My team Full Offensive

EL PAJAS TRAE UNA CABRA

Hi!, the first thing is that if we don't understand something is not because I am Spanish and I haven't the level of English that I would like to have.
But I would like to see my team and evaluate and see what they seem, there is:

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Ability: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP/120 Def/138 SDef
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Baton Pass
- Agility
- Roost
- Charge Beam

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Heracross (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Guts
EVs: 4 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Megahorn
- Stone Edge
- Close Combat
- Night Slash


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Tyranitar (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Sand Stream
EVs: 252 HP/252 Atk/6 SAtk
Lonely nature (+Atk, -Def)
- Earthquake
- Ice Beam
- Stone Edge
- Crunch


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Garchomp (M) @ Lum Berry/ life orb
Ability: Sand Veil
EVs: 16 HP/252 Atk/242 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Fire Fang
- Swords Dance
- Outrage


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Starmie @ Xpert belt
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 4 HP/252 Spd/252 SAtk
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Surf
- Psychic/ Rapid spin
- Ice Beam
- Thunderbolt

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Heatran (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 226 HP/32 Spd/252 SAtk
Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Stealth Rock
- Earth Power
- Lava Plume
- Dragon Pulse


My equipment is based on the total attack.

My strategy and the function of each pk is the following one:

- Zapdos is the Batton Passer of my team, first it uses Agility and if it has left much life use Charge Beam to pass increases in special attack.
The EVS in special defence let you survive a Draco Specsmence of Meteor, and virtually any special attack, while the physical side resists Stone Edge of CBCross. First Zapdos uses Agility, soon if it can it uses Charge Beam to increase his Sp.Atk and uses BattonPass with Heatran generally if Charge Beam has used, or with Heracross if the rival clears much life to us after making a Agility.

- Heracross recived Batton Pass of Zapdos and +2 of Speed and begins to kill.
Stone edge covers types and Megahorn receives STAB, to give the Baton pass if it receives an attack Banda critical focus will protect. Night Slash for Psyquics and Ghost. It often go out before that Tyranitar for keep the Focus Sash effect.

- Heatran puts rocks in the field and begins to kill pk with Life Orb. It go out VS physical walls for kill their.

- The function of Tyranitar is to remove to the storm sand and to leave against pk Psyquic to do Crunch to them or to kill them with its great attack. Also Garchomp get more evasion.

- Starmie is very fast and can kill to Gyarados and Skarmory with Thunderbolt.

- Garchomp if it receives a Agility and it can make Swords Dance kills all rivals and uses Outrage that along with Lum Berry is very good.

Greetings
 
Please read the rules, I know you have some trouble with English, before posting a team! Especially this one:


3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.
 
Your better off Scarfing Tran and making him your lead. Keep the moveset. Give Chomp Life Orb. Ethier Scarf or Band Hera and change Zappy's moveset to the roost one in the analysis. I agree with the above poster. It's very hard to rate if you don't give the pikmon a description. Like what it does to your team etc.
 
Tyranitar and a Heracross with Focus Sash doesn't mix. Your really Garchomp weak as well. Even more so if it carries a Choice Scarf. Everything on your team is OHKO'd-2HKO'd by an Adament Earthquake or Outrage. Nothing can safely switch in. Change your EV's around too. They seem just thrown on their, and theres no reason to use max hp on a LO Heatran. Not to mention your non Boah/CB Tyranitar with max hp.
 
Garchomp If you're able to receive the boost you want, it becomes almost incontrastabile,I would put then Dragon Claw on Outrage.
 
Agility Zapdos is understandable here, you want some speed, but Charge Beam is a huge waste, you should probably go with Thunderbolt > Charge Beam. I would suggest running 252 HP / 104 Spe / 152 SpD or Def, reason why I say this is because both are good, trying out both spreads and testing should help you out to pick out which one benefits more. Possibly a Lum Berry, the speed will allow you to outspeed Gyarados, and Lum Berry so it ensures that you atleast get an Agility off, and not having to worry about sleep leads. Focus Sash is a real waste on Heracross, I would rather put a Flame Orb, or run the Sub Salac set on him. With some speed passed to Heracross, he can become a powerful pokemon, so I would suggest running Sword Dance on him, basically the SubSalac set, but if you feel that you don't need Salac, then running another item like a Flame / Toxic Orb would also be good.

Tyranitar seems weird, without any speed Gliscor will outspeed you and kill you with EQ, making Ice Beam useless. Running a Choice Band with 80 Hp / 252 Atk / 176 Spd @ Adamant should be fine, you can still use Ice Beam and NOW with effectiveness. Yache Berry on Garchomp would benefit more than a Lum Berry or Life Orb would, as Ice Beams are a primary target to Garchomp, making Yache Berry a life saver, and possibly surviving and OHKO'ing a opposing pokemon back. Starmie is be necessary here, but the way you run it has no effectiveness. Rapid Spin should help you out with Spikes that can trouble you. 172 Hp / 120 SpAtk / 216 Spd @ Timid and you should be good, and the option of the attacking moves would be your choice, but I strongly recommend running Surf + Ice Beam / Thunderbolt There isn't many changes I can make really, this team depends on good prediction to have success.
 
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