My first trained team.

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Created cause I wanted to. I tried to use new pokemon and didn't want to put in a lot of effort. I don't really have any specific base for my team and it's not very balanced, but I want to see others opinions on it. Rate as harshly as you feel necessary, but try to add at least one nice thing.

#1. Noctowl (Lv. 100) Ability: Insomnia
(152 HP, 100 SP. Atk, 252 Sp. Def)
Item: Zoom Lens
1. Reflect
2. Air Slash
3. Dream Eater
4. Hypnosis
Created for the purpose of beating Brelooms with spore. My friends all have one.

#2. Eelektross (Lv. 100) Ability: Levitate
(252 Attack, 252 SP. Def)
Item: Leftovers
1. Wild Charge
2. Thrash
3. Coil
4. Thunder Wave

#3. Muk (Lv. 100) Ability: Sticky Hold
(252 HP, 252 SP. Def)
Item: Chesto Berry
1. Rest
2. Giga Impact
3. Minimize
4. Acid Armor
Just to bring back foul memories of Koga. =P

#4. Charizard (Lv. 100) Ability: Blaze
(252 Speed, 252 Sp. Atk)
Item: Cell Battery
1. Air Slash
2. Heat Wave
3. Toxic
4. Smokescreen
Annoyance factor.

#5. Zoroark (Lv. 100) Ability: Illusion
(252 Speed, 252 Sp. Atk)
Item: Brightpowder
1. Night Daze
2. Torment
3. Foul Play
4. Nasty Plot
Illusions cool when you can see the other persons face.

#6. Mienshao (Lv. 100) Ability: Regenerator
(252 Speed, 252 Attack)
Item: Focus Sash
1. Reversal
2. U-turn
3. Drain Punch
4. Bulk Up
 
RMT rules said:
3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.
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Take a look at the RMT archive to see what kind of descriptions we are looking for. PM me the fixed descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.
 
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