need help, this is what i have so far.

[Broberto]

Jirachi: lvl 100

Nature: Adamant
Ability: Serene Grace
Item: Leftovers

IVs: 28 HP, 31 on everything else
EVs: 4 HP, 252 ATK, 252 SPD

Moveset: Ice Punch, Iron Head, Stealth Rock, U-Turn

Summary: A mix between the basic Stealth Rock Lead Jirachi, and Physical Mix Jirachi. Usually gets walled by something like Heatran or Infernape, advice here would be great.
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Lucario: lvl 100

Nature: Timid
Ability: Inner Focus
Item: Leftovers

IVs: 31 on everything
EVs: 4 HP, 252 SPD, 252 SPC.ATK

Moveset: Aura Sphere, Roar, Shadow Ball, Vacuum Wave

Summary: Basic special sweep Lucario with a roar thrown in just in case. Also if in a tight situation roar helps deal moderate damage to the opponents team as a whole with help from Jirachi's stealth rock.
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Dragonite: lvl 100

Nature: Quiet
Ability:Inner Focus
Item: Leftovers

IVs: 31 on everything
EVs: 252 ATK, 4 SPD, 252 SPC.ATK

Moveset: Draco Meteor, Earthquake, Extreme Speed, Flamethrower

Summary: The concept for my Dragonite doesn't go much beyond the idea of getting super-effective hits. But it seems to work quite well, walling teams that rely on Latias and Heatran.
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Blissey: lvl 100

Nature: Calm
Ability: Natural Cure
Item: Leftovers

IVs: 31 on everything
EVs: 252 Defense, 24 SPC.ATK, 234 SPC.DEF

Moveset: Grass knot, Softboiled, Thunderbolt, Toxic

Summary: Probably one of my most thought out pokemon, wrecks water type and flying type sweepers. And can usually give other stallers a run for their money.
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Arcanine: lvl 100

Nature: Jolly
Ability: Intimidate
Item: Leftovers

IVs: 31 on everything
EVs: 4 HP, 252 ATK, 252 SPD

Moveset: Crunch, Extreme Speed, Flare Blitz, Thunder Fang

Summary: Another pokemon i'm not quite satisfied with. It can't really stand up to anything in today's OU metagame. Basically a place holder till i find something better.
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Suicune: lvl 100

Nature: Bold
Ability: Pressure
Item: Leftovers

IVs: 17 ATK, 31 everything else
EVs: 4 HP, 252 DEF, 252 SPC.DEF

Moveset: Ice Beam, Rest, Sleep Talk, Surf

Summary: Basic Sleep Talking stall/wall. Used as a counter for most other stalls, and usually gets the job done. Hell it usually lasts longer than i expect, sweeped half a team once.
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advice anyone?

 

[Bartman101]

yeah, here's some advice, i know this is gonna get locked by haunter or something, so either quickly writesome descriptions (read the rules) or take my advice.
Thunder wave>Ice punch on Jirachi, 176 speed, 252hp, 80atk. works better, i use one myself.
If u want to stay special on luc go- Aura Sphere, Shadow Ball, Vacuum Wave and Close Comat for blissey. put the 4 evs into Atk and give it a Hasty or Naive nature.
Blissey- have Softboiled, Toxic, Ice Beam, thunderbolt. U have very good coverage with ur 2 attacks, u can poison walls and heall urself
Arcanine is outclassed in OU by heatran, you also lack a scarfer so go 4 standard scarf heatran
Heatran@choice scarf
252speed 252sp.a 4 atk
-Fire Blast
-Earth Power
-Dragon Pulse
-Explosion
Fire blast is Stab, Earth power 4 other trans and ground weak things, dragon pulse for dragons (dur) and explosion 4 special tanks like blissey.
I would change ur suicune to crocune with Calm Mind over Ice beam, as crocune works wonders and can sweep easily

Hope I helped,

Bartman101

 

[Broberto]

ok thanks for the advice, i'll try and edit in a description.
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OP Updated.

 

[Bloo]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

You need to improve on your descriptions. Have a look at some of the teams in the RMT archive to see what is expected. Try and stay away from 1-2 line descriptions; aim for at least 3-4. Explain why you chose a Pokemon, what it does, how does it contribute to the success of the team, etc. If you fix the descriptions properly, PM me the changes and I'll unlock your thread.