my first competitive OU team XD *re edited*

help with my first competitive OU team!

Yeah so recently started competitive battling and dont really have the gist of it. So i need help with improvement on my team. it worked fairly well against my friends team but dunno if really suitable for real competitive battling. (after u se this.. yeah im a noob XD) so plz give me advice on strategies and wht to take out change etx :] thankyou for your time!

major flaws of my team:
fire (haha man most of tema will be destroyed by that)
ground
nothing to deal with stealth rocks
no real strategy in general X_X

Lead: Celebi
Item: Focus Sash
Nature: Modest
76 HP / 252 SpA / 180 Spe
Moveset:
Stealth Rock
U Turn
Earthpower
Leafstorm

so basically i would either use celibi to stealth rock due to its decent speed. If im outspeeded then u turn will get me out of the situation for a better support. (most likely scizor if its possible to spam u turn ). Pretty muchy i use delibi to deal with the common leads out tehere like swampert, T-tar, Azel, aerodactyl. Attack like earthpower can deal with T- Tar and leafstorm can usually 2 hit Aerodactyl and do some heavy damage on Swampert. Uturn to Scizor to break an Azels sash with priority moves.

Bulky Dragonite
Item: Life Orb
Nature: Adamant
224 HP / 84 Atk / 200 Spe
Moveset:
Dragon Dance
Dragon Claw
Earthquake
Roost

After I pull out one dragon dance I chose dragon claw rather then outrage so i can use roost freely when needed while dragonite sweeps. Earthquake is to deal with steel types like Metagross. If bulky waters like milotic or vaporeon (basically any thing with icebeam) or T-tar with stone edge appear i will switch out with metacross. vaporeon will support him if a salamance appears.

Phy. Sweeper/Scout: Scizor
Item: Life orb
Nature: Adamant
32 HP / 252 Atk / 224 Spe
Moveset:
Sword Dance
Bullet Punch
Super Power
Roost/ U turn

so yeah im gonna duke it out with sword dance and sweep. bullet punch to deal with pokemons who are fast like weavile and super power to finish off most other pokemon week to this hoep fully even if its neutral because of lifeorb. Roost and Uturn im not sure between the choices. I want to use scizor to scout out other teams pokemon and deal some nice damage while switching out if a heatran comes out (well not really nice but damage is damage) but its role will definitely be to support celibi as mentioned earlier if its not being used as a sweeper.

Supporter/ Spec. wall??: Vaporeon
Item: Leftovers
Nature: Bold
188 HP / 252 Def / 68 Spe
Moveset:
Wish
Protect
Surf
Icebeam

wish supporter :D since my celibi doesnt have leech seed and what not hoping that wish will be a nice way to heal my team. I wanted to use him to deal with dragon types like salamance so i have icebeam. Protect to scout out other moves but probaly notgonna use against something with sword dance or what not. but other then healing and dragon not sure what to do with it... can it be a suitable special wall?

Metagross: (not sure what this is good for in my team)
Item: Choice Band
Nature: Adamant
252 HP / 236 Atk / 12 Def / 8 Spe
Moveset:
Thunderpunch
Earthquake
Explosion
meteor mash

decided to use metagross as a support for my dragonite. It will help cover its major weekness of rock and ice with thunderpunch and earthquake. Explosion is to handel any pesky fire types or anything my team cant deal with.

Special Sweeper: Lucario
Item: Choice Spec
Nature: Timid
4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Moveset:
Aura Sphere
Dragon Pulse
Dark Pulse
Psychic/ Vacuum wave?

yeah i dont really consider my lucario as that great. I just thought it would surprise the opponent if they saw a special sweeping lucario XD Its moveset has ability to deal with most situations my team would get stuck in. IF Dragonite falls to a salamance or what not Salamance will have a nasty surprise fom dragon pulse. IT can handle study walls fairly well like a duscnoir who might attempt to willowisp it and cut down his attack ;D (man my thoughts are ridiculous XD_ )

yeah so basically gonna battle at tournament at school and wondering what i should change out XP i feel as if i have too much weakness to fire and ground and lack walls... yeah advice plz im not good at all especially when it comes to strategizing in pokemon. so once again plz give my critique cause i have no rael idea what im doing but this is what i have so far.
 
These are the edits I think you should make:
Change Metagross to the lead
Metagross @ Occa Berry
Clear Body
Adamant
252 HP / 236 Atk / 8 Def / 12 Spd
-Stealth Rock
-Bullet Punch
-Earthquake
-Explosion
Metagross is a great lead, and wasn't really doing much on your team from what I can tell.

You can make Celebi a defensive Pokemon, a Cleric, or a Bulky Special Sweeper. I would go with a bulky special sweeper, because I think your team could use one.
Celebi @ Leftovers
Natural Cure
Modest
232 HP / 244 Sp.Atk / 32 Spd
-Leaf Storm
-Psychic / Hidden Power (Fire)
-Thunder Wave
-Recover
Celebi is pretty bulky, and has good Sp.Atk, so this is a great way to use him.

I would suggest using a Jolteon over Lucario, he has the same Sp.Atk but is much faster.
Jolteon @ Choice Specs
Volt Absorb
Timid
4 HP / 252 Spd / 252 Sp.Atk
-Thunderbolt
-Shadow Ball
-Signal Beam
-Hidden Power (Ice)

Change Ice Beam on Vaporeon to Hidden Power Electric, otherwise opposing bulky waters like Gyarados, Suicune, and Swampert will be able to set up on you.

Other than that everything is good, I like the pokemon you chose to use, but it just wasn't the right time for a specs Luke. All in all good team.
 
thanks for the advice! :D definitely gonna change metagross to lead I was actaully debating that before. But about celebi. My team seems to be lacking in any form of defence, and theres still the fact that if anything with fire attacks comeing in would most likely also know earthquake and dominate my team. (ex:)

Heatran
item: Choice scarf
Nature: Rash
4 Atk / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Move set:
Fire Blast
explosion
Earth Power
Drgon pulse

fireblast from a heatran with enough Sp. Atk IV woudl obliterate most of my team. Dragon pulse will take out my D. Knight especailly since the heatran has choice scarf and Explosion could deal with my vaporeon (maybe)

would heatran be a good choice for this team o.o;;
 
You could try using TormenTran on your team to replace Lucario, or you could just use ScarfTran if you're looking for a good special sweeper.
 
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