my standard battle team

[one winged angel]

please rate my team
scizor

@ insect plate
ability:technician
Nature serious
evs
iron head
metal claw
x-scizor
sandstorm
scizors impressive speed and whopping 315 attack make it a pokemon for taking out the less defensive pokemon or weaker ones.

@ soft sand
ability: torrent
Nature calm
evs
muddy water
protect
earthquake
ice beam
its meant to be teamed with switching arcanine to nuetralize almost all stat advantages.

@ dragon fang
ability: intimidate
Nature careful
evs
dragon claw
dragon pulse
flamethrower
fly
takes out pokemon with almost all offense in an instant and is a good staller.

Pokemon arcanine @ fame plate
ability: intimidate
Nature calm
evs
fire fang
flamethrower
fireblast
extreme speed
meant to put up a long fight and weaken enemies.

Pokemon blissey @ left overs
ability:serene grace
Nature calm
evs
flamethrower
thunder bolt
calm mind
soft boiled
stays alive for forever and paralyzes and burns pokemon often so it can take its time. also calm mind makes invincable against specials. stands no chance against against physicals

@ splash plate
ability: marvel scale
nature sassy
evs
surf
hydro pump
ice beam
aqua ring
hydro pump takes most pokemon out. the team sweeper really

 

[Wakalord]

He is correct.
http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=19179

Please read the rules before posting.

 

[kd24]

yea this is going to be closed. no moves, no stats no descriptions, bye.

er in the time to write that you could have easily linked him to the rules or even rate it on what you knew.

The team looks decent but unfortunately it seems as Celebi and Tyranitar would rip it to shreds. Scizor is your best hope followed by Salamence but any good Fire-type like Heatran carrying a Scarf would easily beat you.

Infernape also 2HKOs everything on the team with HP Ice/Close Combat/Fire Blast/Grass Knot. I would suggest ditching milotic (already have a bulky water) for something like Deoxys-S or even Cresselia. Good Status support or just general sweeping and Deoxys even helps against Tar and Celebi.

Yes please post EVs, Natures, and Movesets in future though.

Good luck.

 

[kd24]

This thread turned ugly fast. :/

Seeing your strategy and attacks, I do have a few more comments.

First I would actually open with Salamence. Unfortunately for Scizor. he is easily stopped by many top leads such as Gengar and opposing Salamence. Besides, use his resistances to your advantage and find time for him to Baton Pass to Arcanine later.

If you opt for Iron Defense on Scizor I would make your Baton Pass goal to be Swampert or Miltoic, creating a powerful Garchomp counter (Swords Dance Yache Chomp really rips this team apart). On that note, I would give Milotic a much more Special Defensively approached spread. You want her to tank on all ends of the spectrum so being 2hko by magnezone thunderbolt isn't going to be fun watching.

I would use Stealth Rock on Swampert over Rest/Waterfall. Ice Ground is a great combination and doesn't need any assistance imo. Blissey has better things to do than lay SR down (trust me, I know from my own RMT where I was shown SR is a much better option on Swampert). Swampert has more options to lay it down as well since Blissey can't really stay in on physical attackers and can't be laying rocks when faced with Gengar/Deoxys. Instead I would use Ice Beam in that slot or even Aromatherapy for some quick healing.

The major team issue is Speed. I would actually make Salamence DD Mence just to net a quick speed boost. This might not be enough though but its ok for now. I seriously recommend this.

 

[Taylor]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Breaking this rule is an offense and results in your thread being locked. Also, continuously posting without any replies inbetween is another violation; this is common sense and is enforced on every forum. Read the rules.