My OU team:

OU Team: Not the most creative, but at least decent!

So yeah, this is not only my first RMT here, but also my first post here :P The sets could be a little more creative, but hey, why change something that works when you hardly know what you're doing :/


Team at a glance:
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Any changes made will be in red and bold.
For those of you who are interested, here's a nice chart showing my weaknesses and resistances:
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So yeah, no glaring weaknesses in this team, and a LOT of resistances.







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Lead: Relaxed Swampert @ Leftovers
Ability: Torrent
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 252 Def
Moves:
-Stealth Rock
-Earthquake
-Ice Beam
-Protect

SR for obvious reasons...it's a lead...anyway, Earthquake and Ice Beam deal with other leads...Protect ensures that I survive any Explosions from suicide leads and also gives me an extra turn for Leftovers.

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Sweeper: Adamant Scizor @ Life Orb
Ability: Technician
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Moves:
-Swords Dance
-Bullet Punch
-Brick Break
-Bug Bite

So since I'm not that great with Choice items, I'm picking this set. Life Orb + Swords Dance make for a nice little power boost, and if I choose Bullet Punch or Bug Bite, that's coupled with STAB and a boost from Technician. Brick Break handles Heatran and Magnezone without the penalty of Superpower, although it wouldn't really be my FIRST choice against Heatran for obvious reasons.
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Sweeper: Jolly Flygon @ Life Orb
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Moves:
-Earthquake
-Roost
-Dragon Claw
-Stone Edge

So this is a physical set on Flygon because it's base Atk is higher than it's base Sp. A, so I gain a little more from STAB and Life Orb. Earthquake deals with Fire- and Steel- types, while Roost heals off Life Orb recoil without costing me Ground immunity like it would on a Flying- type. Dragon Claw is better than Outrage for this set because I already eliminated the Choice item, so why get locked into Outrage? Lastly, Stone Edge deals with Flying- types, and is physical unlike Fire Blast, which my Heatran already has, so it would be redundant on Flygon due to not only that but no STAB on Flygon either.
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SubPasser: Timid Jolteon @ Leftovers
Ability: Volt Absorb
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Moves:
-Substitute
-Baton Pass
-Hidden Power Ice
-Thunderbolt

I use Substitute on Starmie, so people get scared but don't want to switch because there's a nice little substitute right in front of them, so Starmie stays in, and ta-da! Thunderbolt. Baton Pass allows me to get out of there w/o losing Substitute if I happen to have one up, and then I can switch to a more appropriate Pokemon, but if it's a Ground- type and I have Substitute, Hidden Power Ice deals with them just fine.

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Annoyer: Timid Heatran @ Leftovers
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Sp.A / 252 Spe
Moves:
-Fire Blast
-Earth Power
-Hidden Power Grass
-Taunt

So at the suggestion of Faladran (big thanks to you, by the way), I changed this to a set that can shut down stallers, such as Blissey. With Taunt, my opponent can't use recovery or status-inducing moves, and then I can get a potential free setup and sweep with Gyarados. Hidden Power Grass handles Water- types outside of Gyarados that may try to take down Heatran, Earth Power deals with Fire-, and Fire Blast is reliable STAB for Steel- types and whatnot. Again, thank you Faladran for your input and also the warm welcome to Smogon!

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Sweeper: Adamant Gyarados @ Life Orb
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Moves:
-Dragon Dance
-Waterfall
-Stone Edge
-Bounce

Jolteon and Gyarados cover each other fairly nicely. If the opponent tries to use an electric attack, on the turn it would be used, I switch to Jolteon, where Volt Absorb restores HP. Then I Substitute and Baton Pass back, and proceed with Gyarados if he's the best Pokemon for the job. DD gives me that nice Atk/Spe boost, Waterfall is nice and powerful STAB, Stone Edge deals with other Flying- types, and Bounce is also good STAB along with the most powerful move in the set, and it hits most Grass- and Dragon- types harder than Ice Fang.


I look forward to your CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. Half a team of Sweepers may or may not be wise, but I like to be prepared in case anything happens.
 
Hi Link, welcome to Smogon!

For a first RMT, this team isn't too bad. A quick suggestion I'd like to make is to change your Heatran's set. Currently, your team maintains a strong offensive presence, but can have problems dealing with stall. Without causing any major differences, try out a Life Orb Heatran in place of your current one:

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Heatran @ Life Orb
Flash Fire | Timid
4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
- Fire Blast
- Earth Power
- Hidden Power Grass
- Taunt

This Heatran is a major threat in terms of firepower, and can shut down notable counters, such as Blissey, with Taunt. With your opponent being unable to use status or healing moves, you can now potentially obtain a free setup and sweep attempt with Gyarados.

Good luck with the team!
 
I greatly appreciate the input and heartily agree with your idea. I just hope I have the right thought process on the explanation, lol. The post has been edited appropriately.

And like I said in the post, thanks again for the warm welcome!
 
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