My first Pokemon team! (rate it plox)

[4nc]

so here is mah team

lead (physical sweaper) toxicroak! (252 attack) (252 speed) (6 def) naive

fake out
earthquake
sucker punch
poison jab

hes just a physical sweeper. holding sash

mismagius! (special sweeper) (252 sp. at) (252 speed) (6 sp.def) naive

taunt
thunderbolt
shadow ball
energy ball

yeah just a special sweeper and anti-set up somtimes, thinking about making him lead you tell me :) holding focus band

lanturn! (all round wall)(252 hp max hp) (252 sp.def) (sp def) jolly
often dozes off.. is what maxes hp how ever i have a big downside to this pokemon it has the illuminate ability

thunderbolt
stockpile
hydropump
thunder wave

its just a wall. holding leftovers


probopass!!!!@@!@! L0L (252 def evs max def) (252 sp.def) (wall aswell)bold

earth powar
stone edge / explosion.
toxic
thunder wave

status inflicting wall. holding leftys

electivire! (physical sweepa) (252 att) (252 spd) (6 uhh idk) addamant nature

thunder punch
ice punch
brick break
earthquake

just a sweepa. holding sash or choice scarf


last but not leeast !scyther! (252 at) (252 speed (6 hp) lonely (physica sweeper)

quick attack
aerial ace
x-scizor
swords dance

teqnician sweeper.. holding sash

 

[diinbong]

There are a few RMT rules I'd like for you to take a gander at:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

6. Formatting. Make your post readable. If the format is messy and illegible you will not be likely to receive help and may have your thread locked. Adding pictures to your post can make it more visually appealing too, but pay attention to rule 11. Here is a guideline on how to post each Pokemon.

Pokemon @ Item
Ability:
EVs:
Nature:
- move
- move
- move
- move

*Detailed description of the Pokemon's purpose to the team*

This is not set in stone, but the above example or a slight variation thereof makes for a much "cleaner" post.

Alternately, you can use Shoddy's "Export to Text" feature under Tools, which gives you a simple, clean format similar to the one above with all the information already filled in for you. Again, though, make sure to add descriptions of each Pokemon.

 

[RBG]

PM with a version that meets the above rules and I will unlock it.