My Team!

[Fang]

Please suggest me in a kind way, not in a bad one. Thanks

Well, here's an overview:

Timid Gengar @ Wide Lens
252 spatk/252 speed/6 hp
Focus Blast
Thunderbolt
Shadow Ball
Destiny Bond/Substitute

Special Sweeper and Status here. Really good as it provides me resist against fighting types that pory and bliss need

Naive Infernape @ Life Orb
24 att/252 spa/232 speed
Hidden Power ICE
Flamethrower
Grass Knot
CC

Mixed attacker, speedy and meant to be an OHKOER. I put this as it can sweep much

Adamant Machamp @ Leftovers
252 att/ 252 hp/ 6 spe
Dynamicpunch (No Guard)
Rest
Ice Punch
Sleep Talk

Physical Sweeper here. This is a nice Machamp, No Guard>Guts for more accuracy

Modest Porygon-Z @ Choice Scarf
252 satt/252 speed/6 hp
Ice Beam
Thunderbolt
Dark Pulse
Tri Attack (Adaptability)

This is my main source of owning, this special sweeper gets 400+ speed and is incredibly strong.

Adamant Metagross @ Leftovers
252 attack/252 def/6 spd
Meteor Mash
Earthquake
Stealth Rock
Ice Punch/ Icy Wind (To lower Speed)

He is my personal tank, he can cause disasters everywhere and resist many things

Impish Salamence @ Life Orb
218 hp/ 252 def/ 40 speed
EQ
Dragon Claw
DD
Roost

NIce salamence. 100% synergy with metagross for more pwn



Well, ive finished. I hope this looks way better than before.

 

[Matthew]

Please suggest me in a kind way, not in a bad one. Thanks

It's been a LONG time since I've seen a team that requires me to bust out my red pen.
Well, here's an overview:

Modest Porygon-Z @ Choice Scarf
252 satt/252 speed/6 hp
Ice Beam
Thunderbolt
Dark Pulse
Tri Attack (Adaptability)
My own Creation(lol no). This is my main source of owning, this special sweeper gets 400+ speed and is incredibly strong.

Alright, overall the set doesn't look bad but in all honesty why use Pory-Z as a lead? He's better when you know the opponents team and better. So, instead of having him as your lead switch it with say a Lead Gengar or Lead... anything really.

A lead pokemon uses moves like these:

Pokemon @ Choice Item/Focus Sash/Leftovers/Wide Lens
Evs: Bulky or very fast
Nature: Depends on the pokemon
-Taunt/ Stealth Rock/ Explosion/ Hypnosis/ Set Up Move/ Attack Move/ Thunder Wave/ Trick/ Reflect/ Light Screen/ Healing move
-Taunt/ Stealth Rock/ Explosion/ Hypnosis/ Set Up Move/ Attack Move/ Thunder Wave/ Trick/ Reflect/ Light Screen/ Healing move
-Taunt/ Stealth Rock/ Explosion/ Hypnosis/ Set Up Move/ Attack Move/ Thunder Wave/ Trick / Reflect/ Light Screen/ Healing move
-Taunt/ Stealth Rock/ Explosion/ Hypnosis/ Set Up Move/ Attack Move/ Thunder Wave/ Trick / Reflect/ Light Screen/ Healing move

ONLY use Trick when you're holding a choice item. ONLY use Taunt on a pokemon that can outspeed other pokemon easily. Common set ups are:

-Taunt
-Set up move
-Attack
-Attack

-Taunt
-Light Screen
-Reflect
-Healing Move/Attack

-Stealth Rocks
-Healing move/Explosion
-Attack
-Attack

Jolly Infernape @ Life Orb
252 att/252 speed/6 hp
Thunderpunch
Stone edge
Flare Blitz
Close Combat

Physical attacker, speedy and meant to be an OHKOER. I put this as it can sweep much and it can take the weaknesses of Forry

Oh, boy... um alright here we go. FIRST don't put expert belt on Infernape Life Orb is pretty much what you're shooting for in the item spot. Though this set is ok, I would much rather you have say... a Mix Ape instead.

Infernape @ Life Orb
Naughty nature
232 Spe 252 SpAtk 24 Atk
- Nasty Plot
- Fire Blast/Flame Thrower
- Grass Knot/ Hidden Power [ICE]
- Close Combat

This is a walll breaker, it does get walled by a choice few pokemon (Salamence) but that's neither here nor there. It's a better set than what you're running.

Jolly Machamp @ Choice Scarf
252 att/ 244 speed/ 12 hp
Dynamicpunch (No Guard)
Thunderpunch
Ice Punch
Stone Edge

Physical Sweeper here. Choice Scarfed. This is a nice Machamp, it can OHKO many things with 1 or 2 Swords. No Guard>Guts for more accuracy

Your team lacks a HUGE status absorber (besides blissey, but she's no sleep absorber) so how about we Knock Off (heh) that Choice Scarf, give Machmap Rest and Sleep talk and we do this how it should be done. Also thanks to No Guard Hypnosis will always hit Machamp.


Machamp @ Leftovers
Adamant Nature
252 HP 252 Atk 6 Spe
No Guard
- Rest
- Sleep Talk
- Dynamic Punch
- Stone Edge/Ice Punch

You now have a fully capable sleep absorber that can dish out the damage as well.

Timid Gengar @ Wide Lens
252 spatk/252 speed/6 hp
Focus Blast
Thunderbolt
Shadow Ball
Hypnosis

Special Sweeper and Status here. Really good as it provides me resist against fighting types that pory and bliss need

Gengar would be better as a lead I'm going to be honest. Move him to the lead spot and pray hypnosis will give you the Sleep you want. That 60% Acc. isn't very nice.

Relaxed Forretress @ Leftovers
252 hp/162 att/96 def
Gyro Ball
Stealth Rock
Rapid Spin
Explosion

My Phisical wall. Its my Stealth Rocker too, and it can blow away with Rapid Spin. Gyro Ball for fast guys and Exposion when there is no way out

Your last two pokemon make baby jesus cry. Though it just might be personal bias of some sort, but seeing Blissey and Forretress just sends shivers down my spine. If you wanted a STRONG physical wall then go with Metagross, none of your pokemon really mind stealth rocks (besides Nape but he's taking a hit like a piece of paper would) so go with a Bulky-Meta and that would be great.

Metagross @ Leftovers
Adamant Nature
252 HP 252 Atk 6 Def
- Meteor Mash
- Earth Quake
- Ice Punch/Thunder Punch/Magnet Rise/Bullet Punch
- Ice Punch/Thunder Punch/Magnet Rise/Bullet Punch

I say magnet rise to make the most used move in the game, Earth Quake useless on a pokemon who is weak too it. Bullet Punch if fast pokemon like Skymin scare you. Ice punch of Dragons are the cause of your fear. Thunder Punch for waters and Gyarados's.

Bold Bliss @ Leftovers
252 hp/ 252 def/ 6 spdef
Counter
Toxic
Softboiled
Ice Punch/ Protect/ other

Special Wall here. Its a bit weird but it resists hits really well and with counte it owns many things if used correctly. The other move spot is unknown, as i dont know what to use

Ew....

May I suggest a pokemon that is not blissey? Bulky-Mence, when used in conjunction with Metagross you have every type covered by each of them. Allowing for easy switching and Intimidate.

Salamence @ Life Orb
Impish Nature
216 HP 252 Def 40 Spe
- Dragon Dance
- Roost
- Dragon Claw/Outrage
- Earthquake

This set can take hits from fighting types and fire types with ease and then can set up for a sweep. Dragon Claw if you don't feel safe getting locked into Outrage but other wise Outrage would be better.

Please rate from 0.00 to 10.00

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[locopoke]

Well, Gen pretty much took the words right out of my mouth. Although, personally I might go with a PZ that used Substitute and Nasty Plot to set up, not a Scarfed one. Also, You can use Forretress, but I suggest that he be your Lead, and have Gengar use a different set.

Gengar @ Black Sludge
Nature: Timid
EV's: 252 speed, 252 SpA, 6 HP
Moveset:
Focus Blast
Shadow Ball
Substitute
Destiny Bond/Hypnosis/Thunderbolt

Like Gen said, 60% acc isnt nice at all, so you may want to go with Destiny Bond.

 

[Raj]

Okay, this team needs a rehaul. For one, you're not taking advantage of Platinum updates. That's huge right now. Scizor rapes everything but Forry (who gets raped by my real weird LO Mild HP Fire Scizor lol). I hate dealing with absolutes- that being something that specializes at only one thing. Instead of using Blissey to take Sp. hits and Forry for Phys. hits, why don't you try sometning like Vaporeon who's moderately good at both, counters ScizoTran, and provides Wish support for a frail team.

Also, try a suicide lead that run Stealth Rock. Azelf is a great one because it's fast, gets a vital element on the field, destroys leads, and carries Explosion. Don't be afraid to get creative with sets- they tend to be the most effective. You know what I've been leading with? Semi-Bulky Sash Rampardos with SR, Rock Polish, Stone Edge, and Earthquake; it strange and thus works. SR 1st turn while the opponent (most likely) does the same, speed up, then destroy with Stone Edge and EQ (which hits Zong for a shitload because of Moldbreaker).

 

[locopoke]

Yeah, a Choice Scarf Trick/SR Azelf would really help your team out a lot as a lead.

 

[Fang]

Hmm..I see..Ill do some changes