My Team of Epic Proportions.Actually, its not that good....I have no life..

[eddiefiv]

These are just the Pokémon I really like using. Don't make fun of me for bad natures, since I'm not crazy enough to restart the game for a good nature on my starter. Also, I didn't keep track of EV numbers, but I know what I trained each in. Please be nice, but try and help me out as well.

Cloyster
Nature: Jolly
Ability: Skill Link
Item: Focus Sash
EVs: Speed and Attack
Attacks:
-Shell Smash
-Icicle Spear
-Rock Blast
-Razor Shell
Just got bored one day and decided to get a Cloyster since he was just about my favorite Pokémon in 2nd Gen. He’s usually my lead, but not in Doubles/Triples.

Hydregion
Nature: Docile
Ability: Levitate
Item: Leftovers
EVs: A mix, but totally avoiding Attack
Attacks:
-Dragon Pulse
-Focus Blast
-Flamethrower
-Surf
I know I should have gotten Dark Pulse. I’m waiting for Snarl. Leave me alone. He’s pretty much just the powerhouse of my team.

Escavalier
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Swarm
Item: Rocky Helmet
EVs: Attack and Defense
Attacks:
-Megahorn
- Iron Head
-Giga Impact
-Reversal
Just my favorite 5th Gen Pokémon in general. He can survive almost any neutral physical attack with over half of his health left. Plus, Megahorn almost never misses when he uses it.

Zoroark
Nature: Modest
Ability: Illusion
Item: Choice Specs
EVs: Sp. Attack and Speed
Attacks:
-Night Daze
- Shadow Ball
-Extrasensory
-Flamethrower
Just ridiculous. I usually disguise him as Emboar and she always fools my opponents into using a Psychic type move. Nearly my fastest Pokémon.

Archeops
Nature: Hasty
Ability: Defeatist
Item: Flight Gem
EVs: A huge mix. I don’t even know.
Attacks:
-Rock Slide
-Acrobatics
-Earthquake
-Endeavor
I only recently found out that Acrobatics is doubled on the turn that a Flight Gem is used. He just….he’s ridiculously good when he can hit with a super-effective hit.

Emboar
Nature: Relaxed
Ability: Blaze
Item: Razor Fang
EVs: A mixture. Leave me alone.
Attacks:
-Flare Blitz
- Brick Break
-Head Smash
-Earthquake
He’s pretty ridiculous too. With his nature boosting his Defense, he’s survived Giga Impacts.


So please tell me what you think and if there’s anything I can do to make it better.
No, I will not be breeding new Pokémon so don’t even ask.

 

[Bowl Cut]

eddiefiv, no troll please.

 

[133k]

What exactly do you plan on doing with this team? All I can say for improvements are breed some more, since most of your natures and EV's are screwed up. If you aren't willing to change your team, there's really no point in asking for advice... Only changing the movesets won't get you that far if you don't even know the ev's of your pokes...

To put it bluntly, there's really nothing that can be done...

 

[Faladran]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

Your descriptions are lacking, which puts you in violation of the rule above. Please elaborate more on each team member - about 3 or 4 solid sentences per member is a good goal to reach for. The RMT archive contains some examples of well-written RMTs. If you fix your descriptions, PM me with the updates and I'll be happy to unlock your thread.