New team needs some changes

Status
Not open for further replies.
Alright here's the new team I made for the new OU:

dpmfa450.png

Hippodown @ Leftovers
Careful
4 Hp/252 Atk/252 Def
~Roar
~Slack-off
~Earthquake
~Crunch

Wanted some new Hippo that can actually fight something. Roar to keep pokemon from the normal Sdancing and such.

dpmfa395.png

Empoleon @ Petaya Berry
Modest
12 Hp/252 SpA/12 SpD/232 Spe
~Agility
~Substitute
~Surf
~Ice Beam

The standerd Empoleon special attacker. Protection from Hippodowns weaknesses and is very powerful.

479-heat.png

Rotom-h @ Choice Scarf
Timid
4 Hp/252 SpA/252 Spe
~Trick
~Thunderbolt
~Overheat
~Shadowball

Wanted to use a new pokemon and thought Rotom would be very helpful to this team.

dpmfa212.png

Scizor @ Life Orb
Adamant
4 Hp/252 Atk/252 Def
~Swords dance
~Bullet Punch
~Quick Attack
~Brick Break/Super Power

This Scizor is my potential physical sweeper and had very good defenses to help my other pokes.

Now here's the problem: the other to pokes were a choice banded Snorlax and a Physical sweeping Kingdra I need a pokemon to take out steels/fighting so I won't get beat by Lucarioa and a Special Wall. Any suggestions?
 
you might want to read the RMT rules.
This one:

rules said:
2. Do not post incomplete teams. If you're smart enough to pick five Pokemon, you can easily pick another one. If you're smart enough to pick nine, you can easily cut that down to six. Make sure to include natures, EV spreads and items. If you're unsure of your selections, make a note of this or simply add a question mark after them so team raters can help you focus on perceived problems first.
 
You are also in violation of:
Rule #3 said:
3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

This thread is locked under rules 2 and 3.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Back
Top