My first competitive team

[Ice-Master]

i thought i would start off with crobat and sleep my opponent, then use u turn to switch in to whatever is needed

Crobat @ Black sludge
Inner Focus
252hp/216 spd/ 40 atk
Jolly
Hypnosis
Taunt
Aerial Ace
U-Turn

Like I said, I will usually start with this put the opponent to sleep and use u turn to switch

Weavile @ Expert Belt
4 hp/252 atk/252 spd
jolly
Pursuit
Brick Break
Ice Shard
Night Slash

i use expert belt because i dont like the choice items to much and i dont think I could use them to their fullest. i use ice shard mostly because i cnt get ice punch

Lucario @ Salac Berry
4hp/ 252 atk/ 252 spd
Jolly
Close Combat
Crunch
Swords Dance
Substitute

My swords dance sweeper

Gliscor @ Leftovers
252 hp/ 4 atk/ 252 def
Impish
EQ
Ice Fang
Knock off
Roost

my Physical wall

Duskinoir @ ?
252hp/ 52 def/ 204 sp def
Impish
Shadow sneak
thunder punch
will o whisp
pain split

my special wall. i dont know what item to use for him becuase i cant use another leftovers. im using thunder punch beacuse my team lacks that coverage

Porygon-Z @ silk scarf
4 hp/ 252 spd/ 252 sp atk
Timid
Tri attack
nasty plot
dark pulse
ice beam

i use ice beam beacause i couldnt get hp fighting


ok im ready for advice.....just dont be to harsh thanks in advance

 

[Darkartisan]

Crobat may not be a good idea to lead with.(Excuse me but I'm on my blackberry have to make it short)

With the addition to Deoxys S, many people, (including myself) use Deoxys S as a lead.

I suggest Weavile as your lead. Even though Bronzong dominates as a lead, anything else will get raped by Ice Shard and such (Tyranitar, Salamence,etc)

Hope I helped!

 

[Ice-Master]

i under stand what you say there and on smoogon before i thought of my crobat i did use weavile, but as the idea of crobat came to me i started thinking that he might be hard to switch in, with the exeption of a KO, he's fast but dies easily, thats why i chose u-turn, but thanx the advice did help it gives me somthing to think about

 

[Taylor]

Please familarize yourself with the RMT rules, otherwise you end up violating rules like this one:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by give an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.