my first XY OU team - non pokebank

[Torty73]

Ok this a team I put together on showdown which is partly made in game. what do you think.

Goodra (M) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Hydration
EVs: 252 SAtk / 252 HP / 4 Def
Modest Nature
- Dragon Pulse
- Dragon Tail
- Flamethrower
- Sludge Bomb
Goodra is my bulky specially defensive special attacker . She is to deal with special attackers and if sticky web is up, to sweep, out running a lot of Pokémon. dragon tail is to remove other Pokémon out of the field, allowing another Pokémon to sweep. I has assault vest to increase its special defence.

Galvantula @ Salac Berry
Ability: Compound Eyes
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 SAtk / 4 HP
Timid Nature
- Bug Buzz
- Thunder
- Energy Ball
- Sticky Web
galvantula has one main goal - to set up sticky web. With sticky web up ,many Pokémon are struggle to sweep allowing my other Pokémon to rip them apart. The other moves help galvantula work as a special sweeper. Energy ball is to deal with ground and rock types, giving them a surprise. Salac berry, is to give galvantula a speed boost if low on hp, but I might change it to a petaya berry.

Zoroark @ Life Orb
Ability: Illusion
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 SAtk / 4 HP
Timid Nature
- Dark Pulse
- Flamethrower
- Focus Blast
- Grass Knot
Zoroark is a special sweeper with a fantastic ability. with life orb and illusion , I can play mind games but her ability is not as important. life orb gives a real boost, and is the best item for this sweeper, as if something hits zoroark, it is pretty dead.

Kangaskhan (F) @ Kangaskhanite
Ability: Scrappy
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
- Fake Out power up punch
- Return
- Earthquake
- Sucker Punch
a I don't like power-up punch mega kangashan. this set is a powerful wall breaker. After switching and mega evolving fake out damages anything opposing mega - kanga and flinches. mega kanga can then force a switch into a ghost type, expecting a power up punch is then hit with a earthquake.

Aegislash @ Leftovers
Ability: Stance Change
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Def / 4 SDef
Adamant Nature
- King's Shield
- Iron Head
- Sacred Sword
- Shadow Sneak
this is excellent Pokémon, which can absorb hits and strike back with deadly stab moves. it is goodras counter part, dealing with physical sweepers and taking them out. helping my other pokemon. I threw this pokemon on the team, but it works, by if you can think of something better go ahead

Salamence @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Moxie
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 Atk / 4 HP
Jolly Nature
- Dragon Claw
- Earthquake
- Fire Blast
- Stone edge
this is my revenge killer which deals with out of control sweepers. stone edge is a move for dealing with flying types. ice types which salamance hates a lot are murder by this move. moxie is to allow salmance to get a boost, helping it deal with the next Pokémon if I think It is capable of it. like aegislash it was just throw on the team, but it seems to work.

I have used this team in OU and It works but I want to see if anybody can improve on it, as I are not the best competive battler. sorry for posting a second thread - I hope this one is up to standard.

 

[nov]

non power up punch kangaskhan just.... isn't worth it. You say you use it as a wallbreaker, but there are so many better ones out there. I'd say run power up punch or if you need a wallbreaker, run an actual wall breaker like Mawhile or something with redonculous attack. The only reason Megakangaskhan is so awesome is because most of her checks cant handle her once she gets going. Also I'd switch aegislash's Def EVs into HP and move the fourth EV to speed, just to outrun other aegislashes that dont invest period. you may want to try focus sash on galvantula if you are using it as a lead (which I assume you are).

 

[Torty73]

thank you - I found your advice useful

 

[Reymedy]

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