My Shoddy Team

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Hi, i'm playing right now on Shoddy battle with this team:

Bronzong@Leftovers (Reflect, Light Screen, Stealth Rock, Psychic)
EV: 208 Defense, 208 Special Defense, 94 health points Nature: Calm

Milotic@ __ (Toxic, Recover, Surf, Ice Beam)
EV: 252 Defense, 152 Special Def, 106 Health Points Nature: Bold

Charizard@Wise Lens (Sunny Day, Overheat, Solar Beam, Air Slash)
EV: 252 Speed, 206 Special Attack, 52 Health Points Nature: Modest

Ursaring@ Muscle Band (Sw.Dan., Facade, Close Combat, Shadow Claw)
EV: 252 Attack, 252 Speed, 6 Health Points Nature: Jolly

Venusaur@Black Sludge (Leech Seed, Sludge Bomb, Giga Drain, Sleep Powder)
EV: 152 Special Def, 152 Def, 206 Health Points Nature: Calm

Mamoswine@Life Orb (Hail, Blizzard, Earthquake, Ice shard)
EV: 252 Attack, 252 Hp Nature:
this one was kind of a filler because was trying to fight a friend of mine and I knew he could sweep his entire team... but after fighting some other people i thik i'll keep him though...

also, I use Bronzong and Milotic toghether... Bronzong to stealth rock, and raise reflect and light screens, nad then milotic and TOxic comes in...

Well, it works kinda good... against inexperienced people it is... but i like this pokemon....
besides, i need a better 6th pokemon i guess... any help???
 
Sorry... i realy should have read the rules in the first place... Won't happen again... I just jumped here and started doing new threads... My bad...

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You must read the RMT rules and familiarize yourself with them, otherwise you end up break these rules. The two specific rules you broke were:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by give an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

And...

6. Formatting. Make your post readable. If the format is messy and illegible you won't be likely to receive help and may have your thread locked. Adding pictures to your post can make it more visually appealing too, but pay attention to point 11. Here's a guideline on how to post each Pokemon.

Pokemon @ Item
Ability:
EVs:
Nature:
- move
- move
- move
- move

This isn't set in stone, but the above example or a slight variation thereof makes for a much "cleaner" post.

Feel free to repost your thread when your RMT abides by the rules.
 
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