my first team

sam_is_cool

This is my first go at making a team any comments and sugestion will be greatly appreciated. It is a high offense team.


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Snorlax the tank
thick fat
Chesto berry

belly drum
body slam
brick break
rest

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Salamence
252 attack/252 speed/4 hp
Intimidate
Choice band
Dragon claw
Earthquake
Fire Fang
Zen head but

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Octillery
252sp attack/252 speed/ 4 hp
Scope lense
Sniper
Surf
Ice beam
Focus energy
Grass knot


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Aerodactyl
126speed/126def/252 attack/4 hp
Rock head
Double edge
Earthquake
Ice fang
Stealth Rock

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Breloom
252attack/252hp/4 speed
effect spore
Leftovers

Substitute
Focuspunch
seed bomb
Mach punch/drain punch


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Electrive
252sp attack/252 attack/4 speed
expert belt

Thunderbolt
Ice punch
Hp grass
Fire punch

Start off with aero and lay down sr then bring in octillery to draw electric attacks for electrive to switch in on. Then its just all out attack from all of the team
 
I'll take the freedom to remove the friggin' big pictures & write comments on bold lettering.

sam_is_cool said:
This is my first go at making a team any comments and sugestion will be greatly appreciated. It is a high offense team.



Snorlax the tank
thick fat
Chesto berry

belly drum
body slam
brick break
rest
Sorry, but tell me this isn't your lead. Snorlax sets don't really need to set up, anyways, being monstrous with HP & Attack. Go for Crunch &/or Sleep Talk for this to absorb sleep.



Salamence
252 attack/252 speed/4 hp
Intimidate
Choice band
Dragon claw
Earthquake
Fire Fang
Zen head but
Fire Blast>Fire Fang for Steels, Crunch>Zen Headbutt for Cresselia & Dusknoir


Octillery
252sp attack/252 speed/ 4 hp
Scope lense
Sniper
Surf
Ice beam
Focus energy
Grass knot

This is good, but Octillery doesn't have the Speed to pull it off. Kingdra replaces this well, but this gives another Dragon weakness.

126speed/126def/252 attack/4 hp
Rock head
Life Orb/ Focus Sash
Double edge
Earthquake
Ice fang
Stealth Rock

LEAD!!! This is great as a lead, 'cuz I've seen it in action. SR for lead walls whose species name isn't Bronzong. Replace DE for Stone Edge or Rock Slide, depending on how you want to play him

Breloom
252attack/252hp/4 speed
effect spore
Leftovers

Substitute
Focuspunch
seed bomb
Mach punch/drain punch

Good, but shame this doesn't have Spore & Poison Heal :/

Electrive
252sp attack/252 attack/4 speed
expert belt

Thunderbolt
Ice punch
Hp grass
Fire punch

Start off with aero and lay down sr then bring in octillery to draw electric attacks for electrive to switch in on. Then its just all out attack from all of the team
MixVire better be Lonely or Hasty. What are the chances of this surviving an EQ with 60~ Defence, anyway? Good job
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I like your Pokemon, but they're a little unsupportive of each other. I can also point out that Weavile would walk all over this team, barring Snorlax by a whim. Take Janenmori's advice. Good luck :)!
 
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