My first team again

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I do ik in battles but i want to get better if you hav any suggestions even if it means changing my whole team i will listen so plzz help if u can

My lead pokemon

Ninjask
timid nature
EV 255spd/255attack
item focus sash
moves
swords dance
protect
subsitute
baton pass

I use my ninjask to get a huge speed boost on my other guys who need it. I will usually start with swords dance because i hav a focus sash top fall back on. If like most teams they use stealth rock i get another swords dance. After he is down to one hp i use protect to get a little more speed. Then i will baton pass him out of there to either rampardous or ttar.


My physical sweeper
Ttar
nature Naughty
ev 255 attack 255 def
item leftovers
moves
earthquake
stone edge
thrash
crunch

He is usually the guy i switch to from my ninjask. He can with stand most attacks including earthquake. He is maxed out in attack at 403. The ninjask speed boost will make him out speed many things. I even got him to out speed a choice scarf salamance. Ttar had 6 boosts of speed though. The swords dance from ninjask will incrase his attack to high as can be. I will mostly use earthquake or stone edge.


Metagross
ev 255 att 255 def
nature adament
item expert belt
moves
meteor mash
hammer arm
earthquake
zen headbutt

I use him as a physical wall as well as an attacker. He has over 300 def and attack and a bunch of resistances. He also has 4 different types of moves sp the expert belt really comes in handy there. He can withstand 2-3 earhtquakes and can dish them out as hard as possible. He has not very high speed so it will not be likely that he can outspeed unless ninjask.


Togekiss
Nature timid
ev 255 spd 255 sp attack
item brightpowder
moves
air slash
t wave
hidden power
swagger

From the moveset u probably guessed that he is a parafincher. I do not use the swagger unless i need it or if the opponet doesnt use the attack stat aka sp attack or walls. With all this in place there is a 93.75% chance he will hit himself para or just finch. This makes people very annoyed. The air slash will also do a lot of damage because the togekiss has over 315 sp attack with huge spd. HE is a game changer if used right.


Umbreon (shiny)
careful nature
ev 255def/255spdef
item leftovers
moves
toxic
moonlight
payback
protect

All in all he is my wall pokemon. He is vey high in both defensive stats. he will toxic the oppontet then will either use payback and if that goes 2nd it does 100 power plus STAB or protect that will stall until the poison can run its course. I hav tried shuckle as my wall before but the low attack and gp and spped plus the weakness made it so i could not work with him.


Finally, Rampardos
Nature Adament
ev 255 att 255 spd
item choice scarf
Moves
earthquake
stone edge
brick break
zen headbutt
He is my last hope sometimes and he seems to always pull through when he gets going. He has 437 attack which is higher than many other poke. With the choice scarf he has 301 spd which can outspeed most but also if i use ninjask he can become very good. For the move i usually use i use earthquake because since rampardous has mold breaker this makes levitate not work so it can now hit most types with a hard hit and 100 accuracy. This usually kills most poke fast.

Thank you for reading this. I need help so plz comment as much as u can
May the force be with you all THANK YOU!!

 

[Wrong Forum Bro]

All your biggest sweepers are weak against EQ's, a scary thing indeed.
3 other pokemon are weak against fighting, I see scizor as being a hazard for this team.

First off, you're Tyranitar.
If you don't have a specific reason for having Thrash on him then I suppose you change thrash to pursuit. Hopefully when when the opposing player realizes you just passed speed/attack boosts to a tyranitar they'll switch, giving you a chance for a free pursuit.

Also three of your pokemon are weak against ground, also the same three pokemon know EQ, which limits the amount of coverage your team has. I would have your metagross be an agilagross to make up for the lack of speed your bulky sweepers have, but that's just me.

I don't know your togekiss' secret power, so I can't really rate. Wouldn't put swagger on it though, most sweepers carry a lum berry to resist such things.

I don't see the point of Umbreon knowing protect if it doesn't know wish.
I'd recommend you switching Umbreons moonlight for wish, it fits better with protect and can be given to your other team pokemon.

 

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Thank You

First off let me say thank you out off the 100 people who saw this u replied

I think the idea with the ttar is a very good idea i think i will do that

The togekiss' power is serence grace which doubles the chances of added effects so my air slash normally has a 30% of finch now has 60% plus the para and confusion makes it hard to even hit him. Most teams ive faced do not use lum berry though

Umbreon i thought moonlight was better because u did not hav to wait a turn. The protect is their if i need to stall for the poison

May the force be with u

 

[Limewire]

Umbreon i thought moonlight was better because u did not hav to wait a turn. The protect is their if i need to stall for the poison

Actually, with TTar's Sand Stream ability, Moonlight will only heal 25% HP in a sandstorm, so I think Wish would be better.

Also, you need a special sweeper who can take care of electric/fighting attacks, something that can really annoy your team. Have you tried Rotom-H?

Rotom-H @ Choice Scarf
Modest Nature (+Special Attack, -Attack)
4 HP/ 252 SpA/ 252 Spe
- Trick
- Discharge
- Overheat
- Shadow Ball

Rotom takes care of Earthquakes aimed at TTar, Rampy and Metagross, and provides resistance against Jolteon and bulky waters. Who should you replace? I think Togekiss should go, because Umbreon + toxic damage already does its job as an annoyer/staller.

You can also make Rotom bulky (252 HP/ 120 Def/ 136 SpD), or give him Reflect so Rampardos can sweep more easily.