My new team

[pokemanbb]

alright i've got SS so its kinda different from the whole platinum team so here we go


Tyranitar @ Muscle Band w/ Adamant nature -main power house of my team and it sets up pretty much everything
-Stone Edge
-Crunch
-Earthquake
-Rock Polish

Electivire @ Lax Incense w/ Adamant nature-it's there for electric resistance and massive power
-Thunder Punch
-Ice Punch
-Cross Chop
-Earthquake

Scizor @ Expert Belt w/ Brave nature (technician as ability)- an extreme powerhouse and gets set up by tyranitars snad stream ability so it can just dominate
-Bullet Punch
-Bug Bite
-Brick Break
-Night Slash

Areodactyl @ Choice Scarf w/ Jolly nature (pressure ability)-extremely fast and sets up stealth rock effectively which is its main purpose and can also stop a sweep with torment which can ruin most teams
-Ancient Power
-Iron Head
-Torment
-Stealth Rock

Swampert (shiny) @ Shell Bell w/ Impish nature-this is sort of the "rambo of my team it gets benifited by tyranitar's sand stream and can take hits and fire the damage right back, it can also Stealth Rock ust in case Areodactyl fails to accomplish setting it up
-Waterfall
-Earthquake
-Avalanche
-Stealth Rock

Togekiss @ Metronome w/ Modest nature (serene grace ability)-the special sweeper on my team and the roaster/flincher because it can effectively burn and flinch thanks to serene grace
-Air Slash
-Flamethrower
-Psychic
-Aura Sphere

Here's my team leave any suggestions or comments and thanks for reading!

 

[Bloo]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

Your descriptions are lacking, which means you are violating the above quoted RMT rule. If you wish to remedy this problem, explain your reasoning behind each Pokemon and why they work on your team more thoroughly. Try to aim for 3-4 sentences with your descriptions. I recommend lurking through the RMT Archive in order to see examples of what we're looking for in an RMT!

If you improve your explanations for your Pokémon, please private message me indicating that you've done. Once you've done that, I will allow you to re-post your thread so you can get some help!

Also, you need to add the EVs of your Pokemon.