NITE TEAM

ultimateteam

1) INTRODUCTION​

Hello to all.​

I'm new on the forum and I write my first RMT.​

Can you criticize my team and advise to me.


2) CONSTRUCTION​

I wanted to play Dragonite, it's a very good sweeper, he is bulky with multiscale, has a very good movepool and an excellent double type.​





But he is counter by Terrakion, Scizor and Landorus. So I chose Rotom-W.​



Rotom has a problem with Chansey/Blissey, Lati@s, Breloom and Virizion. I must to have a counter : Scizor.​



Steel type blocked, the best counter is Magnezone.​



After, I want a great physical sweeper with a good speed : Landorus.​



For the last, I chose the lead, it wasn't difficult, I chose Deoxys-Speed.​

After with advices, I play Deoxys dual screener with Zor SD.

But, I had problems with Terrakion and Infernape and I haven't got a rapid spiner so I chose Starmie rapid spiner.

I can't switch on Rotom so I chose Celebi who replaces Landorus.

And for finish, I changed the set of Rotom because the choice scarfer is better.​




3) MOVE OF THE TEAM​




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Azelf@Focus Sash

Pressure
-Stealth Rock​
-U-turn

-Fire Blast
-Taunt
NATURE : Jolly(+Spe-SpA)
EV : 252 Spe, 252 SpA, 4 Def​



The second best lead after Deoxys-Speed. This set is for put Stealth Rock.
At first, if there are an other lead, I use Taunt. After, I put Stealth Rock. If it's a steel type, I use Fire Blast for ohko. Otherwise After have put Stealth Rock, I use U-turn.​

For moves, Fire Blast for ohko a lot of Steel type. U-turn for switch with damage.Taunt is for taunt adverse lead and Stealth Rock is for an easy sweep.​

For the repartition, 252 SpA for do damage. 252 Speed for a very fast Pokemon on the game. 4 in Def for the Physicaly bulk but It's not useful because It's just 4.​

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Scizor@Leftovers​

Technician​

-Sword Dance

-Bullet Punch
-Roost​

-U-turn
NATURE : Adamant(+Atk-SpA)​

EV : 252 Atk,236 HP, 20 Spee​

He is a very good sweeper and Technician is very useful with his very great Atk in more he has a very good type for sweep and bulk with these advantages, he is one on the most use in the metagame.This set is for the sweep. He revenge kill Landorus, Venusaur, Haxorus, Dragonite, Latios and a lot of another Pokemon. They are a problem for my team. With the barrier, he is very bulky and he can use 2 Sword Dance. After, he is a killer.

For moves, Sword Dance is for the boost. Bullet Punch is for revenge kil and the stab. U-turn is for scouting adverse team . Roost is for stay longer on the ground .​

For the repartition, 252 Atk for the sweep, 252 HP for the bulk and take place on bulky water type and 20 Spe for outspeed Jellicent and another Zor.




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Rotom-W@Choice Scarf​

Levitate​

-Volt Switch

-Hydro Pump
-Trick
-Hidden Power Ice​


NATURE : Timid(+Spe-Atk)
EV : 252 Spe, 252 SpA, 4 Def​

A big pillar of my team, Rotom-W. I think, he is the most reliabe choice scarfer in this role and in this team. He is really excellent. With Choice Scarf,he takes care of a lot of dangerous Pokemon for the team. He kills Landorus, Dragonite and Tornadus. He is too a good counter for Scizor. I use it for Rain team. He shapes the best core with Scizor with U-turn and Volt Switch. They scout a lot.

For moves, Volt Switch is for scouting adverse team with Scizor and Landorus and It's the first stab. If Dragonite uses Outrage, I use Volt Switch for switch on Scizor.Hydro-Pump is the second stab. Ground Type are not affected by Volt Switch but they can take Hydro-Pump. Trick is for stallers. Hidden Power Ice for revenge kill Nite in +1 in speed.

For the repartition, 252 Speed because It's a choice scarfer, 252 Atk for the sweep and 4 Def for Bulk. His nature is Timid because It's a choice scarfer.​



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Starmie@Life Orb
Natural cure

-Rapid Spin
-Hydro-Pump
-Thunderbolt
-Recover​


NATURE : Timid(+Spe-Atk)
EV : 4 HP, 252 SpA, 252 Spe​

The rapid spiner of my team. Stealth Rock are a problem for Nite.With his great speed, he can revenge kill too.​

For moves,Rapid Spin for spin,Hydro-Pump for a powerfull stab. Thunderbolt for the coverage with hydro-pump.Recover for stay on the ground.​

For the repartition, 4 HP for a little bulk, 252 SpA for the power and 252 Speed for outspeed all metagame. The nature Timid is for the speed.​



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Celebi@Life orb
Natural cure
-U-turn
-Hiden Power Fire

-Earth power
-Recover​

NATURE : Naive(+Spe-SpD)
EV : 36 Spe, 252 SpA, 220 HP​

He is a good sweeper with his SpA. He scouting adverse team with U-turn. He is an excellent switch on Rotom.​

For moves, U-turn for scouting adverse team with Scizor and Rotom. Hiden Power Fire for the coverage. Earth Power for fire type with a great power. Coverage for stay on the ground.​

For the repartition, 36 EVs in Speed for have a good speed. 252 SpA for have a good sweep and 220 EVs in HP for the bulk.​

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Dragonite@Lum Berry

Multiscale
-Dragon Dance
-Outrage
-Fire Punch​

-Roost
NATURE : Jolly(+Spe-SpD)​

EV : 252 Spe, 252 Atk, 4 HP​

The biggest pilar of my team, my finisher. He is a very good sweeper. In October, He is the most use in Smogon's server. He is my favourite Pokemon. He hasn't got a really counter except Skarmory(he is trappe by Magnezone). Even Steel Type takes a lot of Damage in Outrage.
He can do Dragon Dance on all pokemon of Pokemon even Ice Type with Multiscale. He is too a very good Staller. He can take a lot of Atack and use Roost after. In more, he has Dragon Dance so he is a monster. He takes care of Clorophyller on Sun Team.he is too a very great wall breaker counterpart the match. With Dragonite, I can have 6-0.​

For moves, Dragon Dance for boost, he can place everywhere. Outrage for a power Stab. Fire Punch for Steel Type, with Outrage, he touches all except Heatran. Roost for stall and reactivate Multiscale.​

For the repartition, 252 Speed for have a good speed after Dragon Dance, 252 atk for the sweep. 4 HP for the bulk.​



5) WITH CLIMATE AND SHELLPASS​

For Rain offense :​

Deoxys puts Stealth Rock and uses Superpower on Politoed. When Deoxys is ko I use motisma for revenge kill Politoed(except if he switches). If there are electrics types I use Landorus. Toxicroak too. For Azuramill I use Volt Switch with Rotom-W. Scizor is counter by Rotom-W.Dragonite is ohko by Hidden Power Ice.But Rotom-W is such a pain, I can just do my Rotom-W and Landorus if it's not a scarf so there are easy except with Rotom-W Choice Scarfer.​


For Rain stall :​

Ferrothorn and Forretress are trappe by Magnezone. After trappe, I use substitute and I boost with Charge Beam. Rotom takes care of Politoed. Landorus uses earthquake for Tentacruel. Dragonite tank takes Hidden Power Ice by Landorus or Rotom. Jellicent is pursuit by Scizor. For Chansey/Blissey I use Superpower of Scizor. For Latias I Pursuit.​

For SS offense :​

Scizor revenge kill him with Bullet Punch. Landorus takes Hydro-Pump by Motisma or Hidden Power Ice by Rotom. Gliscor too.​

For SS stall :​

Hippowdown is ohko by Hydro-Pump. Gliscor too. Jellicent takes Volt Switch. Ferrotorm is ohko by hp fire of Celebi. Chansey/Blissy take bullet punch on +2 or +4 by Scizor.​

For Sun:
Dragonite with fire punch kills grass types. Celebi does a lot of damage with hp fire.​

For BP(and shellPass):
I use volt switch for Gorebyss. I can switch on Celebi.But It's hard to counter.​

6) THE END​

It's finished.​
 
Some of your grammar is off. Will leave a full rate if you include more detail on your mindset while using this team (aka discriptions)
 
le quag first off. You have no good thing to stop quagsire form slowly killing everything. Trick is not reliable enough and a good player will give it to something else like politoed
 
If you run Jolly on Landorous, HP Grass will be almost useless. Since it is not meant to take hits, just switch and run, try running a -def + spd or -sdef + spd nature.
 
HP grass on Landorus is useless regardless. Run hp ice for Gliscor and to revenge kill weakened dragons. EQ in sandstorm already 2hkos Quaggy and Gastrodon. Gliscor will give this team massive troubles, maybe try HP ice on Magnezone too to surprise it when you're behind your sub. HP fire isn't necessary when you have charge beam and substitute to set up on Ferrothorn.
 
trick >tbolt on rotom, already have volt switch. then hp fire on it because you already have 2 ice users and will check ferrothorn who otherwise walls it.
 
He's your only revenge killer against dragons +1 speed/scarf, i think he's useful. You could change rotom-w item, scarf isn't good nowadays, maybe leftover+wow is better.
 
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