my first ou team ever

[scizorkills]

this is my first ou please help

the anti lead

who thundurus
item-life orb
move set

taunt
hp ice
nasty plot
thundabolt
tmid
evs 6hp/252 special attack/252 spe

thundurs just rapes leads and ground types most of time i can fit in nasty plot to wreck teams
thundabolt is for powerful stab

whos trolling



you know it jirachi is
item-leftovers
subsitute
fire punch
iron head
bodyslam
jolly nature
4hp/252atk/252spe

who dosent hate jirachi he just keps on trolling he is too beastly

the scout/revenge killer


who is that ninja fox
252attk/252spe
item choice scarf
adamant nature
regenator
uturn
high jump kick
fake out
protect

he is so awsome with regen he just is invincible


the fat wall



bold nature
252 hp/252 def/4 spe def
leftovers
regenator

calm mind
scald
pyco shock
slack off

this dude is epic after a few cm he is too awsome

the sweeper

tmid nature
expert belt

draco meteor
hp fire
surf
memento

the idea is when i have to use draco meteor i spam it till low health then i use memento rendiring the apponent usless so it has to switch out

the lead


careful
rocky helmet
spikes
leech seed
ingrain
power whip
252 hp 252 special defense


dont hav to explain this one

 

[Faladran]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

Your descriptions are lacking, which puts you in violation of the rule above. Please elaborate more on each team member - about 3 or 4 solid sentences per member is a good goal to reach for. The RMT archive contains some examples of well-written RMTs. If you fix your descriptions, PM me with the updates and I'll be happy to unlock your thread.