XY OU My first team (n00b alert, need a bit of help)

[slurpy_mac]

Hi! Here's my first team (don't worry if you've to be too many things to say as I'm just starting and I won't be upset):



Let's start:

Aegislash @ Leftovers
Ability: Stance Change
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 252 SpA
Quiet Nature
- King's Shield
- Sword's dance
- Shadow Sneak
- Sacred Sword

To deal with Tyranitar, Greninja and Ferrothorn. I thought this was a good standard set but I'm don't know Aegislash so much so I don't know if this is the best role according to my team...


Charizard @ Charizardite Y
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Modest Nature
- Fire Blast/Flamethrower
- Solar Beam
- Focus Blast
- Dragon Pulse

Didn't know if a Timid nature was better (due to the amount of Excadrills, Garchomps, etc). Actually it's the Sp Atacker and its role is basically to break through a lot of defensive Pokemon (except Blissey, ... and thus the Gothitelle as a partner).

Excadrill @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Mold Breaker
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Jolly/Adamant Nature
- Earthquake
- Iron Head
- Rock Slide
- Rapid Spin

Great partner of the Rotom-W. Thundurus, Talonflame and Pinsir dealer.

Rotom-Wash @ Chesto Berry
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 248 HP / 216 Def / 44 Spe
Bold Nature
- Volt Switch
- Hydro Pump
- Will-O-Wisp
- Pain Split

Pain Split due to the poor HP. Used as a defensive pivot. Will-o-wisp + volt switch allows me to easily switch and avoid hazards.



Gothitelle @ Choice Specs
Ability: Shadow Tag
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Modest Nature
- Psychic
- Thunderbolt
- Energy Ball
- Trick

Great partner of Charizard.
Mega Venusaur, Assault Vest Conkeldurr and Keldeo shouldn't be a problem, and it's used to deal with walls such as Blissey.


Dragonite @ Lum Berry
Ability: Multiscale
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Dragon Dance
- Dragon Claw
- Fire Punch
- Earthquake

Actually it's just a Pokemon that I like but I don't know how it fits in my team.
Lum Berry is the preferred item to ward off burns from Scald and paralysis from the likes of Ferrothorn that Dragonite might want to set up on.

As you can see, I'm not an expert at all and this is just the first competitive team that I'm planning to build, so I'll be able to remove and switch Pokemon with no problem. Thank you very much for your help in advance and I'm sorry I can't describe the team's roles as I'm just a n00b in the competitive world...

 

[Namdachu]

First off, for the aegislash, run 252 attack instead of 252 spA. You're not running any special attacking moves, so there is no point in investing the EVS in special attack, so I'd suggest an Adamant Nature with 252 attack, 252 hp and 4 spD. As for the Rotom-Wash, why would you run a Chesto Berry if you don't have rest? Rest recovers all of your HP and with the Chesto Berry, it'll wake up straight away. If you don't want to run Rest, run Leftovers over the Chesto Berry, or even a Choice Scarf if you want. :P

 

[ShootingStarmie]

Hi there. I'm sorry but I'm going to have to lock this thread due to lack of descriptions. You need at least 3 lines for each Pokemon. This is required for team raters to understand how your team works and what can be improved. Please PM me once you think you can update this, thank you.