My First RU team

[someonewhodied]

Ninjask: Leftovers
Timid
Speed Boost

4hp/252def/252speed

Substitute
Protect
Baton Pass
Swords Dance

The common ninjask I've used since gen3 religiously.

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Krokorok: King's Rock
Moxie
Adamant

252ATK/4Def/252Speed

Fire Fang
Beat Up
Earthquake
Brick Break

Now this is a unique setup I came up with myself.
Fire fang destroys those pesky levitating or balooning steel types, as does brick break.
Brick break also ruins reflectors and light screners.
Earthquake has amazing coverage.
Now beat up is amazing when combined with king's rock. It gives a ~56% flinch chance. It is also powered up by moxie to a point where barely anything can stop it.
SD Speedpass from ninjask (or even just speed) makes this a perfects sweeper

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Claydol: Choice band
Levitate
Calm

4HP/252def/252SDef

Rapid Spin
Stealth Rock
Trick
Power Split

This is just plainly to screw the opponent over.

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Lairon: Eviolite
Heavy Metal
Impish

4hp/252def/252SDef

Roar
Iron Defense
Heavy Slam
Rock Slide

With over 800 Defense and almost 400 special defense, this makes an amazing roarer.

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Tangela: Eviolite
Regenerator
Bold

4hp/252def/252Sdef

Leech Seed
Giga Drain
Knock Off
Protect

Stall to kill any non-grass types.

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Cofagricus: Leftovers
Mummy
Bold

4hp/252def/252sdef

Toxic
Night Shade
Calm Mind
Flash

Flash makes it nearly impossible for you to get hit, calm mind raises your spec defense. That lets you recover your HP
Night shade and toxic are purely for killing purposes.

 

[Bloo]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

Your descriptions are lacking, which means you are violating the above quoted RMT rule. If you wish to fix this problem, explain your reasoning behind each Pokemon and why they work on your team more thoroughly. Try to aim for 3-4 sentences with your descriptions. I recommend lurking through the RMT Archive in order to see examples of what we're looking for in an RMT! If you fix this problem, private message indicating that you have done so. Once you've done / when I determine your changes are satisfactory, I will re-open this.