My OU team

[mmccann]

So I kind of thought I would put a team together of pokemon that I like and have from battling previously, hated going up against them! This is the second team i have ever made so thought I'd post it up here and see if someone can help improve it for me!

HEATRAN (flash fire) (leftovers)
252HP 252SA 4SD Modest nature
-Magma storm
-Earth power
-Hidden power ice
-Toxic
The max HP is to allow heatran to come in on attacks and take them like a boss! Then I hit back hard witht he 252SA. Toxic is there to hit someone coming in

CELEBI (natural cure) (leftovers)
252HP 220SD 36D Calm nature
-Giga drain
-psychic
-hidden power fire
-Recover
My special wall. takes hits brilliantly and with recover is very hard to take down! hidden power fire is for the ferrothorns and scizors that always switch in. I also bring it in to take a status move which gets healed on the switch out. I was thinking of changing some of its move but dont know what to...

LATIOS (levitate) (choice scarf)
252SA 252SP 4HP timid nature
-psyshock
-thunderbolt
-draco meteor
-surf
Does what it says on the tin. My scarfer to come in and revenge kill most things by hitting hard!

SWAMPERT (torrent) (leftovers)
252HP 252D 4A impish nature
-stealth rock
-scald
-earthquake
-roar
My stealth rocker, best move in the game! Scald and earthquake are there for stab and roar is to stop anyone trying to set up and make something take damage from the rocks! also acts as my physical wall

Scizor (technician) (life orb)
248 HP 112A 148SD Adamant nature
-bullet punch
-roost
-pursuit
-swords dance
He's here because he looks so cool! also here for the priority bullet punch to finsh off opponents. The investment in special defense is there so he can switch into attacks and pursuit trap psychic types. roost is there for recovery since life orb damage racks up quickly.

Gyarados (moxie) (leftovers)
56HP 248A 204Spd
-Substitute
-dragon dance
-waterfall
-stone edge
He's here as a late game sweeper! if he gets a free sub he is likely to sweep! waterfall is there as stab which sends out by damage. stone edge is kind of a coverage move but i hate the accuracy:/

Any help is really appreciated!!

 

[Jirachee]

Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it. The standard description length required is three to four lines, if you need more insight look on the detail part, check out the RMT Archive.

You need a minimum of three lines of descriptions for each of your Pokemon; PM me your updated descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.