MY TEAM OF CHAMPIONS!!!!!

kalebevan

Hey guys! I really need some help with this team.. It seems as if Im on a continous winning streak or im losing every match. I need help finding some weaknesses and how they could be fixed. All advice is appreciated:) thank you:)
Scizor @ Leftovers
Trait: Swarm
EVs: 248 HP / 88 Atk / 172 Spd
Adamant Nature
- Swords Dance
- Baton Pass
- Roost
- Bullet Punch
Scizor really doesnt do much besides sd and baton pass. He usually can get two sd's of before he has to pass which is more than enough to make my sweepers do some detrimental damage! besides that though I gave him bullet punch so that he can finish off someone if he needs to and roost to heal him

richard (Carracosta) (M) @ White Herb
Trait: Sturdy
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature
- Shell Smash
- Aqua Jet
- Stone Edge
- Blizzard
Richard is one of my early sweepers. the first thing i do is shell smash due to that fact he cant be 1 hit ko'd because of sturdy. Then after that I just pick people off. he has a prett nice move set to deal with just about anyone that comes up to bat.

mittens (Victini) @ Leftovers
Trait: Victory Star
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SAtk / 252 Spd
Hasty Nature
IVs: 30 Atk / 30 SAtk / 30 Spd
- Psychic
- Bolt Strike
- V-create
- Energy Ball
V-create may be the best move ever invented. It hits incredibly hard-especially after being buffed up by a baton pass from scizor. I have bolt strike to deteriorate a pesky water typer and energy ball if i want to use that instead.

kyle (Dragonite) @ Lum Berry
Trait: Multiscale
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature
- Dragon Dance
- Outrage
- Earthquake
- Roost
Dragonite is meant for one thing:obliteration. Every team needs a good dragon. Im not one of those noobs that dragon dances and then outrages throught the whole match but if situations start looking grim i throw him in to tear crap apart
larry (Jirachi) @ Leftovers
Trait: Serene Grace
EVs: 252 HP / 224 SDef / 32 Spd
Gentle Nature
- Iron Head
- Thunder
- U-turn
- Wish
Jirachi really is a tank: iron head to make them flinch on top of wish makes him incredibly hard to kill. thunder to get rid of the pesky brave birders and the stupid cloysters. U-turn if a ground type comes in that could destroy him.

zachariah (Gengar) @ Choice Specs
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Timid Nature
IVs: 30 Atk / 30 SAtk / 30 Spd
- Trick
- Thunder
- Shadow Ball
- Giga Drain
Gengar usually i use as my "oh crap" button with trick i can trap the opponent if need be or i can just shadow ball the living crap out of them. giga drain to regain health if need be and thunder for if jirachi were to go down.
 
Hello kalebevan, The first thing that caught my eye was that you have Swarm on your Scizor. I recommend using Technican instead because it makes Bullet Punch Stronger so if you need a kill Before you Baton Pass you can use Bullet Punch which will do alot of damage.Also on Carracosta i would replace Blizzard with Ice Beam because Blizzard has Bad Accuracy.Also you might want to try Cloyster over Carracosta Just because Cloyster is a better Shell Smash User.

Hope i Helped =)

P.S. Try adding pictures it will make people want to read your RMT.
 
Hello.
Firstly, I agree with the suggestion of Technican over Swarm on Scizor. Second, use Cloyster over Carracosta. Carracosta is outclassed in OU and has a not so good typing giving it weaknesses to common attacks. Cloyster can also use Shell Smash and hits with Rock Blast and Icicle Spear 5 times because of its ability. Third, use Choice Band Victini. Choice Band Victini hits harder than your current set. Now lastly, Choice Scarf on Gengar. Your team lacks a revenge killer to outspeed faster threats. All sets are below!

Technician>Swarm on Scizor
Cloyster>Carracosta
Choice Band>Leftovers on Victini
Choice Scarf>Choice Specs on Gengar

Cloyster @ White Herb
Trait: Skill Link
EVs: 4 HP/ 252 Atk/ 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Shell Smash
- Icicle Spear
- Rock Blast
- Razor Shell

Victini @ Choice Band
Trait: Victory Star
EVs: 252 Atk/ 4 SpD/ 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- V-Create
- Bolt Strike
- Brick Break
- U-turn
 
Firstly, I would like to echo the previous comments and recommend Technician over Swarm on Scizor and Cloyster over Carracosta. Basically, if you're using Swarm on Scizor you aren't doing it right, while Cloyster outclasses Carracosta completely.

Secondly, some of your movesets don't look too good. Mixed Victini with Leftovers? Thunder and Giga Drain on Gengar? No, Victini works better with Choice Band and the moves U-Turn, V-Create, Bolt Strike, Brick Break. After being passed a Swords Dance by Scizor, Salamence is looking at an OHKO after Stealth Rock and Intimidate. Yeah, you read that right. While Gengar wants Substitute, Shadow Ball, Focus Blast and either Disable with Leftovers or Pain Split with Life Orb.

Finally, just a minor change compared to the rest, every team wants a Stealth Rock user on there somewhere so slap it on Jirachi over U-Turn. You want to escape from ground types? Simply switch out! Hopefully you will find these changes useful. Good luck
 
Hello fellow team maker!

I am here to help and that i will do by giving positive and negative feedback!~~~---



PROBLEM #1-your scizor lacks a fighting type move making it a recovery bomb for heatran as he will come in and get free lefties recovery putting your hard worked damage to waste as he laughs in your face threatening you out with a fire type move that will OHKO you, Also techni scizor>swarm scizor.

PROBLEM #2-Carra is improperly natured for the moveset you have chosen "i strongly disagree with the moveset" he should be naive or naughty nature so he can havemixed attacking prowess, "GET ICE BEAM>BLIZZARD" another note focus sash carra> white herb because if he's an early game sweeper he should run focus sash for more offensive prowess

PROBLEM #3-Victini is something I'm not getting here, You barely have any specattck eve's yet somehow you expect to kill something off with no boosts, I highly suggest trading in energy ball for U-turn or something.

SUGGESTION #1-Trade dnights lum for lefties and trade roost for fire punch=ferrothorn dead.

SUGGESTION #2- Trade jirachi's Thunder for Body Slam because you don't have a rain team and not 100% accuracy without it=failure, Trade U-Turn for Stealth Rocks because you need the extra residual damage on switch in

PROBLEM #4-Gengar makes no sense to me, you got giga drain with thunder "again this is not a rain team" and you're tricking specs which is not recommended, Trade giga drain for focus blast, thinder for T-bolt. Maybe run sub-split set or sub-disable to give the team good synergy to go off of.

PROBLEM #5-This team is amazingly weak to weather teams so you might wana run the move "hail" as anit-weather after you kill an inducer, this will allow your team to get the best synergy possible and impose offensive prowess.

Team rate- I give the team an overall 5.5/10, It's a nice team but it needs some work.

Hope i was helpful and GL!
 
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