My First OU Team

[sub.torterra]

Aerodactyl (♂) @ Expert Belt
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Stone Edge
- Earthquake
- Thunder Fang
- Ice Fang

Weavile (♂) @ Life Orb
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 40 HP/252 Atk/218 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Pursuit/Swords Dance
- Ice Shard
- Night Slash
- Brick Break

Steelix (♂) @ Leftovers
Ability: Sturdy
EVs: 252 HP/120 Atk/138 SDef
Impish nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Explosion
- Stealth Rock
- Toxic

Dusknoir (♂) @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP/76 Def/100 SAtk/80SpDef
Careful nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Pain Split
- Thunderpunch
- Shadow Sneak
- Will-o-wisp

Tangrowth (♂) @ Leftovers
Ability: Chlorophyll
EVs: 252 HP/228 Def/30 Spd
impish nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Power Whip
- Sleep Powder
- Stun Spore / Knock Off
- Leech Seed

Miltotic @ Leftovers
Bold Nature
148 HP / 240 Def / 120 SpA
~ Surf
~ Ice Beam
~ Recover
~ Hypnosis

Need Help!!!

 

[Bogmire]

What exactly is thunder fang on aero supposed to cover? it does less than a STAB stone edge against gyarados (the only pokemon besides pelipper hit 4x effective by it). also aero has to be jolly, you don't want to be outrun by azelf or trickgross leads.

I might give a more in depth rate later but I just curious about tfang.

 

[X-Unknown019]

how come you have 2 sleep inducing moves? I suggest take off hypnosis of milotic since it got less accuracy than sleep powder and give your milo some other move.

 

[Scarlet Spyder]

This goes against the Rate-My-Team rules. There are no descriptions of your team members and their roles. It is hard to critique something so plain and dry.

 

[Taylor]

Carefully read the RMT rules before posting a team. If you do not, then your thread is likely to be violating one of those rules. You're more than welcome to repost your thread when you have read the rules thoroughly and have created a team which abides by the RMT rules.