My First RMT [UU]

CallMeChaos

The Team

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Brobat (Crobat) (M) @ Flying Gem
Trait: Inner Focus
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 Atk / 4 HP
Jolly Nature
- Acrobatics
- U-turn
- Confuse Ray
- Roost

Well i put Crobat in my team for 3 reason 1 being that i just wanted Crobat, 2 being that i wanted to name my Crobat Brobat after the Youtuber CoolStoryBrobat.The third reason is that I wanted a Revenge Killer and being able to get out with a confused poke with close to full health.And with Crobat i can do that with by using.Max Speed,Jolly Nature Flying Gem and Acrobatics he was a great revenge killer.Also having U-Turn and Roost making it icing on the cake.

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Naruto (Sableye) (M) @ Iron Ball
Trait: Prankster
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Spd / 4 Def
- Recover
- Taunt
- Will-O-Wisp
- Trick

You can't tell me that this frustrating little monster doesnt remind you of Naruto Uzumaki from.The anime Naruto and Naruto Shippuden.By being orange almost every where and it being the smallest in its group [By that being Ghost and Dark types].

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Fish (Sharpedo) (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Speed Boost
EVs: 252 Atk / 100 Spd / 156 HP
Adamant Nature
- Protect
- Crunch
- Waterfall
- Earthquake

Sharpedo being the main sweeper in my team by using protect and spamming whatever move that will best against it's foe.Personally Sharpedo was my favorite water type when i was a kid.I used him in ALL of the games where i could use him and it still is so i felt that it was neccessary to use him in this team.

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IWuvYouToo (Togekiss) (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Serene Grace
EVs: 252 HP / 252 SAtk / 4 spd
Timid Nature
- Air Slash
- Thunder Wave
- Roost
- Aura Sphere

I wanted to make people angry.So i grabbed Togekiss with the Smogon standard set with a few modifications.Such as Max Spec Attack and Max HP and 1 spd.

The Creator (Victini) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Victory Star
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 Atk / 4 HP
Adamant Nature
- Brick Break
- V-create
- Bolt Strike
- U-turn

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The Creator (Victini) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Victory Star
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 Atk / 4 HP
Adamant Nature
- Brick Break
- V-create
- Bolt Strike
- U-turn

Well if you went back around 30 billion years ago you will see a Victini using V-Create on a level 5 Metapod using harden.Enough of the history stuff the reason i added Victini was to get rid of those bigger threats.With it's wide arsenal of moves and with the Choice Scarf you can out speed most if not all pokes in UU.

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Mūnraitohime (Umbreon) (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Synchronize
EVs: 252 SDef / 100 Def / 156 HP
- Heal Bell
- Wish
- Toxic
- Protect

Well Mūnhime or Moonlight Princess is one of my Favorite Pokemon with its excellent bulk and fun move set.To heal your allies and stall the opponent with Toxic and Protect.

Well Guys thats my team i know it needs work but thats what it's here for right?
Also im known on Pokemon Showdown as Chaosflames88
 
Hello CallMeChaos, I recommend replacing crobat with flygon. Why you may ask, well looking at your team you are weak to rock attacks, so by replacing Crobat with flygon you get a resist to Rock, and a good revenge killer.

Here is the set:
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Flygon @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Spd / 4 HP
Jolly Nature
- Superpower
- Earthquake
- U-turn
- Dragon Claw / Outrage

Also, if you have noticed you accidently posted Victini set twice ,but you have probably fixed that.

On Victini i think you should run Choice Band because you already have a Choice Scarf user of Flygon if you add it. And by adding Choice Band you get a very strong wallbreaker making Stall Teams easier to deal with. Also you might think of adding more description and a threat list because it makes your team easier to rate.

Hope i Helped. =)
 
I would suggest changing your Umbreon set. As Umbreon's main purpose is to sponge special attacks and to pass on Wish's, you want it to have max HP.

Mūnraitohime (Umbreon) (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Synchronize
EVs: 252 SDef / 4 Def / 252 HP
- Heal Bell
- Wish
- Toxic
- Foul Play

While Protect can be useful, Foul Play can kill physical sweepers as they switch into Umbreon

And I don't think Sableye is helping out the team much. While it may be a nucnuisance, it can be easily taken down in 1-2 hits. I would suggest a physical wall such as Swampert or Steelix to take Sableye's place
 
Hey Callmechaos, nice team you have here. I have to use my phone at the moment so this is gonna be a bit brief. However I do wanna say i appreciate you naming your Crobat after me, lol. This team could use a little bit of improvement, however:

1. Your team's got a hefty chunk of SR weaknesses and no spinner, or even a physical wall. So my first suggestion is Slowbro for Togekiss. Slowbro's a great physical wall, and a core of Slowbro, Brobat, and Umbreon will be pretty tough. For Slowbro's set, use:

Slowbro @ Leftovers
Trait: Regenerator
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SDef
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Scald
- Psyshock
- Thunder Wave
- Slack Off

With this set you can still annoy foes with paralysis and take physical hits better. Also on your Brobat, my second suggestion is running the standard stallbreaker set.

Brobat @ Black Sludge
Trait: Inner Focus
EVs: 116 HP / 252 Atk / 4 SDef / 136 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Brave Bird
- Super Fang/U-Turn (I prefer super fang but it's up to you)
- Taunt
- Roost

With this set Brobat can do his job very nicely, Super Fang also hurts switch-ins like Zapdos. Your team also needs a Stealth Rocker, preferably one who could deal with Heracross and Mienshao. For that reason I suggest Nidoqueen over Sableye. Try the offensive set since it has some power and can lay haxards nicely. I can't remember the spread so it's best to check Smogon. Probably a few more changes I could recommend but I'm pressed for time, lol. Best of luck!
 
CoolStoryBrobat said:
Hey Callmechaos, nice team you have here. I have to use my phone at the moment so this is gonna be a bit brief. However I do wanna say i appreciate you naming your Crobat after me, lol. This team could use a little bit of improvement, however:

1. Your team's got a hefty chunk of SR weaknesses and no spinner, or even a physical wall. So my first suggestion is Slowbro for Togekiss. Slowbro's a great physical wall, and a core of Slowbro, Brobat, and Umbreon will be pretty tough. For Slowbro's set, use:

Slowbro @ Leftovers
Trait: Regenerator
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SDef
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Scald
- Psyshock
- Thunder Wave
- Slack Off

With this set you can still annoy foes with paralysis and take physical hits better. Also on your Brobat, my second suggestion is running the standard stallbreaker set.

Brobat @ Black Sludge
Trait: Inner Focus
EVs: 116 HP / 252 Atk / 4 SDef / 136 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Brave Bird
- Super Fang/U-Turn (I prefer super fang but it's up to you)
- Taunt
- Roost

With this set Brobat can do his job very nicely, Super Fang also hurts switch-ins like Zapdos. Your team also needs a Stealth Rocker, preferably one who could deal with Heracross and Mienshao. For that reason I suggest Nidoqueen over Sableye. Try the offensive set since it has some power and can lay haxards nicely. I can't remember the spread so it's best to check Smogon. Probably a few more changes I could recommend but I'm pressed for time, lol. Best of luck!
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Thanks i will be sure to try both suggestions Brobat
 
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