My first competitive team.

[Meepsterplex]

Mienshao
Item:None
Moves:
U-Turn
Drain Punch
Acrobatics
Stone Edge

This Meinshao can do decent damage to many of the common leads, and U-Turn if it gets in trouble.

Ferrothorn
Item: Leftovers
Moves:
Leech Seed
Substitute
Hone Claws
Facade

Alright, this guy switches into toxic stalls because of his immunity, Seeds tough walls like chansey, bronzong, and umbreon, and can do some real damage after a Hone Claws or 2, especially if he has a status condition.

Hydreigon
Item:White Herb
Moves:
Surf
Flamethrower
Bite
Draco Meteor

This pokemon is used mostly for late-game sweeping. The set is fairly simple, but packs quite a punch.

Metagross
Item:Iron Plate
Moves:
Bullet Punch
Zen Headbutt
Earthquake
Hammer Arm

This pokemon is a revenge killer, using Zen Headbutt on fighting types, and getting a priority strike on pokemon at low health, and then dishing out serious damage to whatever pokemon comes out next.

Milotic
Item:Rocky Helmet
Moves:
Ice Beam
Recover
Surf
Dragon Tail

This one can switch in to fire types that threaten the steel types, and phaze out pokemon who try to set up.

Machamp
Item:Life Orb
Moves:
DynamicPunch
Stone Edge
Bullet Punch
Ice Punch

This is a late game sweeper, fairly self-explanitory.

So, theres my team.All critisizm and suggestions are appreciated!

 

[haunter]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Take a look at the RMT archive to see what kind of descriptions we are looking for. PM me the fixed descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.

You also lack your EV spreads, so you'll have to add those as well.