My first team ever

[ferthepoet]

Hi guys, this is my first team ever, just been playing online for about a week and only win about a quarter of my matches but let me know what you think.

Breloom
Moves: Focus Punch, Substitute, spore, seed bomb
item: toxic orb
ability: poison heal

Rottom-H
Moves: Thunderbolt, Overheat, Sucker Punch, Psych Up
item: passho berry
ability: levitate

Gastrodon
Moves: Muddy Water, Ice Beam, Earth Power, Recover
item: leftovers
ability: storm drain

Aggron:
Moves; Earthquake, Superpower, Metal Burst, Heavy Slam
item: Air Baloom
ability: sturdy

Bronzong
Moves: Stealth Rock, Earthquake, Heal Bloke, Gyro Ball
item: Macho brace
ability: levitate

Glaceon:
Moves: Blizzard, Shadow Ball, Mirror Coat, Hidden Power (grass)
item: focus sash
ability: Snow Cloak

 

[wraiders11]

add descriptions, ev spreads, and natures to this or your post will be locked. if you dont know what those things are then you are in the wrong place.

 

[IronBullet]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

Please read the above carefully and expand on your descriptions. Check out the RMT Archive to see the kind of detail we are looking for. PM me the changes and I'll unlock this. Thanks