf
4hp 252atk 252spe
Iron Head
Fire Punch
Ice Puch
U-turn
Nature:Jolly

My lead is scarf rachi because it can due some serious damage to a lot of pokes and the ones it can't it just u-turns out then revenge kills later

Second is Rotom-W

Rotom-W@ChoiseScarf
4hp 252 spatk 252spe
Volt Change
Thunder Bolt
Hidden Power (Fire)
Hydro Pump
Nature:Modest

Rotom-W makes a great scarf partner for rachi covering all of its weaknesses and being able to hit everything rachi can't

For my third poke I have Hydreigon

Hydreigon@LifeOrb
4hp 252 spatk 252spe
Draco Meteor
Dark Pulse
Fire Blast
Focus Blast
Nature:Modest

I'm using this set to take care of a lot of walls like skarmory ferrothorn and Jellicent making it easier to sweep

My fourth is Ferrothorn

Ferrothorn@Leftovers
252hp 48def 208spdef
steath rocks
leech seed
gyroball
power whip
Nature:relaxed

Ferrothorn is a beast I can get rocks up and chip away a my opponets Gyroball has alot of power on almost everything and deals with most latios and latias as long as they dont have hp fire

Then for my fith I have Reiniclus

Reuniclus@LifeOrb
172hp 32def 252spa 52spdef
Trick Room
Pycho shock
Focus Blast
Shadow Ball
Nature:Quiet

this poke is great for my team because it can sweep almost anything I have psycho shock so blissey can't stop a sweep quiet so its slower than everything other than ferrothorn

Finally I have my favorite pokemon Conkeldurr

Conkeldurr@Leftovers
200hp 252atk 56spd
Bulk Up
Drain Punch
Mach Punch
PayBack
Nature:Adamant

You can't go wrong with 140 base attack and mach puch after two bulk ups and the removel of gengar latios/latas and the rare espeon this thing kills and tears up sand storm teams that get more commom everyday


I hope you can help me improve this team. Help me out if I did something wrong i'll try to go back and fix it

 

[Jirachee]

Hey there, you are probably excited of posting your first team, but you need to improve the descriptions. describe the roles of each of your pokemon, the synergy it has with other team members, etc. Maybe you should look to other RMTs so you can have a good idea what to write? Because it's pretty difficult to rate a team that isn't well described.

 

[haunter]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Take a look at the RMT archive to see what kind of descriptions we are looking for. PM me the fixed descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.