My first warstory: please read and comment

f1stzero

I recently started to play Shoddy, I found it very fun and interesting so I got my friend into playing it too. I won our first battle across Shoddy but a few hours later he came back and said he had a new team. I, a little nervous because I didn't know what to expect, took him on. Turns out I was in for one heck of a battle.
For the sake of the already long post i will leave out leftover recovery and sandstorm damage.

F1stzero: I run a sandstream team and I love it :D
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I never got to see the last pokemon :(


Entreri1 sent out Yanmega
f1stzero sent out Hippowdon
Hippowdon's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
A sandstorm brewed!
f1stzero switched in Cradily
Yanmega used Hypnosis.
Cradily fell asleep!
Yanmega's Speed Boost raised its speed!

Aww crap this isn’t good, my main special wall is a sleep, I can already tell that this battle is going to be hard since my main sp att absorber is out cold. This isn’t good L
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Entreri1 switched in Umbreon
f1stzero switched in Jirachi

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Not the best match up for me, better get out of there.

Jirachi used U-turn.
It's super effective!
Umbreon lost 27% of its health.
f1stzero switched in Rhyperior
Umbreon used Mean Look.
Rhyperior was trapped!
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Dang!!! U-turn did more damage then I thought it would do. As for Rhyperior Getting trapped, I could careless for meanlook there, I was already planning to say in,

Umbreon used Substitute.
Umbreon lost 25% of its health.
Umbreon made a substitute!
Rhyperior used Hammer Arm.
It's super effective!
A critical hit!
The substitute took damage for Umbreon!
Umbreon's substitute faded!
Rhyperior's speed was lowered.
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What the!!!?!?! Sub?? I expected toxic, now my speed is lowered, and I know he carries darkpulse so here comes FLINCH MANIA. This battle is about to get ugly.

Umbreon used Dark Pulse.
Rhyperior lost 15% of its health.
Rhyperior flinched!
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And what did I say…. Stupid Rhyperior move your ass!!!!! Come on!!! Fattie!!!

Umbreon used Dark Pulse.
Rhyperior lost 13% of its health.
Rhyperior flinched!
The sandstorm rages.

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I don’t understand how his fat ass can flinch, he shouldn’t even feel anything. He’s got like 3 layers of rock armor, as far as I am concerned his can fall on umbreon. What would that bitch do now.

Umbreon used Dark Pulse.
Rhyperior lost 14% of its health.
Rhyperior used Hammer Arm.
It's super effective!
Umbreon lost 50% of its health.
Entreri1's Umbreon fainted.
Rhyperior's speed was lowered.
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6-5 now woot!!

Yes, that little bitch has fallen, woot. Who ever said “Constructive” criticism doesn’t pay off.

Entreri1 switched in Swampert (Swampert ♂).
f1stzero switched in Cradily (Cradily ♂).
Swampert used Waterfall.
Cradily lost 29% of its health.
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This is so not good, My team isn’t Swampert ready at all, Its type combination really hurts me, I need someone to carry grassknot now. Its going to be a bitch to take that thing down but its doable (I hope) .

Swampert used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!
Cradily is fast asleep!
The sandstorm rages.
Cradily's leftovers restored its health a little!
Cradily restored 6% of its health.
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All I can hope for now is Cradlily waking up and using toxic, I hope it wakes up or I am defiantly screwed.

Entreri1 switched in Charizard (Charizard ♂).
Cradily is fast asleep!
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Charizard used Belly Drum.
Charizard lost 50% of its health.
Charizard's attack was raised.
Cradily is fast asleep!
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This isn’t good, I didn’t expect bellyzard, Now I am going to get PWNED.

Charizard used Fire Punch.
Cradily lost 126% of its health.
f1stzero's Cradily fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
Charizard is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Charizard lost 6% of its health.
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Holy Shit!!!! If only I had waken up last turn, I hate his damn Yanmega its causing me all this Shit.

5-5
f1stzero switched in Garchomp
Pointed stones dug into Garchomp.
Garchomp lost 6% of its health.
Garchomp used Stone Edge.
It's super effective!
Charizard lost 222% of its health.
Entreri1's Charizard fainted.
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*takes a deep breath* I was scared of his Charizard, turns out he never Subbed so no salac Berry for You!!! Ok garchomp should have a little fun now. He is reall fast and deadly (well aren’t all garchomps?...)
Entreri1 switched in Garchomp (Garchomp ♂).
Garchomp used Dragon Claw.
It's super effective!
Garchomp lost 99% of its health.
Garchomp used Outrage.
Garchomp's attack missed!

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99%!!!!!!!! What the hell!!! I guess its okay since his move missed. Well his chomp is dead now Muhahahah (I hope I don’t miss)

Garchomp used Dragon Claw.
It's super effective!
Garchomp lost 99% of its health.
Entreri1's Garchomp fainted.
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5-3 Looking good I should be able to win now

Entreri1 switched in Yanmega (Yanmega ♂).
f1stzero switched in Tyranitar (Tyranitar ♂).
Tyranitar's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
Pointed stones dug into Tyranitar.
Tyranitar lost 12% of its health.
Yanmega used Detect.


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Yanmega used Hypnosis.
Tyranitar fell asleep!
Tyranitar is fast asleep!
The sandstorm rages.
Yanmega is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Yanmega lost 6% of its health.
Yanmega's leftovers restored its health a little!
Yanmega restored 6% of its health.
Yanmega's Speed Boost raised its speed!
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Well, some one had to fall asleep, oh well hope his little bug doesn’t get to sweep.

f1stzero switched in Jirachi (Jirachi).
Pointed stones dug into Jirachi.
Jirachi lost 6% of its health.
Yanmega used Bug Buzz.
Jirachi lost 28% of its health.
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Yanmega used Bug Buzz.
Jirachi lost 27% of its health.
Jirachi used Thunder Wave.
Yanmega is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
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Jirachi used wish
Jirachi made a wish
Yanmega Used Bug Buzz
Critical Hit
Jirachi Lost 90% of its Health
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…….#@$$@$#$@#$@%%$$#$%#$%#$

F1stzero switched in Garchomp
Garchomp used Fire Fang.
It's super effective!
Yanmega lost 66% of its health.
Yanmega used Bug Buzz.
Garchomp lost 55% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
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This is where I mess up, I decided to go with Fire Fang for sake of accuracy, but it doesn’t die, stupid bug.

Garchomp used Stone Edge.
It's super effective!
Yanmega lost 218% of its health.
Entreri1's Yanmega fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
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3-2

Entreri1 switched in Swampert (Swampert ♂).
Garchomp used Earthquake.
Swampert lost 37% of its health.
Swampert used Avalanche.
It's super effective!
Garchomp lost 125% of its health.
f1stzero's Garchomp fainted.

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And the bitch from hell comes back, I feel verry nervous now. I think I am going to lose.

f1stzero switched in Hippowdon (Hippowdon ♂).

Swampert used Waterfall.
It's super effective!
A critical hit!
Hippowdon lost 65% of its health.
Hippowdon used Earthquake.
A critical hit!
Swampert lost 54% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.

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If it wasn’t for that last Crit I would have won the battle. Damn swampert go die!!!!!!!!!!

Swampert used Waterfall.
It's super effective!
Hippowdon lost 47% of its health.
f1stzero's Hippowdon fainted.
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f1stzero switched in Rhyperior (Rhyperior ♂).
Pointed stones dug into Rhyperior.
Rhyperior lost 6% of its health.
Swampert used Waterfall.
It's super effective!
Rhyperior lost 85% of its health.
f1stzero's Rhyperior fainted.

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f1stzero switched in Tyranitar (Tyranitar ♂).
Tyranitar is fast asleep!
Swampert used Waterfall.
It's super effective!
Tyranitar lost 90% of its health.
f1stzero's Tyranitar fainted.
Entreri1 wins!

Pros
Garchomp taking out a bunch of pokemon and denting others
Jirachi for paralyzing that damn Yanmega


Cons
Rhyperior for being a dumbass and flinching
The people that thougt of swampert as a pokemon Swampert
Cradlily and TTar for doing shit

Tell me what you think of the battle, and how I can improve on my warstory writing and overall batteling, thanks in advance :)
 
It was a good battle. I just got pissed when my outrage missed and prevented a sweepage of your team. Jirachi paralyzing Yanmega was a Con. Its speed was raised by speed boast, which means it still was faster than any of your pokemon. P.S. If you read his f1stzero, I have been banned from Shoddy for 7 hours.
 
I played that team. I am not even joking, here's the spoiler:

BELLY DRUM LINOONE or SCARFMEDICHAM.

Also I lost cause I was drunk on his first try of the team (LOL). His scarfmedicham lost to my ambipom with Focus sash. I suggested he replace his linoone (lol) with swampert with stealth rock and roar, then once he's scouted and taken out medicham counters to unleash the fury later in the match than a starter. I also said lead with Yanmega cause of speed boost and hypnosis and it beat the hell out of a late game sweeper or one of his 3 physical sweepers leading (including bellyzard or bellyloone, lol). Looks like he listened.
 
majesty said:
I played that team. I am not even joking, here's the spoiler:

BELLY DRUM LINOONE or SCARFMEDICHAM.

Also I lost cause I was drunk on his first try of the team (LOL). His scarfmedicham lost to my ambipom with Focus sash. I suggested he replace his linoone (lol) with swampert with stealth rock and roar, then once he's scouted and taken out medicham counters to unleash the fury later in the match than a starter. I also said lead with Yanmega cause of speed boost and hypnosis and it beat the hell out of a late game sweeper or one of his 3 physical sweepers leading (including bellyzard or bellyloone, lol). Looks like he listened.
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lol, you were drunk at the time? i took advice from a drunk..... man people got to tell me these things ahead of time. it wasnt a scarfmedicham. it just knew endure. And that umbreon didnt do shit for me. btw, advice to all pokemon players, dont drink and then play pokemon....you still wont win
 
Too much log and not enough talking from the writer. Also, to make it easier to read next time, you might want to bold the sections where it's your writing, and not the log. Good game though. :)
 
People generally shy from reading if it is not bolded and there is more log than comments. That is to say, its a pain to the eyes. Oh and you might want to Sticky at the top regarding rules.
 
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