My first RMT (Super Offence 1 Shark 3 Drag)

[Hitmonchanman]

As stated in the title this is my first RMT and my first team which i have tried to make work. I wanted to build a team with Sharpedo and Dragonite my two favourite pokes this Gen thanks to their Dream World abilities.What I ended up with was a strange variant of a 4drag 2mag

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I started with Sharpedo and Dragonite, Sharpedo with a standard set and Dragonite with a DDance set

I wanted some Sp.Atk power so I added Latios and seeing the obvious I needed a Magneton/Magnezone I went with Magnezone as I like running analytic(On PO server) instead of magnet pull sometimes so i can LOL at people but i mainly use magnet pull for obvious reasons.

I wanted a suicide lead one which will take out general leads before the damage is done as this team hates hazards I went with lickilicky for Novelty value and Volcarona for crazy power.

This team was obviously crazy it was over in 2 minutes either way, mainly with me losing, I changed Lickilicky to Haxorus so I could take down more than one pokemon on most occasions I also changed Volcarona to Magneton to make it a magdragshark

And this is what I'm currently working on.

Haxorus

Haxy @ Choice Band
Ability: Rivalry
EVs:4HP/252Atk/252Spe
Nature: Adamant (+Atk -SpAtk)
- Earthquake
- Outrage
- Dual Chop
- Brick Break
Haxy my Haxorus and my lead, I'm not too sure about him but he seems to do the job, EQ any steel and Outrage nearly everything else with the occasional dual chop if I forsee a substitute. I like to use rivalry as 8/10 times the lead is either Male or Genderless and the boost can really make a difference beetween a 2Hko and a 1Hko, It's built for raw power and thats what it does.

Magneton

Magneton @ Eviolite
Ability: Magnet Pull
EVs:96HP/252SpAtk/160Spe
Nature: Modest(+SpAtk-Atk)
- Substitute
- Charge Beam
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power Fire
As sugggested by Dezza Laa, Charge beam set- Will add more


Dragonite

DDawg @ Lum Berry
Ability: Multiscale
EVs:252Atk/252Spe/4Hp
Nature: Adamant(+Atk-SpAtk)
- Roost
- Fire Punch
- Dragon Dance
- Dragon Claw
My DDawg, Switch in DD up and attempt a sweep with the occasional roost. This Poke is amazing OMNOMNOM DDawg will eat you for breakfast.

Sharpedo

Torpedo @ Life Orb
Ability: Speed Boost
EVs:252Atk/252Spd/4HP
Nature: Adamant(+Atk-SpAtk)
- Aqua Jet
- Waterfall
- Crunch
- Protect
This thing is a BEAST rips through unprepared teams. Aqua Jet kills low health Conkeldurrs and Lucarios etc. who think they can Mach punch/Bullet Punch me to death. The rest is Standard, Get in a protect and sweep-The perfect late game sweeper and deals with Heatran. The only poke I won't get rid of.

Latios

Lappers @ Choice Specs/Expert belt
Ability:Levitate
EVs:4HP/252SpAtk/252Spe
Nature:Timid(+Spe-Atk)
- Psyshock
- Draco Meteor
- Surf
- Thunderbolt
Latios all round great Poke, Have used Choice Specs but considering changing to Expert Belt, Mainly to deal with, well anything just pick a move, fire and switch out.

Magnezone

Gluey @ Air Baloon
Ability: Magnet Pull/Analytic
EVs: 252HP/252Spatk/4Def IVs- Spe 0/31
Nature: Quiet(+SpAtk-Spe)
- Thunderbolt
- Hp Fire
- Flash Cannon
- Explosion
Magnezone deals with Ferrothorn, Forretress and others with Hp Fire, Thunderbolt and Flash Cannon for stab and Explosion for The Big finish


Thats my team Its fared me well got over 1000 in a few hours, Suggestions needed anything except my dear torpedo :D

Thanks in advance.Hope this looks okay as it is my first one.

 

[Dezza Laa]

this is not 4drag2mag, it is just an offensive team.
4drag2mag is 4 DRAGONS 2 MAGNETON/ZONE
Jirachi is a silly choice. The aim of Drag Mag is to remove steels for Dragons (or in your case Sharpedo...) to have an easier time. Why on earth are you making it easier for steels to wall your team?

Sticking with Drag Mag I would suggest Eviolite Charge Beam Magneton. Standard set to have a second assurance against Steel types. I would personally make Magnezone a Choice Scarf variant, just to get some scouting and wearing things down. zYou may even want to try screens Doexy-s, for easier set up + hazards which is definately what shark thing wants.

Sharpedo wants Ice Fang > Aqua Jet.
I would give Dragonite Earthquake>FIre Punch.

 

[Hitmonchanman]

I thought a 4 drag 2 mag variant would make that clear but anyway >_>
As said I need help and this is the sorta stuff i need will try the changes thanks.

 

[King John]

DD Scrafty and special variants of Heatran (though uncommon) can spell trouble for this team. Scrafty can easily switch in after Haxorus Outrages and set up a few boosts before wreaking havoc, and Heatran can easily switch into Outrage and dispatch Haxorus outright with Dragon Pulse since Outrage can't OHKO it if unboosted.